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Wolokai
"The road ahead is not easy, but neither is it impossible to travel. Run, Twilight Sparkle. Run."- Wolokai KuRR
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First, will track bro! Hmmmmmm, so mysterious, I don't know what to believe, definitely one to come back to.
Hmmm. Let's just see how this goes...
Here we go... again...
This is gonna be good.
He he he HE STARTED ON IT YESSS! Can't read it before tomorow though :/
Edit:
After reading this I just wanna scream out in happiness!
i've been waiting for this!
And the first chapter didn't dissapoint, wonderfully written, i could visualize the scenery :D
though, it got kind of ruined by the fact that i was looping Caramelldansen as i read it...
Faved and tracked
So many questions to be answered now.........I got that felling that this will remain a fave!
Woot Woot! The awesome has started up again!
oh boy. Liked the walk through ruined Canterlot. When Twilight listened to her younger, more cheerful self I got chills. Messages from the past (before the disaster) always get to me and just immerse me into the story more. Looking good so far.
~Have a good one.
Good to see you back once more Wolokai. Looking forward to the next bits.
An altenate to dont go outside?
Alright, liked and favorited.
Now time to read.
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Nope, the next story in line. This is what happened after the second Don't Go Outside.
I hope Mac and Twilight meet up again.
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I WOULD LIKE to note however, that this is "New Reader Friendly", which means you will NOT have to read the first two to understand this one.
What about the stuff that was removed from Origins of Shadow?
Specifically Mac seeing Twilight on a distant hill.
Do you plan on referencing that?
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Then, couldn't you just toss that into the description? Anyways, wouldn't other people need to read the other two to know why and how Twilight was infected, why Canterlot is deserted, and just what the Ravage virus is? Or are you going to put a small flashback later in the story?
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Now please everyone, refrain from posting such spoiler stuff! I want new readers to have a sense of mystery!!!
Well, either Luna or Celestia went nutshit and let Equestria have it in some of the worst ways, it seems. And I'm guessing Twilight survived whatever Celestia or Luna tried to do to turn everypony into monsters, which is why her eyes are so different, and probably why her magical prowess is so great now too. This is just all theoretical though, I'm not really sure, but that's what it sounds like!
I REALLY hope I'm right, at least a little bit.
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Shut the fuck up and take my goddamn money.
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This is part of a series? That tips the scales. Tracking and searching author's archives for previous stories in the timeline.
Edit: Wait a tic! You're the "Leap of Faith" guy! Why the hay am I not watching you? *Fixes*
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy_invert.png Afflicted Twilight approves...
dafuq is dis? dafuq is dat? I r confuzzled! Oh well, liked and tracked cause I gotta know wtf.
Glad I was able to finnaly fallow people or I may have not found this, loved the first two exsited about Origins of Shadow and now this cant wait for more.
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sounds like a good story faved to be sure i wont miss a chapter
Interesting. I can't wait to see what happens. Even if it is progressing slowly, and I have no idea what's going on.
Alas, poor Twilight. Chewtoy of the universe, it seems like...(hugs her)
To Wolokai... So, pulling out Doctor Song, eh? An interesting choice to play...
Twilight needs a hug. I volunteer.
Also, she and Mac need to get back together.
Sorry, I just love happy endings. HATE sad endings.
Tracked!!!
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASP
insta fav/like
Any song/s you recomend while reading the chapter (looping or kinds of songs)?
interesting....very, interesting
The last pony in Equestria is not alone.
That's what it reminds me of anyway, because right now I'm guessing that something along the lines of "Celestia-instigated zombie apocalypse" happened and Twilight happened to be resistant to whatever it was.
I'll be following this. The suspense is killing me.
What she should do:
Anyway, glad to see the series continues and glad to see that you're trying to make it special for the new readers. I love guessing at future events before they happen and I'm sure they will enjoy this as well!
Looking very good so far, however I did spot a random tense shift halfway through:
if I didn't already live them should probably be if I hadn't already lived them i think
Other than that everything seems all right. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Out of curiosity, does it show to you when someone hits the read later button on your story?
"If I were you...I would have killed her..."
Yes! Do it! Listen to the good guy who´s a statue, Twi!
You can still kill her! And Luna! And that fucking Shadow-mane! Don´t just let them get away with almost ruining Equestria with some sobs and a fucking "I´m sooooo sorry~". That apologize won´t bring back Carrot Top. Those tears won´t rebuild Ponyville and the burned bodies of the ponies there! If they have to stay alive then punish them all at least, all of them!
They took away your old life: With Spike, Your friends, Big Mac, Catie Cloudmane and your own child, your health: infected with a disease, cursed to be a keeper of it and to never meet your beloved ones again, your sanity: for two months in that frikking hell of ponyville, for all those nights you were alone and had to cry silently in your bed while Celestia, Luna and Shadow-Mane were outside, safe and happy, oh sure they felt sooooo guilty, didn´t stopped Celestia to almost kill you, Shadow-mane to lie to you and Luna to abaddon you when you forgave her sister.
The thought that they get all away scott-free while your life gonna continue to suck is so irritating!
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Good grief Sideshow James Rye!
*pokes the bloodless unconscious body*
Use a pen next time...
And so it begins...once again...
Well I didn't need to sleep tonight.
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Again...
So discord started all of this
Oh god....
dammit discord you and your rage virus.
Moar!
Please?
1387613 Was said so last story. the 'virus' that started it all, was Discord's blood being mixed with Unicorn magic.
ZOMBIES! I KNOW IT! IT HAS TO BEEEEEE!
What makes me wonder is how Discord caught the Virus while encased in stone. I'm pretty sure petrification prevents one from gaining diseases
Come on Twi! You´re supposed to stop this!
Wait, does everypony think she´s dead or do they know she´s still alive?
Also good thing with pointing out the bat pony and Crazylestia bad deeds of the past. Still not over the fact they´re just forgiven like that, i mean hello? Thousand of dead ponies, broken families, destroyed cities and they get a "oh my, we all make mistakes, ne?" and can just live a normal life like that? Even get a pat on their shoulder so that they can cry out how bad they feel for themselves and on top of that they get healing and all that?
Damn, i feel the rage building... i hope Discord has a special plan for those two, i really hope it´s a fun chaotic and fitting plan.
Like i dunno, having to hear the accusations and questions and cries of all the fillies, foals, mothers, fathers and all the ponies who had died in those months cause of their plans and actions. Yeah, that would drive them mad, that would please me, do it Discord. James Rye will sacrifice some chocolate cake for ya.
Dammit, I was sure it was zombies.....
NOW I WANT A STORY WITH ZOMBIES!!!!!