• Published 28th May 2014
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my life wouldnt be the same without her - RAINBOWRenee01



discord loves fluttershy and fluttershy loves discord, but they both dont know that they love eachother. what will happen, will they get together in love and harmony, or will it end sadly and break there friendship, what will happen.....

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the future

Once Discord and Fluttershy were married they waited 2 months and finally had 2 ADORABLE little twins
One was a girl and one was a boy.
The baby girl had purple hair with some white swirls, her eyes where purple with white swirls they named her 'Screwball'
The baby boy was the same but had black hair with white pieces and red eyes with white swirls they called him 'chaotix'.
They were the cutest little ones you ever layed eyes on, but not when they're hyper but still, fluttershy and discord loved their children very much and wanted them both to be happy growing up.

The others were fine
Twilight rules a kingdom of her own, Applejack and Spike got married, Rainbowdash dates Soarin, Rarity still makes dresses but with a little help from her new hubby Fancypants, Pinkie pie has been traveling around the world with Cheese sandwich and last of all 3 special little filly's finally got their cutiemark's!! That's right Appleblooms a right little fashionista, scootaloo can ride her scooter and Sweetiebelle can sing!!
But even though all of them are far apart they're still The elements of harmony and they always will be.



THE END

Author's Note:

Sorry it's short I promise I'll make a sequel ok?

Comments ( 24 )

EDITOR.

Luz

I swear to god if that cover art gets smaller I'll lose my shit

Title lacks capitalisation, chapter names too, errors with "i'm", and errors with commas. The 'Grammar Nazis' are going to tear you apart.

My name is Discord and I swear I don't love Fluttershy.

4458508 OMG I read all your stories ur AWSOME thank you so much this means a lot :twilightsmile:

4458590 I'm my dreams u do and also discords my pony waifu

4458161 thank you this is my first time, but if disneyfanatic ever read my story I'd Fangirl forever:pinkiehappy:
Some of my favourite writers have already read it and I'm sooo happy

4458454 wow thanks for the feedback...
I guess...:derpytongue2:

It's cute. I love it.:raritystarry:

I loved the story ( partly because I'm a FlutterCord fan) and when I saw there was going to be a promised sequel I could barley control my self ''yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes''

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1:heart:

Ok. Critique time.
Check for grammar and punctuation errors.
Overall, I really liked it. I can't wait for the sequel. :)
I am using emoticons since I am on my phone.

4832706 dude sorry I have a dream:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttershbad:

4458590 That's what you always say in the stories... and it NEVA WORKS

Disney Fanatic ships! Yes! I love her ships THANK YOU for using AppleSpike! :twilightsmile:
And yay for a sequal!

5708315 Shoot them (hi) a PM, or private message. Click the mail thingie at the top of the screen, then hit Send PM. If you've ever sent an email before, I think you'll know what to do. :pinkiehappy:

Right. Overall I'd say your fic was cute but cringe worthy, and what I enjoyed most was complaining about it. But hey, all musicians start off learning hot cross buns, so there's hope for you yet.

I hope there is a sequel

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