Fluttershy and Discord are close friends, but both want to be so much more until a strange fox comes into the mix. What will Discord do when he discovers Fluttershy has become a target for some dangerous creatures?
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I like it
, I won't to see were this is going please update soon
Ha! Rarity's Hair is pink!
This is cute! I like your interactions between everyone. Your strength is definitely keeping true to the characters, especially Pinkie Pie and Discord, in my opinion. Fluttershy and Rarity too. Okay, pretty much all of them!
There are some grammar errors and run-ons, but if you slow down just a bit and look it over, you can check it over and ask yourself "Does this sound natural? Does it sound like it's supposed to if it were a published work?" But good job, nonetheless!
Hahaha rarity with pink hair and watch out discord and fluttershy LISTEN TO ANGLE
4510253 Thank you so much I hope you like the next chapter
4510255 I thought it might be fun to mess with Rarity lol Thanks for commenting and checking out my story
4510507 Thank you for the critique it is really helpful and I will be going back through this I just really wanted to get it up before I went to work.
Thanks!
4510798 Yes they should lol
Thanks for commenting!
dat cover art though...
i still cant get over fluttershy's face.
Dat Fox is *dramatic gasp* EVIL
Can I KILL it?!?!
Omg discord to the rescue again. Stupid Timberwolves. And why can't they get out or is it just discord that can't
can't what for the next chapter, what will happen to discord?
Noooooo I can not believe it ended that way and I thought discord would stay up because of his thought of the whole thing was a trap for fluttershy
CUUUUUTE! Squee! Your writing is improving! There are some grammar errors, but you can learn all about those more as you write. The more you write, the more you will improve. And the quilt idea was beyond adorable!
I also loved Discord's hand almost becoming its own entity and giving messages to Discord, I could totally see that happening! Thanks for the update!
Omg that was a good chapter maybe not as good as the last though
more please
DON'T TRUST DAH FUCKING FOX
ISH EVIL
I CAN TORTURE IT IF USED WANT
4542725 you seriously just made my day with that comment lol thank you
I NEVER TRUSETED THAT FOX
CAN I TOURTUER IT PLEASE
AND I THOUGHT THEY TRUSTED DISCORD SAVE FOR ANGEL
EVERYONE KNOWS HE HATES DISCORD
4543195 I think they do to an extent but anytime a loved one is involved people tend to get a bit protective at least that's how I was seeing the situation
I'll do my best to portray that better in the story. Oh and thank you so much I love to hear your thoughts on my story it helps me improve and I just love to hear them lol
4534446 Your wish is my command
4543903 your welcome I never really hold back but I also don't want to be mean. You see I,m more like fluttershy then any pony else and every body that watches mlp at school even says so. I can't be mean and say no I always say yes even if I don't want to I never want to hurt anyponys feelings. U know?
4544158 I completely understand because I'm much the same way. Which is why I love fluttershy do much, I can relate to her. Although I'm not that great with animals lol
4544438 well not everyone can but here's something that can work great on animals
1= do not show them fear
2= stick your hand out so the animal can smell it so it does not attack u thinking Ut there to hurt it
3=let them make the first move then be kind and loving
4= send them love
OMG I WANT TO GO THERE . Anyways SUPER DOUPER JOB. SO MUCH CANDY
4561320 thank you! Love your comments but this is just a warm up trust me you don't want to go here muahaha
4562207 OK but I just meant the candy part
The fox is the master of the timberwolves?!?!
I was reading it and was reminded of my evil character, Status. I don't know why but the fox just reminded me of him like most characters. The only difference between the two is that Status would never make it into My Little Pony for........ deadly and creepy reasons. Oh and.... EVIL DA FOX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The best of places always turns into the worst of places except for Equestria... sometimes.
Ehh good story but theres a lot of grammar mistakes and lack of commas. "Your" its not the same as "You're"
*slow clap*
4608543 um is this good or bad ? I hope it wasn't too disappointing
4609040
are you kidding?!
IT WAS AMAZINGforums.accuweather.com/uploads/post-28288-1402138016.gif
4609123 oh my god thank you so much I guess I'm a little slow lol I'm so lad you like t. Hopefully next chapter will be up by tomorrow morning(:
4609131
awesome!
cant wait!!!!!
And
wow such a great story can't wait to read on
Aw, so cute!!! I wonder what it is that's going after Fluttershy? Very intriguing. I'll have to wait for the next chapter! Your editing is getting better, there were less problems in this one with grammar. Keep it up, and you'll improve even more!
AWSOME HAHA so funny and poor discord I hate those timber wolves. Also sorry I did not read it sooner have been super busy
4612929
pshh thats fine as long as you like it besides I only just posted this chapter today lol I might not be able to get the next chapter up till monday though 
Sooooooo sweet aand my fav line has to be 'hmmmm you seem very close to this deconiquse
I can't wait for the next chapter please updata soon
This is gold right here
I can't wait for the next chapter of this! 
YES A NEW UPDATE and twilight obsesively looking for fluttershy just like in that one part of bride of discord and i just got the chills just reading this chapter
Aw come on when is the other chapter(s) coming this is a great storie I know I say that to every one but I think every ones stories that I've read should be equally great.
I love it , can't wait for the next update.
aw man
Discord, you can never win to an adorable fox. Believe me I've tried, he won 20 bits off me!