Prologue: The Arrival
Intro video (for your enjoyment)
It has been one year since we have one. We thought we were the best. The biggest, baddest force on the planet. We thought no one could stop us, and that we were a force to be reckoned with. That was tested by aliens.... We struggled, we fought, and we thought we had lost. But then, the tides changed. A squad of brave men and women were able to take the mother ship down. We killed all of em son of bitches, and sent em away. We proved to the world nothing would stop us. Not even a technology that was way advanced from us. But we never expected magic to come into play..........
Location: Canterlot
Date: Unknown
Time: Unknown
Celestia was sitting in her throne. She was wait for her scientists to get back to her. They have discovered a new species, called humans. After seeing all they have been through, from the Ancient Greeks to the American Revolution, to World War I and II, to 9/11 and Iraq, they have deemed humans un-worthy to live. Suddenly, a scientist ran in.
"Celestia! Celestia!"
"What is it?"
"The portal is ready. We suggest we get all of our guards ready."
"I agree, go get the Elements of Harmony, and get my guards."
"Yes your highness."
"Listen up my little ponies. I have found a species called "humans" who live on a planet "Earth." I saw their past, and it has been war. Nonstop wars." Twilight spoke out of the crowd.
"What kinds of wars?"
"They fight among their own species. Their whole world has been at war with each other. TWICE." There were gasps around the room and an 'eep' from Fluttershy. "I am going to go speak with their leaders today. I will try to convince them to let us convert them into us. If they say no, we will do it by force...."
"Why must we fight them?"
"Because, all they do is fight. They never seem to get along. I thought if we went and turned them into us, they could live a happier life. Also, they are very dangerous. Another life form that looks like large bugs that would come from the Ever-free Forest invaded them. Their military came in and took them away. If they find a way to travel to other civilizations, they could not be stopped, ever. That is why we must put an end to this human race!"
3rd person PoV
Location: White House
President Wright sat at his desk. He was soon going to give a speech since it was the day humans sent the 'aliens away.' He sighed. He did not finish making the cards for his speech due to tensions with North Korea. He could not tell the people they were on the brink of World War III. Then, a secret service agent came in.
"Mr. President, they are ready for you." The president sighed again. "Mr. President, I know you are stressed, with everything going on with North Korea, but today is a day of joy. The speech will only take about 2 minutes, then you are done for the day. Lets go." The president and the agent stepped outside to witness a ton of people. The media was everywhere. People cheered widely for the president as he waved. Then he cleared his throat and the people became quite. Then he began.
"My fellow Americans. Today is a day where we stood united. Before the aliens came, we were at war. Nations stood on their own. Thousands dying everyday. We were a mess. But when the aliens came, the world stood, united, against a common foe. We proved even though we fight every so often, when we come under a threat that could destroy with world, and if we come under a threat yet again, we can and will, stand United. God bless you all, and may god bless these, United States of America." The media was taking pictures like crazy, and the people were cheering. The president smiled, maybe this day will be full of joy.
Location: Canterlot
"Let me go through the portal to talk to this so called "President."
Location: White House, still the president is standing where he gave his speech
The president was still waving, but then, out of no where, a bright light shined. And then it left. And there stood a pony, white, sun on its 'rear end,' with wings and a unicorn horn. The people stood their, stunned while the military aimed it's weapons at the pony while the Secret Service ran up in front of the president. The white one cleared it's throat, and began to speak.
"Humans of Earth! My name is Princess Celestia! I come from a land called Equestria. I have come here to offer you freedom!" The crowd began to mutter to them self's, doesn't she know this was the 'Land of the FREE?' "I know you think you are free from those so called 'British,' however, you are not free from yourselves! You all keep going to war with each other! I offer you a chance to become one of my ponies. We live in peace and harmony. Almost no crime. And you will live a longer and happier life!" The president heard enough of this.
"Now hold on one damn minute...." The princess was stunned, she had never had anyone swear to her! "If you think you can just come in and change us all into 'ponies,' you are wrong. I will not allow you to convert us! That would be false peace! We fight for a cause! We will not allow you to convert us! You can though, over our dead bodies!"
"Very well," said the princess as she jumped back into the portal and it closed.
Canterlot
"Sister, did the humans see reason?" Celestia had a sad look and sighed.
"They did not sister, get all the guards and the elements ready. We are going to attack and force them to be one of us. And they will see reason once humanity and it's evil ways are gone from this universe....
White House
"Mr. President, are you alright?"
"No."
"Then what is the matter?"
"Today was supposed to be a day of joy, now it may turn into a fight for the survival of humanity once more...."
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Meh, another TCB-like story with completly OoC cast, boring.
4258857 When you said TCB-like story. I have to agree with you.
Well interesting story idea, keep going
What is tcb?
But the summary sounds awesome
What is tcb?
But the summary sounds awesome
Its when ponies try to convert humans into ponies and the humans fight back.
I like the concept of this, and am very interested in how this story will go. However, a story like this feels as though it is rushed. If I were you, I would at least give it another run; add in some more text, give a reason why Celestia would invade earth after the events of Battle: Los Angeles (my favorite movie, btw), introduce more of the ponies instead of just dialogue. Hope this helps
Thanks! It does alot! By the way, I am a very big fan of your story "No Better Friend, No Worse Enemy." It was Favorited on my other account "Battlefieldpony."
Not all men wants to go to war....
John F. Kennedy
Bertrand Russell
Ernest Hemingway
Ernest Hemingway
H. G. Wells
Excellent...
