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Dai Kirai


24 year old brony in California (no I don't surf). Linguistics and Japanese major. Language and culture are my life. Fan of sci-fi and reading.

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After a demon summoning spell goes wrong, a magical 'void' is created on the outskirts of Ponyville. Celestia sends her prized student to investigate and to prepare for whatever this 'void' means for the future of Equestria.
Something is coming, and Equestria will never be the same.

Part 1 of the Titans series. This will update with at least one chapter every Friday.

As I am tired of answering the question. No, I repeat, NO this is NOT a TCB story. That idea was last perpetrated by people Like Hitler, Hirohito, Saddam and would be considered a serious crime by the standards of both parties.

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 164 )

Alright. Comment time. Very good story so far. Very interesting. I haven't noticed any mistakes. I'm holding you to have the next chapter out on friday.

2000677
Very happy about the no mistakes thing, have two prereaders so somebody is doing their job. :pinkiehappy:
As for holding me to the Friday thing...well...you have no worries, I am currently working on chapter 11 with everything before it finished and just waiting to be published. :twilightsmile: This way even if school gets out of hand my readers won't be deprived.

2000909
Thats good. You don't want Pinkie coming after you. Trust me. *looks around room* She could be anywhere.
Pinkie: CUPCAKES!!!!
AAAHHHHHHHH!!!!

2000909
I love when an author thinks ahead of time. Tracking.

as soon as i knew that they were summoning cthulu i quit reading... nope not reading... nnnnope:eeyup:

2001863
You like that? You ain't seen nothing yet. :ajsmug:

2003053
Sorry to hear that, but this isn't for everyone. That is the only reference to anythig Lovecraftian, and it failed. There were three reason I needed something like that though.
1) The use of something so dark was to break peoples misconceptions that because this is pony it was going to nice and sweet. It's not. Some parts may be dark. It's about how two very different species would react to eachother.
2) The 'void' would need a tremendous amount of power to create, so massive that the other side's catalyst was an Alcubierre drive (warp drive), and I couldn't think of anything bigger.
3) The use of stones as foci for magic is used later on and I needed to set that up as early as possible.
Enjoy, and I am quite curious exactly what it was about a Cthulu reference that made you turn away, if you don't mind me asking.

2001519
Just remember you said that later on. :trixieshiftright:

2004668
Pinkie: *pops up behind Author* CUPCAKES!!!:pinkiecrazy:

2004668
Meh, with that many chapters, you could update twice a week pretty comfortably.

2004687
I could if I were at any other university (almost) and weren't on the quarter system. But things move way too fast here, with way too many projects.

2004809
University, with three clubs and tutoring. :pinkiesad2:
College and University are two different things. lol :twilightsheepish: sorry, linguistics. :twilightblush:

I am assuming dinky and diamond tiara are dead. And the "machine" that twilight and friend saw was a rover or something of the sort meant to recon to some extent the other side of the er.... portal or wormhole or whatever the little voidish things are going to be called.

2007216
You seem decent at figuring stuff out, but can't comment either way. But as far as I know there is currently only the one 'void'. And if you wanted to know what was on the other side, wouldn't you want to send a scout?

2008306 Sending a scout? Yeah I likely would want to send a scout, and I guess a robot would be the best thing to send. At least the humans aren't all 'we will conquer you' like in other Human in equestria fics. With the equestrian being spoken by whoever is controlling the robot, I would assume it is different than english or some other more widely used language... I wonder if equestrian to the humans is actually some dead or old language?

2010126
Honestly, I hate how most stories show either humans or ponies as either pure good or pure evil. Both people and ponies fall along that equilibrium (blame Doctor Who and Star Trek but I think humans can be great and noble creatures).
Love the thought process you are going through, feel free to comment to your hearts content. And even if it were a dead language it would have involved in a different way, language evolves into what is needed and changes based upon the society.

Hmm... looking good so far, although I truly wonder if that veil will work, after all MALP could possibly identify Celestia by sound and movement, plus that veil might be useless against Thermal Vision!:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

2019383
Could be. But that was also why Celestia used Twilight as cover. Even if it isn't 100% effective, they would then have to separate the two different signatures. There will be an answer to that, but it will take a while.

2019784
Sonar and other sonic instruments are regularly used for 3D mapping, among other things, and they are efficient enough to detect a metal marble from several miles away

So in this fic, would the ponies be considered aliens or extradimensional creatures?

2020873
Sonar isn't as efficient as other detection methods, disregarding that it is usually employed in water. They would have to know the ambient room temperature, along with how the air is moving and air density. Sonar only works line of sight, so it still wouldn't help to identify Celestia as she was hiding behind Twilight. Equestrians most likely don't even know that sonar exists so they wouldn't know to plan for it. You'd also have to know how the sound waves move through a magical aura and hope there is no noise generators or anything else that messes with sound waves.
Besides, there are several very efficient methods of detection like infrared, and it all depends on what kind of effect the spell has on the air.

2022126
Technically they would be aliens since they don't originate from Earth. As for extra-dimensional, they would most likely be from another planet or universe. They would have to come from a similar 3+1 dimensional space (like we are from).

That wall o' text! GAH! MY EYES BURN!

