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MegatronsPen


Other than a Cybertronian writing utensil, I am an avid brony that is partial to writing novice-level stories whenever an idea pops into my head, whether I like it, or not. It's mostly the latter.

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Twilight felt her hooves fling away from Fluttershy’s shoulders at the painful-was it painful?


At the painful what? Missing word.

4663774 Fucking forgot the EM-dash. Thanks for that. Corrected.

4664024 Are you coming onto him? Can I watch?

... I like where this is going.

Wow...talk about an awkward meeting, what the buck just happened? Feel so bad for Shy, she does not deserve this:facehoof:

(MOV AJ voice) MOAR CHAPTERS

More please. I require it.

4665487 So what kinda bet did you win?

Now imagine seeing this happening.

WOOP WOOP! DIS IS DE ORGASM PORICE! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW MUCH YOU JUST CAME?!

Fuck knows indeed.

4664196 Uh, no, no and... no? :trixieshiftleft:

4665714 He said the story would hit 10 likes and 0 dislikes, I didn't believe him. Then it happened. Then he said it would hit 50 likes and 0 dislikes. Again, he was right. It's quite annoying when he's right. :raritycry:


4664226 You and some other people too. I'm afraid where this is going. :twilightblush:

4665032 & 4665276 As you command.

4665763 Clearly not enough!

4665720
Well, umm...

Boner killer.

~~Flutter-Shy~~

Do all the mane 6. :moustache:

Fluttershy goes on a sex-crazed rampage through town and winds up 69-ing all of Ponyville in the matter of a few days.

:raritystarry:

I know I shouldn't laugh at this sort of condition as people have killed them self because they suffer from it, but god

I haven't read it but the idea alone sound hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

haha!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

This is hilarious! Please keep up this theme of them being unknowingly getting her off, I love it!:rainbowwild:

And just for kicks have Discord be the one to realize what was going on and capitalize on the situation.:pinkiecrazy:

That's so damn sexy. Please write more :twilightsheepish:

My only regret is that I have but one thumbs up to give.

...Go on. So the condition you mentioned in the description, is that constant arousal or what? Will we hear a full explanation? Is she going to get all of her friends to get her off?

Maybe she just needs a good dicking. Many problems in the world can be solved with good sex.

4666770 It's a real condition where orgasms are easily triggered by the smallest of stimuli. Even the vibrations of riding in a car can trigger them off. In Fluttershy's case, it is to the extreme where even mere thoughts or anything remotely pleasant physically (and this case mentally) will trigger her off.

The condition as mentioned by others is a pretty bad thing, but for this story, I am fluffing it up.

All of the main six will be involved in this story.

to answer you're question the place left untouched

4666894 A place where I go to sow the seeds of cloppery and madness.

4666913 and where the sexy and smexy ideas form

4666805
That could be the ending chapter.

Like, we have rainbow in the last chapter. She thinks Flutter should totaly just enjoy her sensitiviness. Next day, Thunderlan/Big Mac/Soarin'/Someone with a dick shows up in her house saying Rainbow said she needed help with a problem (they have no idea what), and they are ready to help.

Damnit! I have two thumbs so why am I only allow to use the one to convey my approval? That doesn't suffice at all! :raritydespair:

4668337 Glad you like to bro. /) :rainbowkiss:

Haha! These chapters are great! Fantastic job, thanks for writing. You have many thumbs up, but you get one more from me.

I didn't want to read this because I knew exactly the type of story it was going to be.

Yet I've read it and find it incredibly amusing.

Good work in that department! :twilightsmile:

DJRD

I'm loving this sexy comedy! My only nitpick is that it appears that PGAD is purely physical, and the mental side of lust isn't present. It's more the spontaneous orgasms disrupting quality of life.

That said, I'm willing to just assume that Shy here has a combination of PGAD and hypersexuality.

I feel like this is one of those stupid things that accidentally develops a good plot and turns into a 13 page novel.
do it

4668830 Don't hold your breath.

Maybe it will happen.

Maybe...:trixieshiftright:

Do you have an editor? Because this definitely could use another pass; there's a lot of weird things in here, such as random tense shifting from past to present tense (and then back to past tense), as well as some grammatical issues and some awkward sentences here and there.

Comment posted by MegatronsPen deleted Jul 9th, 2014

You look… um… pretty warn out.”

I'm guessing that should be "worn".:derpytongue2:

I don't know why, but I laughed so hard at that last line. It was definitely not what I had been expecting the chapter to close with.

Edit - Also, rereading chapter two, I think this below section should probably read 'anything but' instead of 'nothing but'. It would make more sense, at least.

"While Fluttershy would most certainly agree with a nod, inside she was nothing but relaxed. Her entire body teetered over the brink of catastrophic failure to control itself as each and every muscle tensed; as if somehow that would prevent her rising sexual frustrations from exploding out of control."

It could be caused by the elements of harmony
and then in a later chapter twilight could be trying to fix the problem
and then accidentally make the mane six have it.
that would be fun
:moustache:

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