Hello, I am MyrrWhisp, but everyone can call me Myrr. I am a new author that wants to start typing out stories about mlp:fim! I have many ideas for stories, lets just hope I can get though all of them
Dusk the Riolu was once an ordinary wild Riolu living with his mother, until a great accident made him loose his mother and sent him to a world of ponies. Will Dusk learn to live in this new and strange world, and will he be able to reunite with his mother once again?
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So far....this is good, this is the first pokemon crossover I've ever read and I like it!
Though I still feel bad for Dusk
Worry not young pokemon! I shall ride on the back of my shiny Ho-oh and come to your aid!
I really want to kill all of team rocket now.
Wake up next to Dusk.
Try to make amends with him.
Take a defesive stance when the Mane 6 approch.
When Rainbow gives chase bash her with shield and run after Dusk.
For a first story is ok, plot wise... but have you at least reread it before publishing? There are LOTS of random capital letters thrown here and there with no reason.
Also, when you are writing the thoughts of your characters it would be better using this format. It makes easier for the reader to distinguish them from the rest.
Only read the first chapter but I think its safe to say that it is substantially well written and a good idea.
Please! Go on! I would hate for a story such as this to be abandoned.
Thank you all for reading and liking my story!
I am sorry for the pile of Capital letters that where in the first chapter. It was really late when I reread it and I was extremely tired.
So I am now going to start on chapter two! The story did start quite simplistic, but it will get more interesting as time goes on, I assure you that!
Oh and Komodo, thats a great idea! I shall do that.
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2 Dislikes. . .
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It's a well written story and it's about a young Riolu surviving in Equestria! At least its different from the immediate friends cliché. . . unless they are dislike trolls.
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Also, the capital letter thing, do not worry I have the same problem and a few others.
Speaking of Pokémon I need to start watching it again!
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Hah!
Nice to know that now that more people have that problem. It can get annoying at times. 
I am getting close to done with the chapter, so it should be out late today or tomorrow, depending how much longer I can stand without falling sleep.
4330639 The Second chapter is out!
I do hope you all like it!
I wait like four to five chapters ta make a dissision on something but you my friend have a like and a fave from me -tank
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4331156 Why thank you for likeing my story!
4332778 its good your doing a great job - tank
This deserves a fave. That is all.
4334843 Why, thanks for the favorite then.
Thumbs up and a fav. Please write more
Well, looks like the next chapter is done, it is a bit small though.
Anywho, I hope you like the new chapter!
so ponies are only 2'4"?
GLOBIT! THIS STORY IS HOLDING ME TIGHT!!!
it means im excited!!
Nice storie i hope you continue it
Hello all! Its been a while since I last posted, but I am here to just brief the news that is in my blog post.
So basically real life was being a but and i couldn't get on my computer for a while, but now I am back. I am now writing the next chapter, or what I had of it so far, but it is going to take longer since I am taking my time so the chapters to come will have more quality and quantity for you all to enjoy.
Now, the writing begins!
dose Dusk rely have to loose his mom?
nice story. but know I am just waiting for the next chapter.
Um... More.
WRITE MORE PLZ
This is pretty awesome! Can't wait for the next chapters!
More please
This is very well written. Please update soon.
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It's a classic Anime Trope.
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Is this dead? Are you dead? Is life meaningless? Is god real? Are we even real?!?!