• Published 29th Mar 2012
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Desire and Deep Water - Crowley



Twilight falls in love with a water-loving pony who looks after Ponyville Lake.

Comments ( 231 )

I'd love to skip my psychology class for this, but it has to wait until this evening I guess :pinkiesad2:

Crowley has a new fic up? Pffft my psychology lecture isn't that important anyway :raritywink:

Damn, I have to WAIT to read this.......why you post early?:trollestia::trollestia:
Can't wait to read this!

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So cute, good job.

Dangit, gotta wait until I get back from classes, but make no mistake, I will read the ever-loving crap out of this when I return. :twilightsmile:

You just had to post this the day I have a 12 hour work shift didn't you?

Wait a second... How did you know? Are you a spy???

Seriously, I'm really excited to read this. Definitely something to look forward to when I get off work.

Cheers,
M@

"an underwater pony fetish" Where do you come up with this stuff? :rainbowderp: :rainbowlaugh:
Loved the story, especially the first chapter with its drama! :pinkiegasp:
Can barely wait for your next work Crowley :twilightsmile:
-Glassed

XD Dat Spoiler... Is it sad that the fetish I got was the Milkshake? xD /shot

Anywho... Just like always, THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME!

Totally worth reading in the middle of class for! Kinda awkward, but It's a good thing no one can look over my shoulder. All in all a great fic and I can't wait until the next one Crowley!

I like how you intertwine some of your other stories just a bit into each other and keep them all in the same universe. It adds a lot more to your writing, honestly.

Another great story. Awesome job.

Oh the memories of "Desire and Deep Water" of the Shipping collections. I'd say the "redux" (I can't brain any other word right now for it :derpytongue2: )
is excellently done! Success of the Successor! Well done Crowley! :yay:

Wow, stunning...really nice!:twilightsmile::twilightblush:

...That’s a terribly rude thing to do to the recently deceased. As soon as you figure out how to be a ghost or something, you should totally haunt whoever’s doing that... - That line made me laugh the most for some reason.

This was a good as I thought it was going to be, like I said there are only a few worse things than drowning like burning alive, getting eating by a bear, having your face ripped off by a monkey, or fixing a clogged garbage disposal and it turns on with your hand inside. There were some really great d'awww moments and I love the call back to other fics especially the human or as the main character of this says he Looked like a cross between an ape, a shaved weasel and a diamond dog, again another laugh.

We now have too many fetishes because of you Crowley: underwater pony fetish, Twilight Sparkle fetish, an Applejack fetish, a pony fetish, Lucid dreaming fetish, a possession-by-a-millenia-old-evil-being fetish, massage fetish, wall-eye fetish, Fluttershy fetish, a cave fetish and a Rainbow Dash fetish. DAMN YOU!!! :rainbowlaugh:

I'd give you a 5/5 Stars.
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Peace Out.

Crowley.

Why do you always have to get Equestria Daily???

Good show indeed a favorite.

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I'm on Equestria Daily?!? How'd that happen?!?

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Because!

You somehow make these really fucking amazing fics, don't deny it.

Earned a watch sir. :D

Just so you all know, the underwater fetish is part of a philia called Erotic Asphyxiation a.k.a Asphyxiophilia and it has a mortality rate of around 250 to 1000 deaths per year in the United States and additional amounts around the world. All because poor schmucks have trouble controlling their urges and forget using their better judgement.

382243 Not trying to sound rude, but you'd rather die of erotic drowning than anything else? There are less embarrassing ways to go, lad, you don't wanna join the choir invisible this way, I assure you.

Another amazing story man, no surprise you've got quite the fanbase building for yourself. Keep up the great stories! :ajsmug:

Truly a great story.

Filled with sorrow and love, and angry as well makes a spicy combination of two flavores while adding a element of zest!

Along with a sweet flavor of surprise, truly a boutique to have!

You have the works good sir.

I had expected the drowning scene to disturb me, but it didn't. And I'm a hydrophobe!
But I suppose if I had listened to sonic the hedgehog's drowning theme while reading this, I would've been terrified.
Love the story and we all have some type of fetish.
We're on Fimfiction for a reason.:trixieshiftright:

Can't wait until the next one!:pinkiehappy:

~8chill

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That's kinda why I wrote a blog update warning readers of it - it's a very odd thing to like, but it exists. I was kinda nervous writing about it, know that not everyone will like it (then again, my Applejack fic was just as controversial for different reasons). However, I knew that I wanted to write it regardless.

I'm aware of these kind of dangers, especially since I frequent sites that deal with this sort of thing; and I can assure you, as odd as the fetish is, there are pages upon pages upon pages of helpful safety tips and advice there for pretty much every scenario and occasion. They may like what they do, but they take safety precautions very seriously. Although I guess you could say this fic helps point out how NOT to do it!

