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Interesting secrets we learn
Good character stuff, and a lot of fun backstory to boot.
Nite Lite seemed pretty interested in the fact that Cadence lacked a refractory period. I hope Shining shares that spell with him. With the way things appear to be going it looks like he may be able to get some good use out of it, and I doubt Velvet would mind that much either.
This has turned into such an interesting worldbuilding fic :) I look forward to reading each chapter when it shows up in my feed :)
Hmmm...more interesting background information. Also, I wonder what exactly the new power Gleaming manifested was, and what exactly she pushed into the other three ponies that caused the sneezing fit. Some sort of reverse aging, perhaps?
"It’ll be interesting to see how Cady’s body takes to pregnancy"
Her body? It'll be interesting to see how she herself takes to it. Unlike Gleaming, she won't need to get used to being a girl.
Oh, and there's the fact she's almost in a permanent heat just seeing a pregnant mare. She'll probably be insane with lust when she's full of life.
Nice worldbuilding, Talia is going to go nuts with Night Light now. She's most likely close to finding out where the gene comes from, and of convincing the parents of spreading it around more. Not like they have to worry about a damn with the alicorn of life as the older sister, after all
I think the word 'the' is suppose to be between these two words.
Also the thing Gleaming made move in reverse, and them all sneezing. Are they aging backwards now?
I'm still not one hundred percent sold on the pregnancy kink but you my fellow hit all the right spots with your world building and your amazing ideas about Gleaming asending and all the emotional details you put in from her point of view that I'm absolutely hooked on this story and can't wait to see it finished so I can re-read I in it's entirety all over again . The way you handle the kinky aspects are superb as well .
The story is soo good, it's nearly a crime, the updates take so long XD
Apart from that, i love a good clopfic with auctual plot and this one here is one of the best of that. I'm really curious, what the sneezing entials.
That a was determined to get in there!
But im still trying to puzzle on the whole little poking gleamings doing here. And its something that should fit in the idea, but isnt.
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Who said it was a spell? : P
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Thank you! That's very nice of you to say.
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Time will tell, my friend next chapter!
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I considered showing a bit more of Talia getting all excited while grilling Night, but I figured it was better left to the imagination. I love Talia to death--probably my favorite oc I've created--but holy moley can she be hard to write when she gets all technical. She may be a brilliant scientist, but I'm certainly not!
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Next chapter, friend. 23 has some interesting stuff go down.
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It still astounds me (and flatters me) that a secondary audience is so avidly enjoying the story. I'm basically just writing about the things I like while creating a world around it, and somehow that's managed to capture people's interest. It's really cool.
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On average, it takes me about 60-90 hours to write one of these chapters. I'm not the most talented writer, and it takes me longer to produce the level of quality you see. Whether that quality is any good or not is subjective, but regardless, that's the reality of it.
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What could it be?!!?!?!?!?! You'll find out next chapter.
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But I wanna know now... hahaha
I'll just have to wait and enjoy for the next chapter. Been having a blast reading these.
Herm, not ERM. :)
Honestly, this story has gone from "What a perfectly palatable piece of protective pony pregnancy porn SMUT" to "why am I joyfully crying with a boner?" And I love that.
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Same place I am on this. Pregnancy is very much not my thing, but the worldbuilding is neat enough that I'm here for that despite the kink.
I wanted to ask you about Gleaming's cutie mark:
Can you give me a more in-depth descrition? it's white, bright and circling the inner cutie mark. Does it have other carateristic: open eyes, open mouth, toungue out, bitting its tail, ... or other. I was looking foward to paint an image.
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The snake isn't circling the inner cute mark, it's circling around the shield. I debated having it coiled around the star portion, but the idea I wanted to get across was that it might've always been there, just blended in with Shining/Gleaming's coat.
As for further specificity, the snake image is very simplistic. The head is shaped like a blunted arrow, and the eye is nothing more than a simple line. There's no tongue, and while the snake IS coiled around the shield like the ouroboros, it's not biting its own tail.
In other words, the snake head looks like this, just with a black outline instead of blue: puu.sh/ABZcr/b0f7815af5.png
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Thank you
That was awesome. I wonder what Her new power is I can't wait to find out.
Shouldn't that be third? First Cadence ascended, then Twilight. So Gleaming would be the third, not second.
Someone might have already thought of this, hell, they probably did but I get the feeling Gleaming just reversed the aging process for her parents and the good doctor.