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Dammit Spike.
Also wew, Gleaming's on the express train to full on Life Goddess at this rate.
need a space.
Need extra space separation.
need a space.
You owe it to us to do Night\Velvet... and whether we'll see anymore Sparkle family young one's besides Gleamings.
If it was up to me... I'd make it to where the process was turned down *real* slow so maybe... some numbers go to 3 or 4 at the most at middle age or older. Keeps people from breeding too much if they're not young\fertile.
There's also a lot of... unanswered questions what a power like Gleaming's can do. Can if also remove things from your body by force like artificial hips and regrow appendages? Can it entirely clean out your body of any toxins? Can it entirely remove obesity? Can it cure psychological\physical addictions? Can it cure psychological disorders like schizophrenia, autism, transgenderism, and homosexuality? (Before anyone jumps on my case, There's the ethical question of what qualifies as an illness or disorder. All of those things impair the quality of a persons life in many and unexpected ways while almost invariably destroying any chance of natural breeding or healthy children.)
Ooof, poor poof spike, and the moments of "Holy bleep" that just, ow, so much *Cringe* at that kinda injury.
Okay, that was funny!
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A healthy chunk of Chapter 25 is going to be devoted to this. But before that, we have chapter 24, which is Gleaming's birthday and foal shower.
Well, that was a thing.
looks like twilights on the fast track for another sibling. now i have to wonder if gleaming finds out she can also affect peoples fertility rates unexpectedly? accidentally makes herself an aunt maybe?
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Fifty bits on Rainbow getting pregnant and chewing Gleaming's ear off because of that.
Poor Spike, that had to be embarrassing.
Also, someone needs to tell that boy about the birds and the bees already. Considering all of the baby making that's going to be going on it's understandable that he would be curious. It's better to tell him about it now rather than having him learn about it later by stumbling in on someone and freaking out, or by finding some questionable magazines or books and getting the wrong ideas.
i love this. And that end to the chapter - all of my YES
Ah yes the HEAR Guard. They hear everything! :P
Too many 'ands'
Something tells me Talia is gonna be quite the looker soon.
Also I want to see if Gleaming is going to have to pay "Eighteen months of overtime" XD
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Fixed. Thank you!
Okay this was once again a really good chapter and now adding the whole power of youth and all the moral baggage that comes with that is gunna be great.
But once again I keep getting turned off my how ooc Spike is. I know your trying to go for much younger but it feels really off to me. Yeah I’m the show he’s a kid but he’s not young enough or stupid enough to try bite his arm to the top of bleeding.
Aww, Twily and Gleam-Gleam and Spike are gonna have a new brother! Or sister! Or both!
Awesome chapter.
Thought the two weeks was fine, people (ponies) tend to dismiss things they consider fully impossible even with proof right before their eyes. The sheer, ah, vigor of their new youthfulness must have really hit them at a breaking point.
I imagine the fact that ponies are usually naked had to take a little of the sting out of seeing ones dad naked and fully ready but still... Yeesh.
Oh and my favorite part of the chapter:
Holy crap that one slayed me!
Anyone who is STILL being a big ol Chancellor Neighsay, complainimg that Gleaming is a completely different character from Shining, just needs to read that one line.
First, Shining gets controlled by Chrysalis; I hate possession/mind control. That's already humiliating, but then it turns out that Chrysalis raped him while she controlled him and made him cheat? He just can't stop getting the short end of the stick in fan works, can he?
Tell me, was he actually a virgin saving his 1st time for Cadence on his wedding night, so he had his 1st time with her stolen from him? Because that would make this far more depressing.
I would say I want Shining Armor to get payback, but that would go against one of this story's threads of not being consumed by revenge, so I know that won't happen.
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I largely disagree with this. The story is a good rump of a smut fic, featuring a gender transformation of one of the prominent guys in the show. There are elements of embarrasement, but I don't think the point of the story is for Shining Armor to be embarrased or humiliated. There's too much glorying in what has happened, and enjoyment for this to be the case.
And lets not forget that Gleaming Shield is on her way to become a frickin' alicorn.
First I'm Spike ends up ok ,awesome. read.
Like scorpions who turn green under black light
Nooooo with immortality life itself lose its purpose. Life is valuable because it is limited.
Author: This incident was well done.
Young puppies need to be allowed to nip and bite so they can learn bite control--if they bite too hard and the playing stops, they learn to keep it gentle--before they're taught, as older pups, to not bite at all when playing with people, so that when some oblivious fool steps on a paw or tail and gets a defensive bite, it's a gentle warning rather than a savaging from a dog that doesn't know how to control its jaw muscles.
Spike is a puppy who never got to practice bite strength with other puppies.
And this is exactly what one in the know would expect to happen.
Another really well done chapter
"hugs Spike tight"
Talia had some valid points about immortality, but so did Gleam: this will undoubtedly help a lot of ponies, but they can't go crazy with it. While Fighter Phoenix is right about mortality giving us something to strive for, you can't deny that there are people out there who deserve a second chance.
Progress is about improving the quality of life through change and evolution; transformation, you could say It doesn't have to be straight-up immortality, that wouldn't be fair, but an extended lifespan and the ability to combat the nastier diseases sounds more well-balanced. After all, Gleaming wouldn't be the new Alicorn of Life if there wasn't a reason for her to ascend.