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A thousand years before the time of Twilight Sparkle and her friends, Equestria was still a growing nation. They had been left alone by their neighboring kingdoms, the Kingdom of Gryphonia and the Realm of the Dragon Lords. But when greed, lies, and deception turn both of these nations against Equestria, Princesses Celestia and Luna call their little ponies to arms.

One of these ponies is IronTrot, an Earth pony from the small village of Neighvgorod. This is the story of his death, offer, and rebirth. This is the story of his Legend.

Cover Art by Shauntau

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 25 )

Other than a number of spelling and grammar errors, I do like the idea and plot of it. Do continue it, I like these types of stories :twilightsmile:

Not bad not bad a very good plot here. Good Work :twilightsmile:

*claps slowly*
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340442>>340452>>340523 Thanks, guys. I really did enjoy writing this, and the idea was in my head for a long time. I'm glad you all enjoyed it. As for any errors, I do try me best to keep those to a minimum.

It's getting better methinks, keep it up :yay:

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I'm glad you liked it. I actually didn't think this one would come out as well as it did.

Just a suggestion, but there should be longer chapters. Chapter 2 didn't really cover a lot of things other than IronTrot's memories.

Bravo on the great ending of that chapter, I can't wait to see more :scootangel: I'm actually starting to care for some of the characters surprisingly, I was worried IronTrot would turn out one dimensional and boring but apparently not.

Spelling and punctuation errors from previous chapters are still present, so do try to write a full chapter without any, lol. There are usually only a few though. Also just a very small gripe, but why would the name given to the gryphon nation be "gryphonic"? Doesn't "gryphonian" or something sound better?

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Glad you enjoyed it. I actually use a bit of my own personality for IronTrot. I've also tried to cut down on errors as much as I can. As for the whole "Gryphonic" vs. "Gyrphonian" thing, I hadn't put a lot of thought into it. "Gryphonic" just seemed right to me.

561237 Thank you, and I'm glad you're enjoying it. :twilightsmile:

so a dragon sided with the Equestrians? cant wait for the next

Well, there it is folks. Legendary is finished, though some may not like how it was ended. To them I say: wait for the sequel. :twilightsmile:

Also, this is my first completed fanfic on this site, which I think is a huge accomplishment for me. Huzzah!

Sequel cant wait for it

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I'm glad you enjoyed this. The sequel is going to be less focused on war, though. It'll be just as good, though.:twilightsmile:

Let's see 1000 years then I think he will meet the Main Six now that should be something that will make Twilight squee.:twilightsmile:

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Yup, you've caught me. The sequel will have the Main 6, and Twilight gets to meet a living piece of lost history.

1651983 Well it was kinda of obvious you know. And also I wonder how he will react to Luna since she was blame for his situation.

finaly got around to finishing this
cant wait for the sequel

Aren't you writing the sequal right now?!?

Seriously why always a thousand years? I not ranting but why not 678 years? or 980 years?

"Oh, hey there! I've never seen you two around here before!" Yelled a completely pink mare, startling us.

DAMN IT PINKY!!!

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