• Member Since 16th Dec, 2013
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Jubei Yagyu


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Tech Shift should be like any other person in Equestria. Going to school, making friends, having sweet dreams. However, he isn't. It's not because of his insane IQ, or just his insanity. No, this Criminal Genius has a much BIGGER secret holding him back.

It MIGHT have something to do with the Biotechnological Cybernetic Augmentations that are currently occupying the space where his limbs and eyes should be. It COULD be his annoying sister. Or he just might not give a damn. Either way, Tech's life is about get thrown into a whirlpool of new experiences.
Humanized story! If you don't like humanized ponies, then this might be a bumpy ride.
*PLEASE NOTE*

Slight gore and one torture scene in later chapters. I will provide a warning in the name, but as always, Viewer discretion is advised.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 18 )

Please hurry up and make more chapters

3947722 that story inspired this. There will be huge differences in my story in the future as it progresses. I loved the idea he created and wanted to add my own spin on it. It will change very soon, but if you don't wanna stick around, I won't hold anything against you

I like this. You sir or madam receive a fave and upvote.

So, is this a humanized story?

3949876
You should really mention that in the description. Also add an AU tag.

3949937 Done. Thank you for the advice :twilightsmile:

3949953
Your welcome, and good luck with all of your endeavors.

3949973 Thank you kindly, and you as well :pinkiehappy:

Nice work. I like it. Didn't notice any typing errors, so far. Keep it up.:twilightsmile:

attack on shoulder

I just about died laughing

“Sorry. Ah was just thinkin’ that you we’re new to town, and that means you’ve never tried the greatest apples in Equestria”

Not sure if it's a grammar mistake or just a typo, but you're looking for were, the ' implies two words when used in this case (we are).

Sweet. Great story. Keep it up bro!:scootangel:

are you planning in continue the story? i see so much potential

I’m wondering if you plan on updating this story cause it’s really well written!

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