Drake is living a boring life. It may not be terrible, but it's monotonous. He knows that everything will just keep happening the way it has been already, but doesn't want to accept it. He wants change. He wants a new life, but gets more than he bargained for. Now he has himself re-written and thrown into Equestria, but not all is as it seems.
Crossover with a little bit of Skyrim, a little bit of Stargate, a little Portal, and much more later.
Avoids clichés such as: Brony protagonist, WTF talking ponies, WTF am I, complete Mary Sue, the worf affect, and the part where a giant monster is slain in Ponyville and all the ponies love him for it/hates him for it.
Drake is not what he seems
Chapters (14)
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that's about right for them
! the glue factory should never have been shut down, but since it has they still have little chance of learning that some just don't heel when some steak says to
Holy shoot- this is awesome, I look forward to more chapters! You're a good writer!
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4249432 0.o. His armour is based on Jaff guard helmets?
Quite a lot of elements at work here. HIE, Transformed into a Dragon, Implied Relationship to Spike, Unique Powers & Tools & GLaDOS as a companion. Any one of those elements could make a great story on their own (And indeed, have) but I hope that mixing them all together doesn't make the story too cluttered.
I'll definitely be watching to find out though.
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I must say that this may be your first story and what ever your doing keep it up! can't wait for next chapter!
4255974 <BAD RAPPING MODE IN 3... 2... 1... WE HAVE RAPOFF.>
Jaffa 'Kree,
yeah you know me,
I'm makin' a reference,
to a stargate movie!
<ENDING RAPPING.>
I thought it was appropriate given that the Horus guards were the ones that protected Ra and his family, and Drake is looking for his family to protect
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I love this! When will the next chapter be?
4313700 working on chap 2 right now.
Need suggestions for the chapter name...
I was thinking maybe still alive or no rest for the wicked.
4318108 still alive because it show spike is still alive and have the guy say something like I thought you died or I was loosing hope when he finds spike or have him get pissed because twilight "stole" his brother.
4318108 no rest for the wicked has a nice ring to it but I don't see how it would connect to the chapter. so I would have to go with still alive, because of glados. But make them get super surprised when they find out spike and him are brothers! twilight and her friends will be sad that that called spikes brother a monster.
4319557 Wait... Twilight didn't steal the egg though, and he knows it. I thought that Celestia
and the fall of the dragon empire might have something to do with it.
EDIT: nice profile pic tho.
so is he like Alduin? plus the rasist thing was really funny :)
4438685 He is a direct descendant of Alduin. The racist thing just seemed logical because any time they see a dragon besides Spike it turns out being evil.
Which is dumb.
And leads to racism.
Which leads to assumptions.
And those assumptions lead to exaggerated things, such as 'crimes'.
Is your pic a Megatron dragon?
ponies that need to be butchered wholesale as far as the eye can see, not all that unusaul in storie here recentally
4440171 it looks like it, I just type in electric dragon on google.
4440356 Lol, cool.
4440177 Now now, that's a bit extreme.
But then again, that's what the ponies thought about the dragons.
Maybe you're right.
But that's not going to happen in the story.
Maybe.
EDIT: WAIT... you meant like their personalities.
I thought you meant like shredding them physically!
so tia was responcable for spike's families murders then? it would fit
Shocking!
XD Trixie
4544096 Yeah, I was originally gonna have it hit RD but it just seemed funnier with Trixie!
you have my attention with this story ahem please.....continue
4544396 yessir mister... archangel?
>.> <.< THE SECRET IS OUT BATTEN DOWN THE HATCHES
4545614 Yeah you're Archangel Michael!
noooooo im archangel fiction not Michael he wishes he was me
What is this a crossover with?
4629025 skyrim, stargate, and more later.
4629123 ah. Why isn't that listed in the description?
4634642 I should probably do that, shouldn't I?
4636268
I like it, but when I saw the guys face... I thought it would be more sly, like a fox, not so hard. but besides that it's good. But you shouldn't rely on drawing to show your characters, it's meant for the reader to think of how they look with the words they are given. but it is really is good!
4656484 Thanks! I'll keep that in mind.
Also, it's supposed to be an inaccurate illustration to make him seem more fearsome (note the big teeth)
4656502 ah it make's sense, but in my mind I saw a beaten inventor with a ripped brown cap trying to find his brother, speaking of brother they keep missing each other by seconds! by now it's just dumb luck!
4656570 His information is really old, so he still thought Spike was in Canterlot. He also didn't know what Spike looked like, his name, or where exactly he lived.
4656596 all he knows is that his brother is a purple egg... but now is a purple and green baby dragon, snd1.splashpress1.netdna-cdn.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/GapxIUf.gif
4657164 he's gonna show up at the library, Spike's gonna open the door, and he's gonna be like
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then Spike's gonna be like
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OMG
Also, you got the 42nd comment! Have some more T!
4658375 me the 42ed? and to think I brought my towel!
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but I can't wait! just to think you made a trolls 2, hitch hikers guide to the galaxy and a Ace Ventura/Jim Carrey references all in one comment just to describe the future chapter, I can't wait!
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4658597 the scary part of that is that I've already seen that commercial...
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4658668 Okay... what the FFFFFFFFFFfffffffuuuuuuuuuuu?... well that ones new... oh god it's starring into my soul!!!
Yay! Update!
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