Man, what happened to Catie's parents, that just sucks man T_T Pinkie made it out with the Cake's babies :D (well, that's what I'm hoping anyways)
Whew, when The Afflicted broke into Twilight's house, you had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see if they made it out. Genius using the basket system to get over to where Big Mac(?) and possibly others are :D. That was quite badass with Twilight manipulating the knifes and using them to defend herself and Catie from The Afflicted. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
Oh shit man... I'm out of breath... I was on a fucking adrenaline rush... This was insane dude... This had me more on edge than Leap of Faith: Twilight vs. The Great and Powerful... I mean holy shit... This story, kicks hardcore ass. Nothing I've read can come even close to anything I've ever read. I mean even published books by people who made a lot of money on their books. You better not stop writing this story, or I swear by Terrato's beard I will hunt you down. Seriously, I will hunt your ass down. o.o You rule, in all honesty. This story man.... I don't know what else to say.
If this is any baseline as to how impressive your writing skills usually are, you could seriously make a living off this quality of stuff. Not that I'm complaining that you're writing fan fiction, but with your skills you could, in all honesty, publish some world class horror stories; stories that I would totally buy.
tracking this story and checking up on it every day, some things are inevitable (I.E.) at some point they are going to most likely end up in a large scale combat situation (Possibly featuring the inflicted using some mannerism of weaponry and/or Projectile vomit?)
i think that the wall did go down before pinkie managed to get out. pinkie: magic wall? pfft. i broke the walls of the bucking UNIVERSE. *passes through the wall with ease*
I love everything about this story... except for the name of the filly. I can only imagine it's supposed to be a reference to something, but in all honesty, it sounds like a terrible Mary Sue name. Amusingly enough, it's the first name, not the last, that is killing it for me. Kind of an inversion, due to the general naming trends of the ponies.
All that aside, I am quite enjoying the story. As well as the fact that there were repercussions for her selfless act. In the Zombie Apocalypse, no good deed goes unpunished... and all too often people ignore that.
I also think just naming the filly Cloudmane/Cloud Mane would have been enough, but who cares? That was frikking AWESOME! Twilight killing infected left and right with her leviated knives was just so amazaing~ <3
Hopefully none of those savage saw her and the filly enter the other house! Give them a break, will ya? D:
It had to have been a good ten minutes...the two of them standing and observing one another...taking in their looks, their eyes, their stature and form.
this story is very good
Very nice.
But please, no more pictures, they shouldn't be needed for a writer of your caliber...
Now I'm excited for the next chapter.
Man, what happened to Catie's parents, that just sucks man T_T
Pinkie made it out with the Cake's babies :D (well, that's what I'm hoping anyways)
Whew, when The Afflicted broke into Twilight's house, you had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see if they made it out. Genius using the basket system to get over to where Big Mac(?) and possibly others are :D. That was quite badass with Twilight manipulating the knifes and using them to defend herself and Catie from The Afflicted. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
Have a good one.
HEAVY LOVES DIS NEW STORY! ;3 He cannot wait for moar updates!!
Oh shit man... I'm out of breath... I was on a fucking adrenaline rush... This was insane dude... This had me more on edge than Leap of Faith: Twilight vs. The Great and Powerful... I mean holy shit... This story, kicks hardcore ass. Nothing I've read can come even close to anything I've ever read. I mean even published books by people who made a lot of money on their books. You better not stop writing this story, or I swear by Terrato's beard I will hunt you down. Seriously, I will hunt your ass down. o.o You rule, in all honesty. This story man.... I don't know what else to say.
If this is any baseline as to how impressive your writing skills usually are, you could seriously make a living off this quality of stuff. Not that I'm complaining that you're writing fan fiction, but with your skills you could, in all honesty, publish some world class horror stories; stories that I would totally buy.
tracking this story and checking up on it every day, some things are inevitable (I.E.) at some point they are going to most likely end up in a large scale combat situation (Possibly featuring the inflicted using some mannerism of weaponry and/or Projectile vomit?)
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in the words of some random guy at a theater "Dis Gun'Be Gud"
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Awesome chapter, sir you deserve an internet!
That one almost gave me a heart attack. Update soon.
yes big mac saving Twilight and Catie!
I just realized.... Katie was the name of the daughter from DR2, and Catie is the name of this filly... coincidence?
i think that the wall did go down before pinkie managed to get out.
pinkie: magic wall? pfft. i broke the walls of the bucking UNIVERSE. *passes through the wall with ease*
This story is so AWESOME!
I love everything about this story... except for the name of the filly. I can only imagine it's supposed to be a reference to something, but in all honesty, it sounds like a terrible Mary Sue name. Amusingly enough, it's the first name, not the last, that is killing it for me. Kind of an inversion, due to the general naming trends of the ponies.
I dunno. I think Cloudmane/Cloud Mane would fit a bit better, personally. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
All that aside, I am quite enjoying the story. As well as the fact that there were repercussions for her selfless act. In the Zombie Apocalypse, no good deed goes unpunished... and all too often people ignore that.
I also think just naming the filly Cloudmane/Cloud Mane would have been enough, but who cares? That was frikking AWESOME! Twilight killing infected left and right with her leviated knives was just so amazaing~ <3
Hopefully none of those savage saw her and the filly enter the other house! Give them a break, will ya? D:
Finally Twilight recognizes the only goddess worth worshiping. Hail Luna! Hail the New Lunar Republic!
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The picture after
Seems to have stopped working.
I was singing "Don't Mine at Night" at this point.
3640664 DarksonicTrail. I was thinking spongebob at that point
"NAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!!"
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The moonlight gleams down the broken souls.
Thy savior.
A guide.
A Goddess that dwells.
The knight seeketh a song or two.
Thy hope.
A dream.
A Prayer Adieu
Luna always best pony.