(Btw, this is REALLY good! My ONLY complaint so far? How the heck did the water get so cold so fast? The ice couldn't have been there more than 10 minutes! (Although, we CAN just chalk that up to magic, so... XD Keep calm and Borny on! /] )
I didnt think i was goint to like this story, but damn its awesome. I really like how you cover a lot of the details. for example explaining why she just didnt teleport out of the lake. One minor error though "...She’s like this because made her..." im going to assume you meant "...She’s like this because you made her...".
383166 Oh hi! Are you the same marioandsonic from Ponibooru?
No, I mean "stallion"; the one that's with Fluttershy in that scene. Who exactlly is that stallion, you ask? Read Even Kindness Needs Kindness and find out his backstory through his own eyes!
383447 To be perfectly honest, none of them actually have descriptions; just like every other "you" character, it's there so you can picture the main character however you like. The most restrictions you get when visualising characters is race, which is described in each story, sometimes as a plot point, and personality. Appearance, however, is totally up for grabs for each "you" character.
383473 I think that's REALLY cool! I have yet to read the story you just mentioned, but I think that's really neat.
It's sorta like seeing the silent, faceless protagonist you played as in one game, through the eyes of a different silent, faceless protagonist you play as in the next game.
382113 ............................................................................. you really asking that or just trolling to answer your question read the first part again you'll find your answer really quickly
Gah... I was about ready to ask "Who the fuck are Posey and Sparkler?" but then it dawned on me that Fimfiction must be April-fools word-filtering us. Must be early-gen pony names. Damnit.
Knowing Fluttershy, getting to know her is not going to be an easy feat.
But I just have to point out that I love that second picture of Twilight. I was able to count at least 4 of the mixed emotions she was feeling... Frustration, