• Published 19th Apr 2014
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Battle: Equestria - humansbeatponies123



When Equestria deems humans unworthy to live, they make a grave mistake.

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New story in the making!

Hiya! Its me, the guy who wrote this story. Thank you all who made this story a huge hit! My goal was at least 30 likes, and here I am with 77. I am sorry about the ending, but I had a hot date that night, and I was excited and rushed a little. Anyway, my next story is currently in the making. It is a Mount and Blade crossover, and this time, humans and ponies will ally (not without a battle first SPOILER ALERT) and not be enemies. For those who don't know what Mount and Blade is, look it up. I will also have a chapter that explains it. Until then, FIND OTHER STORIES TO READ, ITS A STORY WEBSITE! Anyways, happy reading! Now for a closing song with no credits what so ever. :)

Comments ( 16 )

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Actually, I'm not

Comment posted by Rated R-Superstar deleted Nov 21st, 2014

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Nah, not good enough.
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ytWz0qVvBZ0
This is more like "we are going on interdimensional war, don't fuck up nuclear stations while we are out". It is not perfect, of course, and needs to be more war-themed, but still looks more like what humans could sing together.

You need to fix some moments in "Battle of Russia". First - RF army use AGS series automatic grenade launchers, not M32. Second - a quite common mistake, AK-47 is not being used anymore by Russian armed services. They use AKM and AK-74M (both are getting out of date now, will be removed soon), AKSU, AK-12, AEK-971 (A-545), AK-9 (stealth modification (flameless and soundless)), ASH-12, APS (underwater), SR-3 (Vihr), AN-94, A-91, 9A-91 (modified version, dated by 1995) (differs from A-91, it's 2 different firearms) assault rifles. And RF, of course, no longer use Katyusha's. Even Grad's are outdated now. I'm a weapon geek, so that was quite a big mistake for me. )))

P.S. If you need more info about weapons for your future stories, you can always ask me ^^.

GIVE US A LINK TO THE NEW STORY
please:fluttercry:

To me it sounded like a 9 year old wrote it. But still giving a like.

I only comment on the last chapter of the "story" xP

oh wait...

Celestia damn it Pip

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Wow I'm surprised someone commented on my 2 year old post lol

Why weren't the griffons and changelings involved in this?

Comment posted by Carlos621521 deleted March 7th

Battle: Los Angeles Parody is Battle: Equestria. If the Humans will won to stop evil equestrians Celestia she's start war. equestria it belongs to humans, the equestrian has been defeated and surrender and that's the end.

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