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jmj
All that I touch seems to break in my hands, then it just bursts into flames.
jmj
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You've been prolific this week, haven't you?
I have to say that this sort of thing doesn't feel very pony to me; this particular story could have been any group of folk, ultimately.
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Without going into a lot of detail, I'm writing because I have little else to do and because it gets my mind off of some personal problems. Being in a bad state of mind has its benefits though. I really enjoy writing these stories and I just keep getting more and more ideas as everything just keeps looking more and more grim.
Not bad. Kinda drags on after a while, and some of the rhymes and word choices are pushing it, but overall a decently dark read.
4747069 I'm not much of a poet, but I'm extremely happy with a few of the verses. Not all, some need a little work, but THe one about Babs I'm particularly happy with. This would be ... yep, the third poem I've ever written and I think it turned out better than expected.
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The Babs one is indeed one of the best (the rhyme used in the final line is kinda iffy, but passable). I also realized that this poem could in fact be interpreted as a work of slander created by certain rivals of the Apple Family (Flim & Flam, perhaps?)
4747148 Lol. Perhaps. Thanks for reading it.
not a fan of poetry but this was good
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4747342 Matt, You make me laugh, sir. Again, I saw you commented and thought "Here comes Matt to tell me he hates it." I've been wrong twice now.
150 watcher! I have been waiting to be that one! when I think back on it I am not sure why but meh!
Love you're works they are amazing!
4747548 Lol. Congrats Mr. 150. Thanks.
4747566 Meant to comment on yer user page this was an accident but this too was great!
4747529 I don't mind it considering I dislike the apple family for some reason
4747620 *GASPS* Why? Oh my god, WHY! Actually, I'm southern, so I like them because of solidarity I suppose.
4747854 I hope ya didn't take what I said in the wrong way
I don't think I'll find a happier tale than this, but I'll try!
A bit different, but hey, better than writing nothing but mindless gore!
4747877 lol, no, sir. I did not.
4747983 Lol. Are you insinuating I write mindless gore?
This was fannypacktastic. I can dig something out of the ordinary like this
But whore or not, I'd still give Applejack a good buckin'. AND that little sister of hers
4748259 Lol. That little dead sister of hers. There was a story I read long ago where AJ was a prostitute in order to make ends meet. I guess that idea sort of stuck for this story.
That was one of the most disturbing I've ever read in my entire
Huh, you're pretty good with dark stuff. And you can rhyme way better than me.
4757598 Thank you, sir.
This poem is pretty well done.
I liked reading about the Apples and their affairs one by one.
Too bad about Apple Bloom and that her brother caused her doom.
No more crusades for that crusader and after that I will say later.
4882816 Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
*they
I must admit this made me laugh.
I loved every single paragraph.
I give you thumbs up and hope you write more.
About the family that is rotten to the core.
Holy shit, this is great. Faved.
Sometimes you just need doggerel.
This poem's amazing, now that I'll admit,
It makes my best poetry look like horse shit.
I wish I knew how to write this type of work
Without hearing crass words from an arrogant jerk.
I love how your poem's delightfully dark.
It croaks like a raven and sings like a lark.
With this final stanza I end my review.
I've faved this fine work and sincerely thank you.
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Amazing. Simply amazing. thank you so much for the link.
This was beautiful!!
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Thanks. I'm happy you enjoyed it