My word! It has updated, this must mean the end of days in near. Welp, best remove my pants.

Lawrdy Fluttershy you so funny.
Glad to see this 'finish', I think this is the end, it still says "On hiatus" what will you bring us next Wanderer?
Edit: Now complete! On to the Extended families!

Thanks for finishing this.

Update! And awesome one!

Really, REALLY curious how this is going to go now.

Did... did this just go Twilunestia? Awesome.

Edit: Awwwww complete...?

The end? That's it?!? You've got to be kidding me. I waited almost a year and this is how you end it?!? I am disappoint.

i thought this would never update, but you really came through for us didn't you?

Somehow, I still don't trust a thing coming out of Nightmare Moon's mouth.

The end? THE END?! NO! WE DEMAND MORE!

Lovely

fridging finally

totally worth it though. good show sir.

And I just read that too...

BAD END

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Yeah.

This, dear sir, is friggin awesome to the point of breaking any scales that could be applied.
I noticed that all of your stories i read share these qualities, are you some kind of writing god imbued with the power of producing exactly that what your readers like??

"The end?"

I don't buy it.

Well, this was awesome. I can say with certainty that I would not want this story to end but still acknowledge that this is a great place to end it. It seems that the elements, after a manner of speaking, still pulled off their cleansing. The only thing that could make this even better would be randomly timed or spaced one shots in this universe, but as it is this is great.

Hahaha, and so the day was lost not with a bang but a whimper? I suppose some banging might have been involved though if I stop and think about it. Jokes aside, nice to see this finally end. I won't deny I liked the first chapter a bit more but this was a rather hilarious end to the story I think. Only problem I can point out is that the Twins of the Cake's weren't born yet assuming this sticks to the original timeline.

2195388 Ah, I figured that might be a slight issue... when I meant the Twins, I meant the Spa Twins.

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Right right.. I get ya. I think my eyes told me bedroom rather than backroom.

Oh. My. Nightmare. (Would have said Celestia, but this fits better.) That was absolutely spectacular, and was well worth the wait. Had to be the best thing I've read in a long time. The twist in the plot was interesting, characters believable, and the plot itself was amazing. The open-ended ending was nice as well.

TL,DR? It was f-ing amazing, my good man.

we need more! we didn't even get to have kinky sex with the other girls yet!

There goes the Elements of Harmony...

Welp it was a long wait and I'm glad to see one of my favorites finally finished

Although I did not expect such an... interesting... ending....

for those of you wondering, Flutters said:

“Or, create a huge harem of ponies to take advantage of and be worshiped as a goddess of sex, lust and sexual deviancy. I've spent a lot of time and money building you a shrine

What about my....

...what the fuzz just happened...?

Just lol wut

I thought it would be good alternative universe where Nightmare Moon won but nope, its all clop..mostly. >.>

Good writing though

Wonderful.

Or, create a huge harem of ponies to take advantage of and be worshiped as a goddess of sex, lust and sexual deviancy. I've spent a lot of time and money building you a shrine!” WOW fluttershy

you better ad an epilogue or something

Nice. Though I generally prefer the endings to stories I read to lay out what all exactly happens, you still wrote an awesome fic.
You've earned this.
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AJ's turnaround after the tongue spell is mentioned-- Too funny!

Thanks for the blogpost, it didn't show up in my favorites.
Also, with how small this chapter was, I'm surprised by how well you ended this. Okay, sure, Luna's convincing of the bearers was a bit, hm, I think ooc, but it was still funny as hell.

373586 Perhaps reading through a bunch of stories to decide whether they should go on the site has its benefits, yes? Seeing the best techniques, along with pitfalls and cliches to avoid would invariably give one an advantage in the field of writing.

That was a weird mix of seriousness and comedy. Felt a little bit awkward there really... Couldn't really tell if it was trying to BE serious or funny. Might wanna figure that out.

To bad this is marked as complete would really like to see how Twilight gets her wings in your story .
Good chapter in any chase.

Just read this... Never thought I'd see the day that you'd write clop, D, but damn, you know how to do it. And it has a story, too!

Well...that was...different...fav.

Sweet, update! I'm a little bit sad that it's over though, as TwiMare shipping (or however you call it) is one of my favorite pairings and there's a major lack of it in the fandom Anyway, I think this was concluded in an original way, as I've never read a fic where Nightmare Moon 'defeats' Celestia by making her her incestuos lover

Amazing...

Could you make a sequel for this please? I want to see the repurcussions of these events on the world of Equestria as a whole.

Excellent! I've been wanting more Twilunestia fics, especially clop ones. (even if technically it was NMM) Good show, I say!

Loved every second of this. not to mention this shipping. I'm grateful you finished WandererD see you in the next epic.

Oh my god this was awesome

Oh my god, a beautifully written story where Luna and Nightmare Moon are treated as the SAME character instead of Nightmare being treated like a shoddy, one-dimensional villain!

AND Nightmare Moon wins in the end?! Oh god, this is a dream come true! FINALLY! Take my like! Take my fave! Take my spinal fluid! Whatever you want, it's yours!

You, sir, are a real master when it comes to both clops and evil-winning-in-the-end stories. Keep up the good work, love your work

Awkward and naïve doesn't suit you.

If only she knew, heh.

“Eh, I'm not into mares. So...” Rainbow Dash ventured. “I guess Twilight's pretty good in the sack, then?”

I don't know why, but I always find this funny. Also, Applejack gets around, she gets around like a, ummm, analogies, don't fail me now!

Her last thought, before bliss consumed her was that of any nights, this one night, should last forever.

Aaaaaand then Equestria was starved of sun light and everything died. The Zebracans on the other side of the world were cooked alive and the Griffons lived in twilight forever (the light kind of twilight, not the pony).

I rather want to see this universe expanded upon. 'Twas a good story!

And so our brave heroes ventured forth, smiting each enemy before them through their own sensual desires, steaming hot sex, passionate lust bound romance the rejection of monogamy… truly they have found the path to harmony…

…of a sort.

Seriously, that was fun. I would like to hear more of their exploits and how they conquer their foes in the future. Perhaps Shining and Cadence can find a way to melt a Queens cold heart and teach her the true meaning of love? Or maybe the high and mighty King Sombra shall have the brief pleasure of dominating a goddess… before being bought low? I do wonder…

out of most stories i read, this one came out a winner, A+++++ good job bud

Nightmare Moon x Twilight x Celestia ship without any mindbreaking, magic compulsions, torture or generally horrible stuff?

Epic Win.

Not bad, dude. Not bad at all.

And that's how Equestria was unmade!