Wow. Just... Wow. So Cadence's solution to believing her husband is cheating on her, is to have revenge-sex via seducing the boyfriend of her best friend, who had nothing to do with any of this. I have to admit, that is probably the single biggest 'dick-move' response I could think of for this situation.
Welp, there goes any sympathy I may have had for Cadence. Now EVERYBODY'S AN ASSHOLE in this Love Triangle (or does Flash make this a Love Square now?)
At this point, I'm hoping this all ends with Twilight bitch-slapping some sense into all of these morons, before unceremoniously dumping Flash (out a window, with both wings broken).
4652628 This, pretty much straight through. Especially since she has no proof he IS cheating!
Seriously Cady. What would you do now if Shining were to walk in to apologize for the fight and provide a truthful explanation - say that he'd had doubts, but wanted to make it work, and hadn't been cheating?
We know he was, but seriously. She doesn't.
Though I wish Flash weren't always pretty much portrayed as scum. I have this horrible feeling that Cadance is going to go throw Flash's infidelity into Twi's face as some warped punishment for not helping her.
Oh man, Shining's and Cady's marriage is completely ruined. At one point you could say that one is right and one is wrong, but clearly we've past that point looong time ago. More or less, they're both at least a bit assholes to each other, aren't they? They both need to find proper happiness somehow.
But honestly though, no one likes a workaholic. Shining go get Luna, she's the one for you! And Cadence, ehm. Suffer couple years of work stress and after a complete breakdown marry someone you like?
I'm afraid I'm gonna have to disapprove of this story due this chapter. I feel that Camdamce's actions are reprehensible and Flash sentry complying with them even under his intentions of securing a better life for him and twilight is completely short sighted. I have enjoyed the story of so far due to the interesting story line, examination of the relationship of shinning armor, exploring the lives of the royal characters and developing shinning armor, but this chapter leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
4658189 Howdy there! Co-author here. The next chapter will explain WHY Flash did what he did. Short sighed, it may look like that. But in this story, there is ALWAYS an answer. And as for Shining and Luna...well you'll also see. :3 Because now we're back at the beginning of the story, where the real story begins...
Wow. Just... Wow. So Cadence's solution to believing her husband is cheating on her, is to have revenge-sex via seducing the boyfriend of her best friend, who had nothing to do with any of this. I have to admit, that is probably the single biggest 'dick-move' response I could think of for this situation.
Welp, there goes any sympathy I may have had for Cadence. Now EVERYBODY'S AN ASSHOLE in this Love Triangle (or does Flash make this a Love Square now?)
At this point, I'm hoping this all ends with Twilight bitch-slapping some sense into all of these morons, before unceremoniously dumping Flash (out a window, with both wings broken).
4652628
This, pretty much straight through. Especially since she has no proof he IS cheating!
Seriously Cady. What would you do now if Shining were to walk in to apologize for the fight and provide a truthful explanation - say that he'd had doubts, but wanted to make it work, and hadn't been cheating?
We know he was, but seriously. She doesn't.
Though I wish Flash weren't always pretty much portrayed as scum. I have this horrible feeling that Cadance is going to go throw Flash's infidelity into Twi's face as some warped punishment for not helping her.
Oh man, Shining's and Cady's marriage is completely ruined. At one point you could say that one is right and one is wrong, but clearly we've past that point looong time ago. More or less, they're both at least a bit assholes to each other, aren't they? They both need to find proper happiness somehow.
But honestly though, no one likes a workaholic. Shining go get Luna, she's the one for you!
And Cadence, ehm. Suffer couple years of work stress and after a complete breakdown marry someone you like?
Agreed v
4652534 expect flame twi to make an appearance soon.
Ok... seems like they will definitely break the marrige, not bad ^^
I'm afraid I'm gonna have to disapprove of this story due this chapter. I feel that Camdamce's actions are reprehensible and Flash sentry complying with them even under his intentions of securing a better life for him and twilight is completely short sighted. I have enjoyed the story of so far due to the interesting story line, examination of the relationship of shinning armor, exploring the lives of the royal characters and developing shinning armor, but this chapter leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
4658189 Howdy there! Co-author here. The next chapter will explain WHY Flash did what he did. Short sighed, it may look like that. But in this story, there is ALWAYS an answer. And as for Shining and Luna...well you'll also see. :3 Because now we're back at the beginning of the story, where the real story begins...
4661096 okay. I appreciate the reply and I apologize for my rant, rough day took it out on the story, I will definitely check out the next chapter.
4657840 Thanks for the idea. :3
WAIT! Now Flash is...
DUDE YOU will ANGER not only an Alicorn BUT THE WORLD TRAVELING, EVIL DEFEATING, HEROIC POWER OF MAGIC!
Next Chapter, FRY Flash, Cadence clearly has no brains at this point.
Wow, did Cadance get shit on in this story.
Shining, elope with Amity. All these bitches be cray-cray.