My body maybe on Earth but my heart is among the stars
Sorry guys...lately I've become disillusioned about where this story was going and I couldn't bring myself to finish something I didn't really enjoy making...that said I still like the concept. So I will rewrite the chapters in a new direction with a new goal. For simplicity's sake I am just changing this story instead of making a new one.
So watchers, please bare with me. I fell more confident in the new direction this story will take and I hope you will to.
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That is NOT how you pluralise stuff!
4182091
Writing it as "Human's" does not imply plural but rather possession. Eg;
"The Human's hat was ugly "(Reference to my current WIP fanfic. Shameless self promotion FTW)
It's a bit short for a chapter and doesn't really have anything in it.
I would have plastered this onto the end of the first chapter, and then moved onto the next part.
A few issues with spelling, but nothing major. Keep it up, I can't wait to see how this goes!
Explitive delete your cliff hanger.
There are alot of typos and other small errors. You really need a proofreader.
4302087 your pic explains what I feel