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Shining Armor and Cadence's spell reveals something completely unexpected as it expels Chrysalis and her changelings out of Canterlot: A secret kept from everypony for several years...

Now with a TV Tropes page! Warning: Will Contain spoilers.

First Published
9th Jun 2012
Last Modified
9th Jun 2012
#1 · 124w, 1d ago · 7 · ·

You... you wonderfull bastard.

Error: " wonder... what was she thinking? She could have saved himself and left us both to die...”"

?

*Edit.

You've fixed it.

Well done.

And:

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#2 · 124w, 22h ago · 3 · ·

My mind got screwed

but in a good way.

Man, why is it that every time I interact with you, the words "mindscrew," "mindfuck," and/or "mindcrush" come up?

Why

#3 · 124w, 22h ago · · ·

My my...another awesome story/ Cheers, mate!

BR
#4 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

Daaammmmnnnnnn good story.

Also being a mod is a surefire way to get featured.

#7 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

Bittersweet stories are always the ones that make me cry:fluttercry: Well done.

#8 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

The feels...

#9 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

:eeyup:

#10 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

:O

#12 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

:fluttercry:

I love Chrysalis fics. Especially backstory ones.

#13 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

Added to headcanon multiverse.

This...this is awesome. Manly tears hath been shed.

#14 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

Excelllent.:yay:

#15 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

Loved it. Proper comment to come later.

#16 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

Wow WD, that was really, really good. The depth you obtained with the introduced OCs was brilliant.

#17 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

:fluttercry:

Such an amazing story. Thank you.

#18 · 124w, 21h ago · · ·

that pic is so adorable!

#19 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

D'aww. This is all tobe said on the matter

#20 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

*Applause* Damn, that's a hell of a backstory for Rarity.

#21 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

Interesting. I would normally say that it's stupid that Rarity would care so much more about Pupa's safety than her own, but, y'know, Element of Generosity and all that.

#22 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

Now this is the kind of sad story I like.

Fave'd hard.

#23 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t9u9mZz-o-g

That's what this story is.

I would guess in the end Rarity's soul was the larger of the two in "will". Maybe because Rarity was already destined to be the Element of Harmony? Either that or Rarity and Pupa were close enough in personalities that Pupa just merged into Rarity and since Changelings arn't likely to have a true internal identity aside from Pupa feeling of being a Princess that she just became Rarity in a sense.

#24 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

:raritycry:beautiful and sad:heart:

#25 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

>>718001 Did it occur to you that maybe it's because he's an AMAZING writer that he BECAME a mod? His fics were already popular before he became a mod. (Not saying it might be a contributing factor as to how many people read it, but it's not like he was a mod before The Empty Room OR The Sweetie Chronicles. Just sayin.)

#26 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

damn.

#27 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

Oh wow. So sad, yet so sweet. That backstory...:fluttercry:

I am definitely faving this!

#28 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

Not bad

#29 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

In my opinion Pupa's mind is still their but Rarity had the stronger will so Pupa's consciousness is buried and dormant.

Awesome fic though! Loved it!  

#30 · 124w, 20h ago · · ·

I demand more!

Great story. You gain :moustache::moustache::moustache:

#31 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

this was alomst as sad as my little dashie. I'm still fightin back tears

#32 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

this was alomst as sad as my little dashie. I'm still fightin back tears

#33 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

Another fic by Wanderer? Yes, yes, yes and more yes.

#34 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

so sad... yet happy. please tell me you have some form of ideas in a similar realm to this story. :pinkiesad2:

#35 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

And not one dislike was given that day...

#36 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

..wow...just beautiful...:fluttercry:

#37 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

Wow... That was incredible...

#38 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

Jaw dropping

#39 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

I need a chapter where chrysalis finds rarity and figures out some of pupa is in her, and realize that was her the whole time. Reminds me of the song ego selfish.:raritycry:so saaaaad

#40 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

*Manly Tears*

Liked, faved, and amazed!

#41 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

>>718633Nor any other day:rainbowkiss:

#42 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

I have but one critic to make: Then how did Rarity pass the anti-changeling shield at the beginning of the episode?

#43 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

>>718772

It's magic, He don't gotta explain shit. Also it was probably because she was inside the carriage if anything.

#44 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

God....That's good.

#45 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

>>718782

It's magic, He don't gotta explain shit.

WD's fanfics wouldn't be good if he "explained" everything with "It's magic, I don't have to explain shit." :facehoof:

Also it was probably because she was inside the carriage if anything.

So? In the beginning of the fanfic she was inside the palace and she almost got squashed on the walls. What stopped her from being squashed against the walls in the train?

#46 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

>>718772  Also, going by the episode, the shield probably wasn't changeling specific. (edit: or for a sillier answer, maybe Rarity doesn't register as a full changeling since she's a combined soul or something) edit2: >>718804 Maybe it was simply a barrier shield (think the shield the CMC ran into around the Library) with designated checkpoints.... dunno where you're getting the deadliness of it to be honest.

(probably edit in actual comments in later)

#47 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

>>718791

Hmmmm, them perhaps it's because the cannon world doesn't conform to fanfic's. Deal with it.

#48 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

>>718793

If it isn't changeling-specific, why does it repel changelings then? If it is a lifeform-specific shield, why doesn't everyone at Canterlot die?

>>718798

Your "I'm right, fuck you" tough guy attitude amuses me greatly. :rainbowlaugh:

#49 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

>>718804

But you know I'm right.

#50 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

>>718810

If I knew you were right, I wouldn't pursue the issue further, homeboy. :raritywink:

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