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Matt11


I'm a recently returned writer and plan to release alot of stories again.

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Princes Cadence is about to get the Best mothers day gift she would ever ask for

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D'awwwww twas cute!

4371589 thank you I'm glad I managed to make it cute

After Father's day you need to make Scootaloo's views on her new papa.

4371908 i will be doing a fathers day story I just got to plan that one a little :scootangel: :yay:

4371909 It shouldn't be hard. I mean-if Cadence was her mother, they would bound to interact. Being with Twilight probably made it even easier!

4372026 yeah and i thank i got an idea on what i will do :scootangel:

only problem is this.

Her first husband, Prince Blueblood

hes her cousin!

4372109 Really? I I I did not know that when was this confirmed

Still reading the first chapter, but I've got to nitpick. You should have said canterlot. The crystal empire wasn't until after the wedding. And I'm going to assume cadance knew twilight was in ponyville from her aunt.

:facehoof: okay, why does it start by saying diamond and silver are her friends too and that they arrived, yet suddenly there're gone and nopony asked about it?

4382848 woopsie I forgot to remove that lol

What did the card say?

I want to like this, I really do, but it's like parts of the story just stopped and then the story went on as if nothing was wrong.


I will wait for the next chapter to find out where this goes for now though

4382856 I suppose I can do a short chapter to explain what the card said

4382856 ok fixed it.....:derpytongue2:

4403748

You also said Scootaloo had FOUR friend

sorry about that my original plan was that silver and Diamond would be her friends but then I realized they wouldnt play a major role but forgot to remove that one little part

Comment posted by Cynderfall deleted Jul 25th, 2014

And then Rarity snuck into Scootaloo's room and made the filly suffer for the destruction of art.

Well this made me smile. I also love that Applebloom forgot to take off her Horseshoes of Incineration plus ten.

Okay, I'll see you at the next chapter.

Does this mean that Shining Armor is her stepdad and Twilight her step-aunt in this AU? How cute.

5234110 yes. Which reminds me I still got a fathers day story to write as a sequel

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