Join us as we follow in the tale of a strange new alien and his trials and tribulations in the magical land of Equestria. Where he will make friends and allies, face terrible foes and enemies. And face the biggest threat Equestria has ever seen; his own legacy.
In another place...in another time...He lived a very different life. But what makes up a persons character? Is it the circumstances of our environment? Is it the people whom touch us in life? Or is there some indomitable spirit that guides us?
Baby Arc
CMC Arc
Self-Discovery Arc
Redemption Arc
Chapters (12)
Sweet! Gonna stalk this story
Hmmmm...has possibilities...
Snap its the Opposite instead Gonna Watch ya
4259442 that's the idea more or less
Mother of god, it's a wall of text!!!
Oh, and cool concept but I think it would have been better if you had an editor.
4259834 I'm really considering it! I had to be really meticulous with this story! even then it didn't come out perfect
would u know how to get an editor?
4260275 there is a group named "looking for editors", and if you want you can read my story to, I'm kind of a beginner but I think I'm doing alright hare is a link if you want to ,Brothers.
interesting
4263305 I try
You already interested me in It, so keep up good work
I'm intrigued, can't wait to see who dash funds and how this changes things since this is before Twilight arrives.
Kind not kond.
Yelp not yealp.
This chapter was
To be honest I kind of hated myself too.
Great chapter, looking forward to more. Rainbow Dash is rarely shown as sensitive, and in a way that still holds true to her personality. I think you've found a good balance with that...
...just now curious as to how she plans on keeping that kid aloft in her cloud home.
We all know Rainbow has a very deeply buried soft side, it's good to see it coming to life. I can't wait to see her antics while dealing with a human baby.
aww that was a lot of cuteness in this chapter i like it and please don't take a long time on make more chapters for this story
I agree
This was a great way to start a day.
Aww, Rainbow Dash is seems to have some good mothering skills.
Nice chapter, lots of good feels. I can't wait to see Ponyville's reaction to this little boy.
Dawwwwwww
4423469 sorry I had to deal with finals. But now I'm on break so I should be able to upload more regularly.
4424581 I'm glad to here that
4424595 Our favorite tomboy Pegasus may be tuff, but I think deep down she would make a good mother...granted she doesn't know everything. But that's what friends are for.
4424610 Ponies seem to be pretty tolerent creatures but who knows? Suddenly coming face to face with an alien might alarm anyone.
4424993 that ok and ok
4425005 You got that right my friend.
DAMN YOU FEELS
4424998 It made school bearable
I didn't get any feels. God what emotionless bastard I am lmao. Can't wait for Lyra to find out lol! That'll be a doozy.
4425949 Lol
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And also you really need a proofreader cause there's a lot of misspelled words or words missing a letter.
4425010 I just realized something: Rainbow lives in a CLOUD house... HOW IS THE BABY NOT FALLING THROUGH THE FLOOR OR WHEREVER SHE PUT HIM????
Edit: realized he was on the sofa... but still... very dangerous. So I suggest Twilight magics up a necklace or something with the cloud walk spell permanently activated on it.
4426814 In this continuity the house is Solid, but just so happens to be on a cloud. How does that work...(drum roll....) Magic! (Audience boo's)Thank you, thank you you've been a wonderful crowd!
cute:)
I hope you continue this
4494156 I will
That's... A really interesting thing to say
I like interesting.
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Rather short, but I'm glad you updated, hope to see another one soon
Knock not nock.
At least Rainbow had the sense to take the kid to Fluttershy... but how long until the secret is out????
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Just wait until Lyra shows up.
4593558 Poor little guy is going to be so scared of mint unicorns.
But I can totally see Fluttershy being there and suddenly tossing Lyra out until she calms down.
Seriusly? That was it? Don't get wrong I liked but...We finally have an update and this is all? D:
4614858 hmm OK so just between the two of us would u prefer long chapters but long waiting times or short chapters and short waiting times?
4618803 longer chapters.
4618867 OK :)
I'll keep that in mind
4618905 I mean. look how many time took you to update and this is all you gived us. I'm fallowing other fics that are updating after loong times but they have chapters like 4 times longer than this one.
This one felt more like a page or two than a chapter.
Don't get me wrong. I like it. But the story didn't move much this chapter.