All the world is indeed a stage, and we are merely players, performers, and portrayers; each anothers audience outside the gilded cage.
Sleight O'Hoof was his name, and he could steal the fillings out of your teeth if you so much as blinked. He claimed he once stole Canterlot Castle while Celestia was away, as a joke. And honestly, after my experience with him, I wouldn't doubt that for a minute.
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I love me an Irish character. Makes me break into accent.
Well, this is intriguing. I look forward to more, especially if the narrator learns more of his heritage.
I like this story. More of it, please!
Oh my, this story truly deserves the title of comedy here, only in the most sophisticated fashion, I find the setup in chapter 1 to be well written as expected, with only one question (to be asked below) about the wording. I instantly fell in love with Sleight O' Hoof once he held out the pendant. He slightly reminds me of myself in a way, (I don't steal stuff magically, but I do "rearrange" some of my friends items when they don't pay attention). Given there is not too much content as of yet to comment on, I will say what I can, the overall setup is very realistic in my opinion, and a slightly common idea, but not an overused one. My other comment is that
As for my question, here:
In the phrase "some sort of crazy tetra-whatever" I'm curious as to rather you meant for that to be in the story, or rather you planned to search for a better term, it's fine for me both ways, I just was curious about it.
I had another one but it slipped my mind sadly, hopefully I'll get to it later, I can't wait to see more of this. I always love your all OC cast stories, it gives you all the freedom you can have, my one suggestion might be a possible better description physically for the characters, you did alright for Sleight, but I feel as if you were afraid to go into more detail, as if you might have gone off topic with it? Also, I don't remember reading much of a physical description for Final Draft himself as well.
Can't wait until chapter 2!
interesting oc. i wonder how sleight does his tricks... probably he has knowledge simillar to pinkie.