I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP
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It started out as a gift, and ended up with an accident.
Only the result nowhere nearly as dark as one may have expected.
A sister incidentally became a pony with a shiny coat, yet her sister will stay by her side.
She will have some struggle to go through; but it isn't a hindrance, when the joy unlocked in the incident is realized.
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I don't know where you get your energy to make these stories, but more power to you!
I only wish I am as motivated as you are with making stories
3936084 Funny thing is, I think it is part of what keeps me going, aside from the ponies, and the friends I've managed to gather.
I guess I'd enjoy that, hoping you'd be with me, if it ever happened. knowing full well others wouldn't.
I wouldn't mind, even trhough there's a risk involved in fulfilling that wish.
I've been working on them, more or less actively since about 2005, or there about.
some of these stories are now filteeed into the FiM site, mainly due to the fact, I get more responces and appreciation then I got at mibba.
My first story was intended to be 500 chapters, organised in 4 parts, I was working on that project for 15 months, I did not finish it, but I guess it is a monstrous project, if you look into what I managed to slip into that story.
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3936402 It's true, this site is amazing on having so many people and getting feedback alone. I never wrote a single Fan Fiction until i decided to make one here months ago.
3937637 guess I'm neither the first, not the only poni to notice, then.
That's warming.
It isn't the same to just see them read, but leaving no comments.
Theme lazy bums.
I started to publish, as if on a newyears res *tease tease*
some of the stories seems popular.
3937702 Yeah, you seem to be pretty infamous if not popular. Some of the authors actually hate you to the brim.
To be honest, I kinda like reading the comments on your stories
3937713 by the looks, that's exactly why I enjoy the "Rage Reviews" ..
this far, the story is still on the up and up.
Grammatical/spelling errors in your description are marked in bold below:
Didn't bother marking comma splices. I actually clicked on this before I'd seen who wrote it, or I'd have never clicked at all.
3937902 I guess I should have expected you to come over.
so, were you dissapointed?
To the next point, I thought you knew better then to just click the first story on the list by now.
Could as well ask how far you actually red, and what you found, assuming you did read the story, rather then the few lines of description, aiming at giving a picture of what it is about.
Oh well, I guess we never learn?
On the other hoof, if you keep bumping in on my stories, one of these days I'll surprice you, if not shock you.
Gues I'll just look forwards to the day.
what in the f*** is this it's just so god damn confusing.
3937902 thanks for pointing it out, should be the end of the typos.
3938033 could you try to point at what's confusing, or is it the entire story?
3938063 it's the whole thing. :(
3938138 that's a bit harder, but at least I have something to go on, trying to explain.
I can't just expect the problems to go away by adding chapters.
how to put this idea out there, the girl being changed into a pony and all that.
If this part is confusing, the rest of the story would loose out.
3938234 really its the way they talk mostly its really confusing. about what they're saying and who saying it
3938063 He's trying to tell you, without outright saying it, that you're a bad writer.
And regarding your earlier comment: I was checking my feed to mark things for my read later list, and wasn't looking at authors' names. Didn't catch until I was here that this was one of yours. Didn't read ANY of the story, just stopped long enough to mark all the errors in your description. I wouldn't read one of your stories if I was paid to. You have no concept of grammar or spelling or punctuation, no desire to learn how to improve, no interest in criticism...you just want a pat on the head for a job well done.
Job NOT well done, no pat on the head for you from me, ever.
3938258 now you're making to much out of what ever you've seen.
particularly since you didn't even read this story, since you even made a point out of it.
I don't mind just writing you off as a lost cause, then.
why care if you're not the only one, I'm looking for the once who do enjoy the stories, and if you're not there, it's your busyness.
3938250 Dialogue, that takes us much closer to what is the problem.
if it is in this story, or if it is more 'spread', I'll just have to go over these details.
hope it isn't the narrative shifts between chapters.
if that's the problem, I should make sure to name them early on to make the point.
I've noticed a huge abundance of commas in the whole story, and a number of misspelled words.
I wonder, is English your first language?
Sorry if I'm being blunt. While I enjoy the story, it is incredibly difficult to read.
I also noticed that, when there was a shift in character perspective, there was no separation, so the story just kept reading and I realized very late that someone else was talking.
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I did have a problem with too many commas and a few typos more then some may enjoy. Something I am still working on.
Since you asked, no.
If you have problems, reading, I need to know what is garbling the message, in order for me to solve the problem.
Feel free to point out, what ever you feel could be improved.
I commonly use the chapter break, but I am working on further clarifying this.
This particular issue, I could look into right away, since it doesn't really involve the story or the file in which it is written.