Riolu has had a harsh life being with a greedy Pokemon trainer who tells him to do the dirty work, and one day when his master tells him to do some hunting, he discovers an intriguing statuette that he shows to his stingy master that soon after transports him to a peculiar dimension with even more peculiar creatures. He thought he had it bad then, but now he must deal with an even greater hardship as he is put to the test.
Note: this fic has been created and worked on with the help of my friend Abstract Thought. Many thanks as well to Erockertorres for the image.
Chapters (16)
The premise intrigues me...will watch the story.
I shall watch this with great interest.
WoW, please wright more
Interesting.. Please continue.
I do believe you are taking your time, yes I do also believe that you should at least have another chapter done, sorry for being impatient, but PLEASE work on this
4344013 sorry about the long wait. I'll get the next chapter in soon.
4401696 I know, right? That guy really does deserve a good whopping. Thanks for liking the fic, btw.
Knowing Twilight She might him 20 question about his kind. I love this chapter can't wait for more.
Quite a few grammer and punctution errors, may want to double check the chapter. Though Riolu seems to already to opening a wee bit too quick, but that is just my two bits.
4402588 thank you for the help, bro!
Yeah, that part about riolu opening up a bit quick is...well, you'll find out soon....
Adorable Fluttershy is adorable,
4405396 indeed.
4408938 lol, Love your profile pic dude, and thanks for the follow.
4408974 thanks!, and your welcome!
One question,
Are there horse in the Pokéverse?
4415013 yes, there's the ponyta. Sorry for the late reply, btw
Dude, this crap is sort of depressing yo.
4438073 yeah, I'm a soulless person.
heh, just kidding bro. 
A few spelling errors but this is still great. Keep up the good work!
4438095 thanks, bro!
I'll work on those errors ASAP.
4438098 This brings back memories of my old Pokemon story that is still in progress. I just started writing a new one. Have a peek at them! I'll message you the password to the new story.
Poor Rioulu, he's scared out of his wits!
Keep up the good work!
4438716 thanks!
Riolu, back of the head, thats all Im saying
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4441049 Sorry I'm just a little bit psycho like that.
4441155 it's okay, bro.
Everyone's a little crazy now and then.
4441163 Like me where my friends are sometimes concerned
4441817 heh, I know what you mean...
4519244 don't worry, bro., the update will come ASAP.
(sometime this weekend maybe)
Note to self: learn all the fancy buttons and what they do when your writing a story.
wow... Twilight is kind of a jerk to Riolu. She barely knows him and she is already ordering him around with chores...
4542036 heh, that's the thing. It'll all be explained in the next chapter...
4542075 I hope she has a good reason.
4542153 she does. Don't worry, bro. You won't be disappointed.
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And if she doesn't...
My beloved pets could always use some fresh meat~
4542212 stay out of her shed!
4542221
only if she stays away from my cupcake-recipe~
4542236 I've never read "Cupcakes" but I heard it's pretty creepy.
4542272
I haven't either, but I enjoy making jokes about it anyway.
4542276 heh, very true.
I just read the chapter, (and the comments) I liked it, but twilight would be a bit nicer, ether that or I have put her on a pedestal, also, I don't thinks anyone has read cupcakes, it was a a animation I think.
4544406 true, but I did that for a particular reason. (It'll all be explained in the next chapter
) also, I think your right about that. I guess I got it confused with rainbow factory. (Which I've only heard about)
4545734 thanks for telling mr, I find the rainbow factory is a creepy song
4553535 yeah, it is pretty creepy. Though strangely hypnotic
(jk)
That is pretty funny,
4573122
the joke I made or the fact that I didn't update yet? (Sorry, I'm just really confused since your comment doesn't say that you made a reply.)
4574783
Sorry, I did that, hope the new chapter turns out great,