Holy Shit...that ending man.

Oh man, I loved this story! It had me on the edge of my seat, always wondering what was going to happen next! I couldn't tell what kind of turn that the story was going to take next! The ending especially! Dat hawt kiss *shot* Twilight is now Afflicted?! Can't wait till the new one comes out <---Have a Rainbowkiss cause it would just be awkward if I did it. xD

Have a good one. On to the next fic!

Great ending to the story can't wait to see more!

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VAMPIRES!

Oh this is gonna be fun! The only thing we're missing now is some wereponies for some good ol' mythological warfare!

449276 hay dont be mean im slow i know shes the carrier but im curious about who the other mare was :(

Genius. Pure genius.

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So the newest person is the child of Twilight? And the infected survived and now the story will continue.

WOW! This was an amazing read. Downright chilling, and I loved it. I never would have expected the whole "mystery mare" thing, but it got my really interested as well. I must have moar!!

This story was crazy and constantly sent shivers up my spine. Can't wait to start on your sequal.

You're bat-shit insane with the mind dark and twisted enough to rival Stephen King in his books.

See you in the next story

you know, this would make a really good movie/flash animation.

you fucked up sick bastard...

great story... creepy as hell tho...

Evil lies in all of us.
We are all more or less Insane.
Without Darkness there would be no Light.
Without Infection there would be no Cure.
ok so i guess all of the above pretty much sums up this story. lol :3

I loved this story and I will definately be reading the next one... just aboooout... now
keep up the awesome work!

*insert generic fan comment here*
im off to read the next part.

I don't know if I can continue. I don't want to see any of the Mane Six die. You seem like the kind of guy who would do it, too.

The zombies escaped?
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ALWAYS the only way.

Reading some comments, sounds like an interesting story, starting read now.

EDIT: wow. epic. definitely gonna read it all - no sleep and tons of coffee tonight

That was an amazing horror story! Much better than 28 Days and Weeks Later and very suspenseful! It kept me guessing at every moment and it let your mind do some work to build the tension! Can't wait to read the sequel!

Cool story bro, I say that to all the good stories I read but your story is AMAZING, I don't even have words enough to describe what I am feeling for this story. That Applejack thing with the strung up bodies was masterful, although I kind of wanted to see Twilight explain to Applejack about her mad dash to save the little fillie. I also really enjoyed the final fight scene with Celestia.

I'm not sure if I should read I'd likely shit my pants

Sooo this was part one...dident it have a sex tag?
Is still verry good story but nexst time if u got a sex tag....adde sex ;)

Nice now to read more muhahaaa

For the love of what ever deity you worship or what ever you consider holy, hurry up with the damned sequel! I stayed up for three hours reading the entire fic last night, and I demand that you reward my competence!

If you want to, that is...

just...wow. Im gonna have to jump right into the next story now.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png

My very first fanfiction ever! Great job.
A friend had suggested it to me and I have been sucked into the vortex of loving fans' perspectives of what ponies would do in a certain situation.
I applaud your fanfic and I feel as though it should get on the feature box up there.

I just... The ending wasn't believable. I'm sorry, but it seemed like you could've pushed Celestia's "Good guy pushed to do bad things" predicament more; Instead, she was just suddenly and inexplicably turned into a raving, murderous tyrant on a power-binge. She's been alive for THOUSANDS of years; Her reaction to her most faithful student obviously taking up moral issues with Celly's methods is death? And Twilight's silent accusation that it HAD to be Celly's fault wasn't very realistic, either. Luna/the Lunar Gaurd could have just as easily put up that barrier, and Twilight would be willing to blame anything, even Discord's rule or the breaking open of the gates of Tartarus before she would doubt her teacher, especially accuse her of horrible crimes against pony-kind.

I don't know, man, I just don't buy it. It wasn't badly written and it was worth a read, it just had some pretty big stretches of suspension of disbelief.

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Well Ive never seen 28 Days later personally so we may both be right, I simply stated what virus from resident evil he was refering to, there are two strands to the Los Plagus virus, T(tyrant virus) Uncontrollable and Unstable, Highly Contagious and then there is the G(Genetic) Strand, a "smart virus" in a way of speaking, Infected are smarter, learn and are overall more powerful and deadly but are more prone to mutations

2124676 But you are corect, The infected are far more similar to those in 28DL then from RE

Hold on a sec. What the fuck was twilights plan b! She goes back to blown up ponyville, passes out at the exit of the tunnel, is kissed by some other mare that hasn't been mentioned yet, and she gets infected plus there were two other infected! I loved the story other than that and two other things. We don't actually get to see rainbow dash. And if there were two infected in the tunnel at the end, shouldn't there have been more than that that survived? They weren't bombed till few hours after the trained left, and the tunnel apparently wasn't affected by the blast so beforehand/hoof shouldn't the afflicted have been attracted to the lights in the tunnel?