2025944
If there is a specific wall of text you are referring to, being more descriptive can help me out.
Edit. NM, saw it, will try to add a paragraph break in there.
edit 2. fixed it, although it was still grammatically correct in English it did feel odd.

2025604
Sonar, Radar, Lidar, Geiger counter (Assuming the magic particles can ionize the inside of a Geiger tube), and any other type of sensor. :twilightsmile:

They were planning on sending the thing to another dimension, It would be completely packed with measuring instruments! :ajbemused:

2028330
Unfortunately, you are correct on that matter. It was packed full of sensors, and nothing about its entry was random either. because how would the anomaly effect complex machines? :applejackconfused:
and while i did think about all of those (and have plans for them), lidar actually skipped my mind. :twilightblush: will have to change that :twilightsmile:

2028482
So, it's got all sorts of advanced shields and barriers? Sweet!

2028498
no shields and barriers, yet. But it does have gravity sensors, air screening systems to check 02 level and risks of biological contamination, etc.
Wish it had shields, that would be awesome, but that could also invalidate several of the tests and if it was attacked it would give information too.

2028575
True... but it at least it has armor plating, right?
Maybe some Tungsten Carbide armor, Titanium Diboride armor, reactive Graphene armor, Or even some Nano crystalline Diamond (Probably not, she said the armor is metal)...
...Or some other sort of futuristic-y armor.

2028644
why would a scout rover be so heavily armored? (curious as to your line of thought now, intrigued)

2028664
Would it be so hard to believe that the portal ended up on a world with jovian-like gravity?
When you build something like that, you prepare for everything, because you may not get another chance.
That's why NASA will take 4 years to build a relatively simple space probe, and then test it for another 4 years.

2028685
you are making the assumption that this is their first probe. and a hazbot III isn't that expensive, especially when they don't need a launch or entry procedure. They also have the benefit it being right next to a research installation.

2028720
...Well. That would explain their knowledge of the language. :twilightblush: :facehoof:

2028737
Was waiting for someone to start asking the right questions. more of that will come into view in chapter 7. But they do speak an alien language which would require translation. Seriously love Linguistics and Anthropology, so some bits of that may come into play. :twilightsheepish:
but i did not create a language due to the amount of time and thought that is required to do that properly.

2028759
Ha I love making up languages.
Like, not just new symbols or switching sounds around, but completely new rules for the language.

2028771
I don't. A language is the way a society expresses itself, a symbol of what they are as a species. Languages don't waste words, every word is invented for a reason. Then there is honorifics, syntax, phonemes (which requires knowledge of vocal capabilities), how the language has evolved.
Way to much work for me right now, especially when i don't enjoy it. They are fun to research but that's about it.

2028821
Truth. Especially when you realize that they may not even use the IPA (International Phonetic Alphabet) figuring how each language on Earth has a sound unique to itself. Or how sentence structure can vary so widely between them, or change from intonational to inflectional types of speech. And that's just going off of spoken language, there are other ways to pass along ideas including body gestures and odors.

Dun dun dunnnnn.... still would like to know what the equestrian language would be considered to the humans, and how they picked up on it so quickly... I'll just call the broken equestrian spoken by the humans as Equingrish....

I feel like this chapter was suddenly cut off.
That, or the author completely failed at writing a cliffhanger.

2057495
Or it wasn't meant to be a cliffhanger. It was designed to give the reader time to think, now that everyone's at the party.

2057454
That is a tricky one, maybe next week. But I kinda suck at creating languages. :twilightblush: And what is fast language acquisition?

2057851:pinkiehappy:

2058467
Sorry, I didn't mean to sound like a dick, now that I've read my previous post.
But still, the ending still feels off to me, but I suppose everyone has their own ways of writing, yes?

Don't get me wrong. I like the chapter very much.
Keep up the good work, mate.

2058821
It feels off because it is unfinished. You only sounded like a little bit of an ass which is something everyone does. The question would thus be, did any of the other cliffhangers feel good to you, if they were cliffhangers?

this getting really good im wondering how the humans know how to speak equestrian

2062387
I was afraid it would be moving too slowly for people. With it not having fighting scenes and being mostly about two cultures meeting and working with and against each other. :rainbowderp::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:
Really glad people are enjoying it, and especially are starting to ask questions.

2003053 Honestly, that's really not fair. I mean I've only just read the chapter and while evidence points to Cthulhu, I highly doubt that's the case. I mean the human tag, along with the fact that if Cthulu was actually summoned Equestria wouldn't last for more than a few more chapters, AND the fact that many strange things were going on such as the cracks in the gem lead me to believe that the spell will change and summon a human instead.

In other news excellent story so far, I shall continue reading.

2091706
Thank you, and you are close but won't say any more than that. Hope you continue to enjoy it. So happy when people think the events through like that. :pinkiehappy:

why did i get an email saying this had been updated when it clearly hasnt

Dear sir y get a fav just for messing with twilight

2092683
It clearly looks like its updated to me. I actually did a blog on the reason because I didn't know what else to do. Yesterday I accidentally hit publish instead of edit on a much later chapter and had to unpublish it. As a result and as an apology, I uploaded two chapters today. Sorry for any inconvenience this may have caused you. :fluttercry:

2093150
Twilight is such a great character to mess with, OCD, smartass, and is so great to mess with, even if she does get in trouble and get ponies out of it. Such a great character with so many dimensions.

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