great story and makeing the reader a charater is cool escept its kinda creepy thinking my fav pony has a crush on me when i get creeped out when someone says any pony is hot but im reading a romance so i shall continue (granted since im a pony its not nearly as akward
Lake-pony has an impressive record for breath holding. But he will never have the amazing breath holding ability Guybrush Threepwood has! ... Or maybe I'm wrong.
damn it Crowley why are your stories so damn good? I was only going to read part one tonight but now I just finished part 4 cuz its too awesome. Why? WHY?
I if ever meet someone who is never referred to by their name, and I can not find what their name is without basically finding their birth certificate, I will silently respect them, and probably go insane from realizing that I am a character in a fictional work. Heh. Heh. Heh. 609588 I'd probably get up to eighteen if I was alone all day, and could find a good fic to read for most if it.
Damn, I almost found out what "my" name is. I took Theatre for a while. Loved it, hated Romeo and Juliet. Only difference between fifth and tenth grade performances was the other actors and scene four I think?
the tables have turned on Twilight, she knows his crush on Rarity; and now he knows of her crush for you, well, me... how about the Janitor of the lake
What twilight did with the lake is like saying "I'm cooking chicken for the first time, and it look s like it might be done. Let's just take half a bite of this, I don't need to worry about food poisoning"
Why do I suddenly imagine Twilight "Rarity-Sighing" again and then imagining something akin to this: "The Warden of the Lake, his arm clad in the purest shimmering silmite held aloft Excalibur from the bosom of the water, signifying by divine providence that …" and our Lake Warden breaking into her fantasizing with "Another damn sword! Ponies throw all kinds of junk in here!"
Spike, you little divil ya!
Great story! Going in my faves!
And Boom!
The guilt trip is now a relationship...
I pictured Spike making this face:
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That fits the boot.
383155 You like (Insert name here) don't you Twilight?
383155 Ditto
383155 jeez,you probably couldnt get more spot on than that.
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Indeed good sir
great story and makeing the reader a charater is cool escept its kinda creepy thinking my fav pony has a crush on me when i get creeped out when someone says any pony is hot but im reading a romance so i shall continue (granted since im a pony its not nearly as akward
Nice name use prevention. I wasn't liking this all that much before this chapter, but the self-loathing should be past and it's sounding better.
Oh yeah, you're definitely pulling a Fight Club. I predict the earth pony will never be named!!
Lake-pony has an impressive record for breath holding.
But he will never have the amazing breath holding ability Guybrush Threepwood has!
... Or maybe I'm wrong.
I am so glad I decided to read this :)
I'm calling him Waterhoof ^^
383155 a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/e/tealcindeedplz.jpg
You win an Internet for that genius of a cover to avoid saying names.
damn it Crowley why are your stories so damn good? I was only going to read part one tonight but now I just finished part 4 cuz its too awesome. Why? WHY?
383155 That's fuckin' funny!
383155 You like Junk-Jack, don't you Twilight? (IDK, I can't think of a name right now)
PS: Twilight's face is the epitome of adorkable in this chapter.
That picture made me D'AWWW
Fourteen hours? Pony please, I've spent that long reading fan-fiction. And I don't even consider myself a heavy reader.
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Well played
I if ever meet someone who is never referred to by their name, and I can not find what their name is without basically finding their birth certificate, I will silently respect them, and probably go insane from realizing that I am a character in a fictional work. Heh. Heh. Heh.
609588 I'd probably get up to eighteen if I was alone all day, and could find a good fic to read for most if it.
>>dukes good name
Damn, I almost found out what "my" name is. I took Theatre for a while. Loved it, hated Romeo and Juliet. Only difference between fifth and tenth grade performances was the other actors and scene four I think?
Okay, another "me" with no name. So, a nickname for "me"........something to do with diving or swimming.....huh, I got nothing!!!!
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He's officially "the Lake Warden".
So my name's Mmph? funny sounding name if you ask me, "I" should probably get it changed.
My name is "Mmph"... That makes sense because that's the last sound you make before you drown lol
That picture of Twilight blushing was sooooo goddamn CUTE!!
the tables have turned on Twilight, she knows his crush on Rarity; and now he knows of her crush for you, well, me... how about the Janitor of the lake
What twilight did with the lake is like saying "I'm cooking chicken for the first time, and it look s like it might be done. Let's just take half a bite of this, I don't need to worry about food poisoning"
Twilight probably thinking of Baywatch
Twilight probably thinking of Baywatch
That fable joke
2185929 I'm having poor luck finding that vector.
I know what comes next. Gossip!
lol... Rarity Sigh, hehehe.
Nicely done!
Why do I suddenly imagine Twilight "Rarity-Sighing" again and then imagining something akin to this:
"The Warden of the Lake, his arm clad in the purest shimmering silmite
held aloft Excalibur from the bosom of the water, signifying by divine
providence that …"
and our Lake Warden breaking into her fantasizing with "Another damn sword! Ponies throw all kinds of junk in here!"