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Very cute, very fun, and quite the neat little aspects going about.
Very good chapter! I love Dr. Talia, she might be my favorite OC Doctor in FimFiction, and Rosetta was just absolutely adorable.
Fun to see the continued bit of crossover with Pregnant Princess' Pesky Predicament. Even when it's fairly minor, I always think it's neat when authors play with parallel continuity.
Just started reading, wanted to let you know you might want to use this link for your song instead, which is the same video but set on "Yourepeat" at a good spot where the music will keep on going smoothly, assuming you mean for people to listen to it while reading.
nothing is more scary than clowns
7198713 Especially ones from outer space!
Amusing that you're using the Celtic (I believe that is the origin of the symbol) symbol for fertility as your line breaks.
Bit off the wall story, but amusing none the less.
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Thanks, heh. By the way, I really like that one story you wrote!
Nice to see more of this! You should update more... Habitually.
YEAAAAHHHHH!!!
OK, I deserve any down votes that come from that XD
Now really, we need more of this. Can't wait to see what you're going to pull next
Actually, it's an empire... Or a principality, considering the Crystal Empire is being ruled over by a princess. It was only a kingdom when it was ruled over by King Sombra... who should have been an emperor because he was the ruler of an empire. Which should be the same for Cadance, though maybe she's decided not to go with that considering the Crystal Empire, at most, seems to be an imperial remnant like the late Byzantine Empire, and was traditionally ruled by a princess (if I remember my canon right).
My point is, the show writers don't know how titles work.
This should probably be principalities too.
Need a space there between "so" and "why".
You need another space between these paragraphs.
My various nitpicks aside, looking forward to where this is going, since this seems to be a chapter looking to build stuff up for payoffs later. Though I do have one practicality question. The BREAST program is a surrogacy program, right? So where are all of this batpony kids going to go after they're born? Are the mares having these foals planning on keeping them, are they going back to the batpony community, going into some sort of institution, or some variety of those?
Goodness, Gleaming's going to be able to put away an entire buffet at the rate she's going!
Love how cozy this chapter was. The interplay between them was fun and the banter especially so, especially when gleaming threatened the guard to keep quiet.
'that game'
Hooo boy I bet it's a good one.
Can't wait for the next update
This hole chapter was awesome ,funny and sweet hope Luna and Big Mac are together in this fic two
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They'll be going into the batpony community, which as a whole, is being reorganized by Luna into a structure that can adequately support the new influx of children. There will be other non-batponies brought in to assist with care, but as a whole, the education of heritage and culture will be handled by Luna and the batpony elders.
And the Oscar for "You're Not Even Fooling Yourself" goes to~
Aaand even more proof Gleaming will stay a mare permanently, eh.
Even she isn't able to (convincingly) deny she wants to stay this way anymore, eh.
Also, Luna Ex Machina, eh.
Jeez! she makes me tink simultaneously of Pinkie Pie and the goose from Charlotte's Web!
normally i'd go with
Great Story I do hope you finish it
Now that this reference... exists, i can use it here
Requested bug reports:
My theory is that the rear magic is activating the alicorn gene and gleaming shield will slowly morph into an alicorn
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me to
- and holder of several titles besides.
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Such as "best princess"