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Not dead. Just been very busy for the past couple years.

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Summer has arrived in Equestria, and Babs Seed is visiting her cousins at Sweet Apple Acres for the whole season. After their first week there, she and Apple Bloom find a lost and abandoned human child named Michael, or Mike for short.

Where did this child come from, and can the Apple Family take care of him?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 78 )

yay and are you going to be able to make chapters for this new story and your another story

3339042 i got question how old is the human child named Michael, or Mich for short

3339368 ok then how old is Mike in this story

3339373 It'll be revealed in the next chapter.

3339374 ok and you know i men't to put Mike not Mich right

Seems like a good fic so far, but it feels abit rushed since they arent even really questioning what he is, or where he came from.

Awww... :pinkiehappy::heart::twilightblush: This is cute so far just like A New Life in Equestria! :pinkiehappy: However, it makes me wonder and sad how Mike ended up like he did, but I agree with Applejack, they should wait til' he's ready to tell his story. :fluttershysad:

i love it :pinkiehappy: and i see now Mike turned six and a half today and that is sad that he got beaten up by bullies :fluttershysad: and i can't wait until the next chapter is out

Poor Mike getting picked by bullies, and threw him out of the orphanage like yesterday garbage unforgivable :twilightangry2:

Anyway great story. :yay:

Heartwarming yet heart breaking chapter. :fluttercry: Ooh, I feel :flutterrage: boiling up inside of me because of what those bullies done to poor Mike. :twilightangry2: Bless his little heart, but I know he is in good caring hooves with the Apple Family. :pinkiesmile: I can't wait for him to meet Rarity, I know she'll make some great, warm, and comfortable new clothes. :raritywink:

Like, favorite, now we play the waiting game.....................................WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER GOING TO BE OUT, I CAN'T WAIT ANYMORE!!!!!

BACK OFF! I HAVE A KRAKEN AND I'M NOT AFRAID TO USE HIM!

Wait?! :pinkiehappy: Twilight is princess in this. :pinkiehappy: I'm just thinking outside the box, but something is turning in my head, but I can't tell what or who it is I'm thinking of. :twilightblush: Also, I'm scared to find out who this mysterious evil lurker is. :pinkiegasp::twilightoops:

I'm worry what this evil well do to Mike. :twilightoops:

oh! oh! another for THE LIST?! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

No offense, continue writing, but I think the whole little kid goes to equestria, was picked on, is really polite and shy idea is kinda overused

Can't wait for the next chapter

Very sweet it is that Mike feels comfortable around Applejack most, and I know he will feel comfortable soon with the others with time. :pinkiehappy: C'mon Twilight, what do you mean hopefully Spike would send the letter, of course he'll send the letter, because that is what he is for you isn't it? I mean he is just there as an assistant to send letters for you and do chores around the library, that's all. :fluttershysad: Hehe.. sorry about that. :twilightblush: but I'm appalled that Twilight hopes that Spike would send it, because she should know that he always sends letters to Princess Celestia when they are written. Kind of feel like that since she is princess, she is doubting Spike.:fluttershysad:

:) So cute. Nice to see another chapter :)

Yeah another chapter. Also, Twi, way to through Spike under the bus. *thud thud*

jmkrebs30 are you writing chapters for this story and your another story at the same time

3659726 Yeah, it's taking a bit longer than normal to write this one.

3659736 i men't to say ok and why and sorry for reply to your comment two times on here

3659853 No need to apologize. I've been trying to brainstorm on this one.

Hmmm an Evil from Michael's Earth that if you say it's name can strike you down in an instant.

*Resists urge to make NSA or SOPA joke*

Well all they'll have to do then is employ joke warfare against the force whatever it is, if humanity could discover a lethal joke that helped turn the tide of the Second World War surely the much more fun loving ponies can mobilize their joke forces even more effectively. All citizens of Equestria are to constantly tell jokes of increasing hilarity until whatever force it is has finally had it's last laugh. :moustache:

:pinkiegasp: Now that is a cliffhanger! :flutterrage: But a captivating cliffhanger. Who could it be from Earth to even give Celestia and Luna worry and fear?:rainbowhuh::twilightoops: Also, this was a very cute chapter with Mike, the Apple Family, and with his meeting with Celstia. :pinkiehappy::scootangel: Now I am very intrigued to see or find out who this threat is.

hm... Hitler? Stalin? Lucifer? *gasp* or could it be.... OBAMA?

between two authers now three of the main six have human kids I wonder will the other three.

thou, I really see a problem with one of them having a HUMAN kid and that is rainbow dash because of the fact that SHE LIVES IN A CLOUD.
but somepony could find a way around that maybe. :pinkiehappy:

3794823 Pinkie gets a human kid by adoption? Could you point out the story to me?

travesty? I think you ment Tragedy.

3794827:ajbemused: no at the time I wrote that post I knew of twilight, fluttershy, and applejack but since read one with rarity adopting a human child. pinky pie at most adopts a child turned dragon thou :pinkiegasp:

3918243 Oh, that story. I haven't read the full thing yet.

Funny.. My name is mike and I have blonde hair.. Applejack.. Hear me...

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