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Alchemystudent


Loves to read and write, I decided to try writing fanfiction after a long hiatus thanks to ponies

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This story is a sequel to Equestria's Mirage


We all have dreams: dreams of the past, future, failure, loss, challenge, and death. To save a friend, Trixie and the mane 5 plus a team of heroes selected by Luna, must brave a world of nightmares and dreams given flesh to bring her back. However, once they see her dreams made real, will she want to leave the past and promises of the future, or will they be able to pull her away from the horrors of fear given flesh.

But what awaits them, will push them to the limit.

(sequel to Equestria's Mirage, but you don't need to read the first one to get the picture.)

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 27 )

Two teams? This sounds pretty cool! definatly will add to my read later list, even though i have no idea how it works, I'll just fav it. I'll just come up with cool names to call the two teams in the midtime.
Celestia's Solar sentinels/crusaders
Luna's Lunar Vangaurd
what do you think?:rainbowwild:

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Yes, hope everyone enjoys the ride!


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Nice, but I like Luna's dream warriors and the bearers of the elements myself

3957353 nice, I think mine sound more like sports teams!:rainbowlaugh:

Awesome!... Wait, Absolute Anonymous!? This wouldn't be this one would it!?

And don't forget who made you come up with this idea, Brother:trixieshiftleft:

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No, another guy, I meant I am Anonymous

I see potential, but I wish to see more

the plot thickens, but I like the direction its taking

Sorry, whenever I read "dream warriors" I'm always reminded of the third Nightmare on Elm Street movie. And the theme song of course:

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Where do you think I got the title from?

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I kinda figured but since it was a movie from the 80's some people might not have made the connection.

Will Twilight (and/or any other Pony character) be badass in this or the previous story?

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Of course, I wouldn't write them any other way. I suggest you should see just how badass the girls can ge in the prequel

Once again a good incentive to read up on the various universes...especially with the combined story in the works now

Good chapter but here are a few things I noticed.

she didn’t count on Fluttershy’s kindness or your paitance.

I believe you meant "Patience"

Also how did Twi know there was more than one Dream and when did Flutershy and [I forgot her name] make Twi realize she was in a dream. As much as I understood she figures it out by herself when she overheard the guards.

-Netgirl

P.S. I shall eagerly await for the next chapter/update.

I recognized all of verses from Trixie visions. Of course Lightning Dust was the only one I failed to recognize but as you stated her verse is still in the making. Though there is currently verse where she's the bearer of laughter.

Also one thing I wonder if this is alternate universe? Because otherwise you have failed a perfect opportunity to link the Lunaverse with you story. In "Crisis of Two Equestrai's" (Lunaverse story) the Lunaverse characters met their main verse characters. But also Trixie met them. In otherwords Trixie knows her Lunaverse counterpart and that her counterpart is the element of magic. So I guess I must assume this is an alternate universe. :twilightsmile:

Okay I will start following this story. You have sparked my interest. :twilightsmile:

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It is an alt verse, and...

I haven't read crisis on two Equestrias just yet and I don't like to use story elements that I haven't seen when I write.

Get ready though, next chapter is gonna hit all of you hard!

*Puts on my medieval armor.*

Bring it! I'm ready. :twilightangry2:

The next chapter sounds exciting.:trollestia:

Hmmm.... this is another nightmare. They clearly aren't awake. The elements have never killed a creature before. No matter how evil. :raritywink:

The Lunaverse? Your going to bring Mirage in the Lunaverse? Okay this may become interesting. :twilightsmile:

a peanut butter cracker

The Great and Powerful Trixie...

...needs some peanut butter crackers.

OLBCLD

Overly Loud Bands Can Lead to Deafness?

Octavia let out a low groan as she closed the door and followed Trixie, “Now come,” Trixie said, “We still have a long way to Ponyville.”

Later that night...

Vinyl: Heeeeeyyyyyy! Trixie never did show me how she did the Fireball Card Trick!

Helps to get ponies more interested in our services if they think that there is a big carrot/apple war going on,” Carrot giggled.

And you participate in this, Applejack? Doesn't sound very honest of you.

1.When and where did Twilight and her friends fight Red Eye?(you're talking about the guy from Fallout: Equestria, right?) 2.How soon until the next story comes out?

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