Psst. Hey man. I totally have a weasel-ape fetish because of you. I dont know how it happened...

Aside from dumb jokes. I dug it. You may have my thumb.

I still have problems with dating. For example:
Invisibillity!

But I digress!

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Whoa, that pic's kinda messing the page up. :rainbowderp: Could you just delete that, and link it instead?

Interesting... But I detect a severe lack of drownings.
Needs more death bro. Needs more death.

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I'd probably have to slap Dark and Gore tags on it if I did that. I really have no intention of drowning them, since that's not really what I want to convey.

382397 Damn. Well, it would have been cool.
My overall reaction to this story:
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Your work is excellent, as usual. You sir, are a cornerstone of the writing community here on this site. Well done sir, well done.

yay, it's up! *reading*

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With a bit magic here and there...

Done!

>implying I didn't already have ALL those fetishes (including drowning)
I'm from /tg/. We have a fetish for toaster-girls with an inferiority complex (among other things). You can't even touch me.

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You make it sound like Crowley giving us fetishes is a BAD thing. But then, the only fetishes I've gotten from Crowley are lucid dreaming and underwater pony. I already HAD all the others.

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Fair enough. But the nurse checked her heart because hypothermia is known for causing heart failure quite often, and is a leading cause of victims dying even after they've been rescued and dried off. The brain damage would be more worrying if she had passed out while underwater, but since she managed to escape intact (and not being underwater for that long) the hypothermia would probably be the major thing to look out for.

I looked into this stuff for a lot while making this, in case I made a false diagnosis. Luckily, I'm allowed to make the "can't use magic" part up, since, hey, it's magic.

Very sweet and well-done. I love it, especially the very brief reference to the other story you did with AJ and the human.
Heh, you won't be stopping until you've done one for every member of the mane six, will you? I hope not anyway.
And with Twilight? Heh, Who wouldn't love some Twilight kisses? :heart::twilightsmile:

plain old awsome dude good job :twilightsmile:

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yeah i know that now, sorry this was the first one i read.:facehoof:

Very well written (As always, it seems), Crowley, great job. I loved this!
Keep up the amazing work, you awesome writer, you! :twilightsmile:

I saw that this was a Crowley fic and tracked it immediately. Can't wait to read this

Oh man, I feel so bad for the people that have to wait to read this. Though, to be honest, maybe if they could just read at a decent pace... :ajbemused:
Nah I'm kidding. I'm not exactly a speed reader myself, so... And anyways, who would want to rush through one of Crowley's magnificent pieces?

This was so god damn adorable I was squeeing a mile a minute. Just... Oh my god. :heart:

Crowley, you are a magnificent writer. I love all of the little quips the characters have, and how easy it is to put oneself into the character.
And the sensual bits don't hurt either! :twilightblush:

Btw, another poster reminded me. All of those little waves to previous fics, I love those. It's like, that bit of recognition, like, 'Oh I know who that is!' is kind of... a rush, I guess? Idk, but it's a great thing. On the topic of that, I'm so glad that Human x AJ is treated like the others; canonical, as it were. It was kind of my favorite one...

Anyways, upvoted and favorited, as always. I look forward to the next fic~ :ajsmug:

I got an email about this in English class today. Lets just say im definitely not gonna pass my test tomorrow. :yay:

You actually managed to make my favourite 2nd person shipfic even better. Clearly you have made a deal with the devil to become such a superb author.

Yes. Would've commented earlier, but my connection glitched. Love your work man, great story. As always, details are excellent, the fact that each character has quirks makes it seem that much more real... Love it man.
I'd say that this story is definitely worth an *EPIC BRO-FIST-HOOF* /)
I think I'll leave on this note...
AMAZING

Another amazing story...
What else can I say?

I think I got a wardrobe fetish. Am I doing this wrong?

STOP GIVING ME FETISHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

I Go:coolphoto:

Hey, Ponyville Lake also appears in a chapter of one of my stories.

Cutie Mark Crusader Deep Water Salvage

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Yes, I'm the same guy.

And no, I did not read that story. I'll check it out.

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Thats good enough.

I saw this was by Crowley and went
"OH MY GOF IT'S ANOTHER STORY BY CROWLEY!!!!"

Stupid Crowley, giving me weird fetishes.

"she grabbed ... what she grabbed"

Great im gonna have dreams now

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Wardrobe fetish? Clearly you were supposed to get a scrap fetish.

Anywhooooo... another amazing story Crowley. I enjoyed it a lot. N-No not like that kind of enjoyed! I meant I really liked reading it! N-n-no! Dang it not like that kind of reading I meant like!!! Crap! Ahhhhhh!!!! *Runs away before accidentally typing more things that can be taken the wrong way*.

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