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Why didn't you respond to reversalmushroom's comment?
Dang, but understandable. Still, this was quite a great chapter. Huzzah!
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Like I said, I know the point of this story is not to humiliate Shining Armor, and embarrassment comes with the territory of male>female gender role reversal stories, and there isn't too much stuff at his expense.
The thing that really bothered me was the reveal that Chrysalis raped him, and not even objectively, like I think that's wrong for writers to put in, and I freely admit this is wholly just a personal complaint, but it was mostly a vent about his role in the fandom at large, how in fan creations, Shining Armor gets fucked over way more than any other character as a percentage of his appearances. It's like "Oh, great, another story where he gets killed by the threat that the actually relevant characters, Twilight and Cadence, have to deal with so the writer can give them hardship. Oh, great, another story where he was raped. Oh, great, another comedy comic where he's the butt of the joke."
*flips through fan creations*
Raped, controlled, humiliated, killed, cucked, killed, controlled, raped, raped, tricked into cheating (so raped), killed, controlled, humiliated...it does on. And on. That's what it is to experience this character. And unlike all the other characters where you have to specifically look up some of those tags and hardly see it otherwise, this is just what it is to go through Shining Armor stuff normally without trying to seek out anything like that.
It just gets depressing when he approaches being the Meg or Squidward of the fandom. I'm just sick of it. Why is this his destiny? Each 1 of these is fine in a vacuum, but when it gets to be the billionth time, and you aren't seeing this happening that much with all the other characters, and they all get so many other creations that aren't any of these things, it begins to become apparent that he is the a butt-monkey. Being raped is already bad, and mind-control is already a sore subject for me, so this combined the 2 and then compounded it with him already being in a relationship and therefore violating his relationship. I always want Shining Armor to get back at Chrysalis and get even and closure. Since I haven't read the whole story (which is good what I have read), I don't know if it said if Shining and Cadence had sex before they were married, but if it didn't, then there's the possibility that they were saving his/their 1st times for each other, adding another dimension to his bad luck.
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Oh, they had tons of sex, pretty much as soon as Cadance was sitter for Twilight. Also, they have something of an open relationship, but beyond that, I won't spoil the reading for you.
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Oh, good.
omg that would hurt not the heat but the impact lava is melted rock, just because it loses its hardness doesn't mean it loses it's density or weight.
Havin' a glitch there, Cadence?
Cajun/lemon-pepper catfish, seared swordfish, grilled tilapia-- i could go on. Don't even get me started on the shellfish.
Seriously, screw that guy! With a baseball bat!
Hmm... This is soundin' awfully familiar. I just can't place it...
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No, no. It'll come to me.
Azzy! You're at a 10. Lower it to a 6 or so, please.
Note that a normal pony would be cinders shortly.
- MLP: FiM
- Dark
- Comedy
- Random
- Tragedy
Rainbow Dash has an unusual way of learning, and Twilight’s determined to take advantage of it. Before she knows it, Rainbow’s life unravels before her eyes as she becomes the smartest pony alive.let
I wonder if Pharynx is gunna make an appearance at some point, pop in on his little brother. Think your version of him would be pretty cool to see considering you've made Tharox and Spike alot younger then they are in the show.
Mm, wonder if Twilight's feeling left out being the only female Sparkle not knocked up.
So, is this a bureaucracy thing or a 'please don't break the universe' thing?
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Closer to that second one.
That was beautiful chapter to read,I can't to see what happens.I hope queen chrysalisis secretary Love all children but got paranoid and turned some she thout where traders away and the real reason she did all this was her children and her where dyeing and she was trying to save them.
Aww, I liked the other picture more.
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Oh, goodie! I can't wait to read it! I shall visually devour it with gusto, mien Frau!
... ummm, are you a miss or a mister? 'Cause that would make formal and casual address much easier.
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I am a mister.
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Oh... Well, pardon while I curl up in this here corner and die of embarrassment.
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Don't worry about it, friend. It's all good : )
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Well, I'm glad you got a laugh out of my embarrassment, mister. Maybe I should call you ma'am, since Gleaming Shield is getting that little treat.
Nah, that would be mean. At least I don't... well ... oh, who am I kidding. I get called both enough that I freaking respond to either. Soooo... yeah. It's funny.
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You're not the first person to assume I'm female, or wonder if I'm projecting a little with Shining/Gleaming. Maybe it's something to do with my writing style, the content I write about, or maybe just the ambiguity of the Internet, but it's happened quite a bit.
You don't need to worry. It's not something I take offense to or feel threatened/emasculated by, it's just one of those things.
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It's the way you write a female's perspective. It's like 'Oh shit! This chick got it down on paper!'. It certainly made me question your gender.
Still, you write cool stories, I approve.
update please
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Not done yet.
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ok much love
I'm late to the party, haven't been reading a lot of FimFic lately. Time to get caught up!
This was a great chapter, I'm sorry you felt that Cadance and Velvet's interaction was lackluster but I think the only weakness is Vel's passive aggressiveness and then lame excuse shifting the blame back onto Cadance once again. Not exactly unrealistic... wholly realistic in my experience, but it does come off a smidge hypocritical right after she tears into Cadance about treating them more intelligently.
But seriously it wasn't bad at all. Very genuine, and like you said, a few threads tied up.
Honestly the star of this chapter for me was Twilight's reaction to her parents.
Such a small thing, easily overlooked, but you gave it the emotion and gravitas it deserved. Her parents might not be immortal but they'll age much slower. As Twilight is getting used to the idea of immortality, the thought that she won't have to bury her loved ones after what has to feel like a short sprint would be a relief worthy of those tears (and a few of my own).
Bloody well done.
Ok now she is arrogant
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Even as a mortal not having to see your parents youth and vigor slowly slipping away would be great. To not have to see them slowly doing less and less as age denies them the ability to do what they once did.
There’s your morbid thought for the day. :(