"To call me a nerd would be an understatement." ~ Friend of mine
A talk. Face to face. Draconeques to pony. Friend to friend. It shouldn't be a problem, right? Well, maybe not why you have the word shy in your name. To the backstory to the present, what to say on a date, and what to do. Well, improve or get advice Fluttershy! I am just a narrator.
Authors Note: Idea I couldn't get out of my head. I hate myself for writing this. Kat might too.
BTW: Bit of Crossover. In a way.
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Not bad so far. Its a okay story
an okay story, a bit fast paced, but overall good so far.
I finished reading my newspaper and lowered my glasses before looking at the author. "So, when's your next chapter?" I asked, interested. "And more importantly, how many pancakes fit on your roof?
I wanna know what happens next!
3943367 OMC OMC It's you!!! You are so awesome!!!!
I have such a bad headache now.
SOOOOOOOOOO cool :D
I HOOOOOOOOOPE she takes Discord
that would make sense after all
in the musical she choose Raoul (or whatever) and i think (I HOPE) here she coose the Phantom ^^
You made slight mistakes with the lyrics, but it was still sweet!
4185686 I used the original 1986 lyrics which are different. It's weird.
Thanks for the comment though. 
BTW, the reason I hated myself for writing this is because a few months ago, I told myself I wouldn't ship Fluttercord. Look where I am now!
Their*
The story itself is interesting, but the dialoge is a bit...um, rushed? Sudden?
I like it.
Aww
They're getting married
Poor AJ
4205393 yeah look where you are now
Did Twilight forget to tell Celestia.Luna,Cadance,and Shining about Fluttershy and Discord being together
AWWW! So sweet!
4302182 Should I seperate the next chapters with foals into a sequel?
Oh god, "The music of the night" :D I swear, I know absolutely every song from "The Phantom of The Opera" by words and tune. I can reenact the whole freakin' thing and it all started from the fanfic "Opera Phantom Discord"
SEAQUEL
4312131 Working on it. Should be out later today or Thursday at the latest with its first chapter
Can't wait for the sequel.
THAT WAS EPIC can't what for sequel
Okay, the sequel, at the latest, the first chapter, will be out by the end of the school year. My school, since it snowed so much, get out in the middle of June, like the 19th or something. So please try to be patient.
4298926 Yep, Twilight's a very busy pony.
Rarity's exist felt... really awkward. I mean, her friend is dealing with some major emotional strife and she's just "welp gtg ttyl" and everyone follows without asking if she'll be okay or anything.
o hay maud. xD
Wait, what? What about Fluttershy being torn between them and everything? How was that resolved? This timeskip seems to skip over a lot of the conflict that was set up previously.
Lovin' it Crash! Keep up the good work!
Okay, prepare for some "criticism" in 3...2...1...
GO!
Okay, so first of all, this was an "okay" story. But! I didn't actually want to really read after I started chapter 2. I only got to the part when Fluttershy gets salad all over her. The title "A Secret Story?" I could see that you had some troubles thinking of something. The writing got OOC in the first chapter! I really think you should go in and add italics for emphasis. Plus, you should make Discord and Fluttershy a bit more like themselves. Fluttershy doesn't really just go up to her friends and ask something. She's usually more shy. And the play part in the story should be a bit more detailed. Discord should be a bit more humorous and unfeeling. A little bit more chaotic in a way? You need more detail, that's what will get you further in your stories. Ask for help from an editor, friend, or fellow fictioner (Yes, I did just make that word up! :D)
Action will always do some good. A bit of some exaggeration is okay! Plus, the chapter (especially this one) needs more parts to it. Try to pause at the most suspenseful parts you can. Now, I'm not making fun or being mean, I am trying to help you get better! I was kinda like this when I first came here, no more than a month ago! But if you let people help you, you will be much better in your writing! Go ask Disney Fanatic herself, I needed tons of help with editing my first chapters!
But anyways, please try to get some more verbs and stuff in there. To put more parts in, just put this when you have time between parts.
0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0
or
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See? Easy. Now go and write some more! :D
Cattoy10 really I am in love with the phantom of the opera and the phantom discord I actually have a crush on discord and the phantom from the 2004 movie witch you are talking about
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I think you should make a sequel with their foals
No. Way.
who sent her spam?