Okay, what Celestia has done is(or are):
1. Pissing of the most powerful country on Earth
2. Making some speeches about
but in the process creating another war which from my point of view makes her no different from somebody like Hitler(she forced all humans to be assimilated into ponies which is kind of (almost) the same thing that Hitler did)
3. Being absolute *cough* bitch
4.(This is a bit personal) That bitch, told us, to be one of her subject, to be ruled by someone who's in power because of what she is NOT because of the people choose her and furthermore, meddling with someone else's business, threatening them without any clear reason, forcing her will to the people of this world, and went to war with the people that has been waging wars for more than 8000 years and recently beaten an alien invasion.
If you're opening a draft to fight of this whore, then I'm you're first volunteer
*My Cousin*
For Celestia:
"When man decided that all means are permitted to fight an evil, then their good become indistinguishable from the evil they set out to destroy"
normaly i love ponies but when they try to fuck with the humans..... bitch ill cut rainbows wings off with my bare hands.
oh boy another CB like story.
ew.
unoriginal, boring, and predictable
Storie is..meh. Not that bad not that good. Ive seen way WAAYYY worse stories than this.
I really just makes me wish there was a sequel to Battle: LA cause that movie was so much fun for me to watch.
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The movie was meh-ish for me, to much general bravado and it felt like it ignored reality.
With movies like that and Battleship (which interestingly came out around the same time, I think) it just felt like they were trying to cash in on Independence Day like 10 years after it came out by making a land and naval version of it, which to me just screams that Hollywood is running out of ideas.
There's actually sequels to Battle:L.A in production and hopefully will arrive in cinemas in late 2014/2015
4259385 No battle ship came out later. The movie that came out with Battle LA at the same time was one called Skyline. Which I think the Skyline studio got sued because they used some kind of software that belonged to the other studio....idk legal stuff.
I didn't say it was citizen kane. I just said it was fun to watch.
I knew what I was getting into when I bought my ticket/the dvd and I got exactly what I paid for. Considering how many movies these days just buttfuck a simple concept its really refreshing to see a movie that just gives you exactly what you paid for and does it good enough to keep you entertained.
But I can understand if you don't like it. We all have our own tastes and that's just fine.
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Right, Skyline; my bad.
Yea, it was impressive to watch, but I've gotten a habit of becoming greatly annoyed when the plots doesn't add up. Like Battle LA and BB were just so... small for a real alien invasion, and it didn't really feel all the world-threatening. In both we're in danger of losing what, LA and Hawaii? In Independence Day the aliens basically nuked every major city on Earth in the first attack, and Pacific Rim (for lack of a better example) showed the aliens getting bigger and endlessly attacking everywhere. The aliens in the former mentioned movie just didn't feel that world-threatening; more akin to the monsters that hide in your closet.
It feels like the Michael Bay syndrome striking.
4259526 Well in battle LA it is alluded to that the aliens do not really care about us as most of the invasion points are in zones near water. And in one scene a scientist is seen saying something about the water level decreasing and that the aliens seem to use it to power their ships or biomechanical bodies.
So they weren't really an invasion force, more of a planetary raiding party. Which in itself is abit horrifying, our little world would utterly die if they stole enough of our water and that's probably why they fought us so that there would be nothing to stop them from stealing the water.
Another reason Celestia is a tyrant.
All hail the Lunar Republic
Oddly enough i am rooting for the humans
Loved this movie (and was actually thinking of doing a crossover myself...) so I know I'm going to like this!
Let the humans show their might with bullets and beer!
Kill em all!!!!
Can't wait to see Celestia get her arse handed to her, but I hate shining more....
Oh hey look, here is a species that has been in a constant state of war since the very beginning of their existence, also, they have just recently beaten a very advanced alien civilization in only one battle!
The only logical course of action is to declare war on them.
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Poor, Poor Celestia, now she shall see the ultimate destruction courtesy of the Red, White, and Blue (You have no idea how long I wanted to say that)
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Or the Russian Army
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Or the PLA
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And the EU's members that have a military
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Children that read this: Remember to never declare war against humanity, it never ends well for both sides (let's just hope to God they avoid the use of Nuclear Detterrence lest we see the Mutual assured destruction theory in the process)
Dear Princess Celestia and Equestria,
You're Fucked.
- South Park Fan
4261370 Don't forget if worse comes the worst, we'll nuke 'em
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4260949 and VODKA!!
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Jeez, lets just hope we send it through the portal to Equestria
4261507 Oh man how could I forget about the vodka.
4259026
Thank you so much
4259578
Then why did they decide to start murdering us? Something might've been worked out. There's frozen water on Mars, isn't there? Why not use that.
I want you guys to have some input on this story. What locations do you want battles on earth to happen?
4262891 Itd probably be best if we took this to private messaging so we didn't take up space on the comments.
I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
I enjoy the Humanity Fuck Yeah, but the pacing and general writing was pretty bad.
Welp the ponies are fucked. Ron paul has something to say.
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HEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEHHEHHEEHHEEEHEH... infiltrate the portal and nuke Equestria, humans! Strike them in the heart!
Celestia picked the wrong day to mess with America......biggest mistake yet
Give up and become us said celestia. really your threating me the most powerful being and also a hybrid of an alicorn and human I can also destroy and make universes bitch get the fuck out of face hoe
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Ps not an oc bronies
Am I the only who would agree with that one guy?
There's a lot of grammar errors, but this story is still awesome to me.
Honestly though, if there were given to be a war without the barrier ex machina, the ponies would be killed pretty fast
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Statement: Correct civy.