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Mr Anomalous


And so I sit, alone with the dark and the quiet, treading the secret corridors of my mind & soul and always discovering the oddest things. . . .

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When several ponies find themselves taken far out of harm's way, when they would have been severely harmed or even dead otherwise,—and when other, more secretive and suspect ponies are found eviscerated, or go missing, it becomes evident that something strange and otherwordly has its watchful eye perched on Ponyville and the surrounding areas. . . .

And no one has the slightest clue who, what, where, when, why or how.

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Note(s): This story was started a while ago and many things have changed. Some aspects of the story are hindered because of this; broken images, changes in formatting, etc. Let me know if you see anything and I will work to change it.

Also: no, he is not me, he is not Zee Captain, and he is most certainly not the Pyro.

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 354 )

I DIDN'T READ THIS, BUT IM SURE ITS AWESOME. SO I LIKED AND FAVOURITED IT.

I clicked. I read. I liked. I favorited.
You got my attention towards this. The chapter wasn't that short to my standards. You were pretty descriptive with this as well. So I'll be looking forward to the continuation of tihis. It just sounds like itsk going to be pretty good.:moustache:

How can A story with such classy dividers not be faved? :moustache:

Intavesting. . . do go on.

Interesting... :moustache: Please do not hesitate to update. :rainbowlaugh:

p.s I don't particularly like Princess Twilight in a story like this but i'll let it pass :unsuresweetie:

Liked.Favorited.Memorized.

Who Could Turn Down Such An Interesting Tale With Classy Dividers To Boot:pinkiehappy:

But...Shouldn't It Be Everypony?:twilightsheepish:

Comment posted by Fugly Duckling deleted Apr 24th, 2013

i deem this worthy of my attention:moustache:

Who better a detective than Princess Twilight Sparkle?

A legal detective with experience?

Yes i want more of this story

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But, undoubtedly, Twilight has read several books on the subject.

Good sell, but the flow of the story is hard to get into.

meh

yeeeeee catman Adam west!

wait.... family guy and fairly odd parents both had a adam west played by the same voice actor... its a conspiracy...

Pretty good so far, though I do have one thing you should consider changing: The story description gives too much away. If it's not something that happens in the prologue chapter, then don't have it in the story's description. It's basically one giant spoiler for your story.

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Huh...what you say makes sense...will do!

Hehe i really like it! I hope to see more :pinkiehappy:

Pyro?

issat you?

.....personality disorder much?

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He's...a bit of a psychopath. More on that later.

SO not to be THAT GUY, but if he did in fact die then the ' Everyone' rating might need to be pushed to teen. Because you barely described the blood there is no need to say gore or anything like that, but a murder like that just kind of seems out of the Everyone comfort zone... also MOAR! :flutterrage: Please?

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0.o.
Uh-oh. Crap, forgot. Tee-hee!

We all forget :raritywink:.... seriously MOAR? :pinkiehappy: 2483505

Man, the suspense, the build-up, the detail, and the Watcher(don't know what you call him yet). He sounds like the guy from Dishonered. But whatevs, great chapter.:moustache:

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Is that a good game? Haven't played it yet...

Pyro's been taking lessons from

GORDON FREEMAN

At the end of the chapter, why is their both sketch AND roseluck, did they suddenly switch or something?

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Yes. Its an amazing game. If you've played Skyrim, you'll love Dishonered. Reason why this anti-hero reminds me of the main character from it is the mask and his unexplainable speed. Because in Dishonered, you can literally stop time around you long enough to interact with the enviornment around you.

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I had originally meant for that pony to be Roseluck, but decided against it. Must've left that there, thanks for catching it!

2483487 ahh...ok uh yeah that clears things up thanks a bunch :twilightsheepish:

Dun dun duuh... The plot thickens...

Well...DOUBLE KILL!!(Or One Kill And One Unconscious?)

The Divider's Are Amazingly Beautiful In This Chapter:pinkiecrazy::heart:

You need a proof reader
found several small mistakes

Wait, wait, wait. Okay, So saving ponies caught in a mass fire. But then the dude does a MASSIVE 180 and kills someone for thievery? :rainbowhuh:
'Kay, now I've gotta know what's up.

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Good. I have drawn you in.

CIA
CIA #39 · May 2nd, 2013 · · 1 · Blood ·

Shady looked down and then tried to scream again, but this time in horror. From his gut protruded the crowbar that the monster was supposed to have in his hand.

"That sounds worse then getting all your blood punched out of ya."
"Or worse than having a pyro go to town on your entire team.

1 death and 1 fainted and bleeding off in one night... *golf clap*

Love the way you make the theif not completely bad. And that ending was perfect. Took me abut to understand it, but when i did it gave me shivers. Very well written story.

:moustache:this has made me happy in da pants good job

:moustache:troll time this chapter is short

Well, that was an unexpected backstory Q_Q

HAI DID U KNOW DAT DIS CHAPTA WUS SHORTX?>!?!?!

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But on a serious note, short doesn't mean bad. I like it, it was surprisingly emotional for a short chapter.

I await more, I desire answers! Not really, I just want more more more. I'm a greedy fat pony like that.

Comment posted by Xermy deleted May 9th, 2013

Well, that was unexpected... :rainbowderp:

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