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MegatronsPen


Other than a Cybertronian writing utensil, I am an avid brony that is partial to writing novice-level stories whenever an idea pops into my head, whether I like it, or not. It's mostly the latter.

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Oh boy, this is gonna be good.

I think this is something I could enjoy. :pinkiecrazy:

3994307 If you are who I think you are, I think I just screamed like a fangirl. :pinkiecrazy:

Please, proceed. I'm intrigued. :duck:

3997638 Won't have to wait long. Next chapter incoming in 15 minutes. :pinkiecrazy:

3997661 LIES! :twilightangry2:

Uhh... I mean... where is it? :twilightsheepish:

3997952 My editing side refused to relent until it was screened of the majority of mistakes... However. It is published. ¬_¬ Sorry for the delay.

Jesus fuck, this is intense.

infamous baker of Ponyvile

You ate 'l'.

Still interesting. ApplePie should also be interesting, we don't have many of them around, especially with dark themes and gore. :ajsmug:
I wonder... since it is AU, maybe AJ or Ponyville will turn out to be different than in the show? For me it'll be fine either way, I'm just wondering.

3998156 :raritydespair: of all the things to spell wrong that is, the, worst, possible, THING! :raritycry:

It will be kind of different, but nothing you would not expect from the characters if the Elements of Harmony never existed. Sorta. :derpyderp2:

And to be honest, I was going to make this a straight up, pointless gore fic. But then I realized, you know what? I need a shipping that is a little off the wall, and something I could spill out into other possible ships, that could benefit my "Pinkamena" persona. :pinkiecrazy:

3998205 This has too much potential to make it pointless. Please, craft the story with great care! I believe in you. :pinkiehappy:

:pinkiecrazy::applejackconfused:

3998329 NO pressure! :facehoof: I kid. But thanks. :rainbowkiss:

This is a very interesting story and now I'm intrigued. I'm excited for the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

I always enjoy reading stories that explore pinkies darker side and so far this is Turing out really good

I wonder why pinkie keeps creeping me out :pinkiecrazy:

>Rainbow Factory
>earth pony

4387648 Correct. But they are using the Factory as a means of execution. Besides isn't blood a scrumptious shade of red.:pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy:

This is glorious. I love it! :pinkiehappy:

Wooh. I like this. :pinkiecrazy:
I think it would be fun if you did this whole fic NOT in a chronological order. :ajsmug:

4399407 Thank you. Insert fanboy scream here. :pinkiecrazy:

4400161 Strangely you are not far from the truth.

Pinkie Pie, you're so random!

I love this! Please continue.:pinkiecrazy:

haven't started it yet, but I know it will be good, as I :heart: darkfics :pinkiecrazy: :twilightangry2: :flutterrage:

Whaa...?
Fluttershy is rather reckless. :fluttershysad:

Besides, there should be something like this
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on the bed to restrain Pinkie. :pinkiecrazy:

4444527 All will be explained. I thought of that, but decided against it. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

ermahgerd! I've only read the prolougue and im hooked! Incomplete? (clicks follow) :pinkiecrazy:

4445968 Glad you enjoy it. I hope you like the rest of this grim darkness I've created.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

In the last bit, what exactaly was pinkie doing. Was she strangling fluttershy or something?

4456437 Correct. Garroting her.:pinkiecrazy:

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant!

A very talented writer you are indeed.

Hmmhmm, the English is strong with this one.

4460302 :pinkiecrazy: Thank you. I do have my moments of derp :derpyderp2: though...

4460307
Of course, don't we all.

I would be rather honoured if you were to check out my own story, 'Blackening the Sunshine', as you seem to have psycho-ponies as a specialty.

4460314 Sure, I will I take a gander.

And what do you mean I have a speciality in psycho ponies? :rainbowhuh: :pinkiesad2: I have NOOOOO IDEAAAAA what you are talking about. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

4456579
Oh. I didnt know what garrot meant.

Here comes the pain motherbuckers?

Let me get comfortable then.:pinkiesmile:

Ooh... dis gon b gud.
:twilightoops:
:pinkiecrazy:
:applejackconfused:

Poor Fluttershy, though... :fluttershyouch: :raritycry::rainbowderp:

4461837 I honestly don't know why I put that there. I just couldn't think of anything. :pinkiecrazy:


4461893 Glad you liked it. My first written cloppish scene as well. :twilightblush:

4462241 It was more ish, less clop, but I'm not complaining. :scootangel:

Fluttershys dead?! :fluttercry: :pinkiecrazy:

4477444 oh well. I like how you put the whole Rainbow Factory thing in here too. :pinkiesmile: I was all like :pinkiegasp: :rainbowderp:

Ah wonderful. I had been anticipating another chapter for quite a while now

omg RD what you be doin to Derpy??? :rainbowwild::derpyderp1: AND she broke up with AJ????? Wow, Rainbows messin up baaadddd.... Good story! I like it! :scootangel:

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