The background on my computer is NLR. If I had not already loved this story, the mention of my favored organization would have secured my favor.

This was well done, the last few chapters lacked some grammatical editing and it made it seemed a little bit rushed, plus the afterward seemed steretypical but to each his own, I'm a critic so no point in taking it with anything but a grain of salt.

By the way, You had said that Twilight cured herself somehow, but she did indeed carry the infection. If that were true, Big Mac would have been infected when they had sex. Dont know if that will flow into the sequel or will be just be left hanging. I for one hope its left hanging and they are all romantic and whatnot for Catie's sake. All that jazzy jazz.

Anyway, I'll go check out the sequel once I catch up on my notifications and whatnot. Good luck.

Read the whole fuckin' thing in one night. I love doing that. I have to say that everything escalated quickly after they escaped. A lot happened compared to the prior chapters. All-in-all cool story bro.

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And Celestia is Albert Wesker.
Don't think so? Re-read her lines;

This story needs much editing

That was simply awesome, I usually don't look into the horror or darker themes, but this story was extremely compelling!

BUCK YEAH! Favorite story added.

Read this all at one time. Was not disappointed.
I didn't really like Crazy!Celestia at first but you justified that better than most times I've seen it used.

I listened to this story on youtube and I loved it.

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This is on youtube as well? Where :O

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Yes, somebody did a reading of it on youtube. Here is the link: HERE!

I am not sure if he did the full series though.

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Without her horn or the resources of the Equestrian kingdom, it's doubtful. So long as she's locked up she can't do any harm, and if she managed to escape or was released I find it hard to believe that the first thing she'd want to do is start up the whole genocidal bio-weapon thing that saw her ruined in the first place.
It's also quite obvious that events have completely fallen out of her ability to control. Any way you look at it, Trixie is the one decimating the Equestrian countryside and brining pain and horror to thousands. Twilight's focus on Celestia smacks of a personal grudge, not a logical conclusion.

Just started but it's amazing so far c:

The beginning chapters that dealt with living in a rage infected ponyville where amazing, the concept of isolation, darkness, uncertainty and the ever present threat of death were fantastic and gripping. The story maintained that quality...up until the bunker and meeting Celestia.

I felt disappointed in the way you handled Celestia's characterization, the way you portrayed her make her look like an idiotic monologing cartoon villain. The kind says shit like "kill the puppy! I'm so evil muahahahaha!" "And I would've gotten away with it too if it wasn't for you meddling kids" Her constant switching between "I'll burn the world to save it!" and "Fuck you bitch, I'll kill you!" was jarring and felt 2 dimensional and out of character.

Your Celestia in her desperation, not only betrayed every value and ideal she held dear but also betrayed her closest companions and subjects, often to a fate worse than death all for the sake of her nation. Her motivations, and internal justifications were complex, and she believed that what she was doing was the best for her people, even while she led them into ruin.

That kind of misguided extremist evil who would destroy the world to "save it", who believes her atrocities were for the "greater good" needs more depth, and subtlety then the "HAHAHAHA I AM ALL POWERFUL DIE TWILIGHT DIE U BITCH!" characterization you gave her.

I feel that you need to focus on developing your antagonists characterization and motivations as fully as you do your heroes.

Well written thriller! Very much enjoyed this, and will read the sequel.

Small tints of many realities splash this tale of yours. So far, so good. Not bad at all.
Congratulations and thank you for sharing this story of yours.

Started reading this years ago and forgot about it.
Now I've returned and finally finished what I started-what you started-all this time ago.
Creepy, dark, violent. Loved the concept and the mood set in the beginning, and the Revelation chapter is something I'll remember for some time.
Bravo, sir.

Looks like mine was the 666th like... There's something strangely... satisfying, about this.
Now, I'm off to see what horrors await in the 2nd installment of what appears to be turning out to be a terrifyingly terrific series.

This story lacks a certain pink pony.

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Why isn’t pinkie in this story? Why is no one mentioning the fact that pinkie was completely left out of this because author doesn’t like her.

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The author doesn’t like pinkie does he? Because he left her out of this story