err the photos wernt that great for this chapter like its kinda wierd looking at them and dosnt get your point across mabey try playing with the lighting some or dont risk pics if your not sure thy look pleasent but the previous one were great so dont let that critsim kill your pic makeing
384656 I think it's to do with the fact that most of the pictures we see on Crowley's stories not only fade to white quite smoothly, but that they also only include the target character in them. It almost jarring to see a whole picture of a scene while we're reading it, and visualing the scene in our own minds.
384573 Well darn, how does it take me nearly seven weeks to see this comment?
If you still want to make a different version of the second image at this point, just let me know! I'll even send you the bigger versions of the picture for reference via PM, if you like! Plus I'd credit you, of course!
XD Woohoo! Wet-maned Twi FTW!
being this closer to her takes a lot out of you!
>> minor error! OH NOES.
I don't really like the photos Vry much its kinda like taking the imagination factor out of reading
Oh wooo. Thought she was gonna near drown or something again.
Everything went better than expected.
I feel the need to make you a render for your second image though, it's a tad.. sketchy~
err the photos wernt that great for this chapter like its kinda wierd looking at them and dosnt get your point across mabey try playing with the lighting some or dont risk pics if your not sure thy look pleasent but the previous one were great so dont let that critsim kill your pic makeing
384656 I think it's to do with the fact that most of the pictures we see on Crowley's stories not only fade to white quite smoothly, but that they also only include the target character in them.
It almost jarring to see a whole picture of a scene while we're reading it, and visualing the scene in our own minds.
384573
Well darn, how does it take me nearly seven weeks to see this comment?
If you still want to make a different version of the second image at this point, just let me know! I'll even send you the bigger versions of the picture for reference via PM, if you like! Plus I'd credit you, of course!
Well, knowing what it's like to almost drown myself, I can certainly understand the panic!!!
Also deviantart.com/download/291492601/dat_plot_by_frankier77-d4tjp4p.png ,
Dat Wet Mane!!!!
Now, onto the reason for that mature tag.
so cute!!
Wet anything is awesome to look at if I'm being honest...
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Yeah you... you know what I'm talking about...
Nice job!
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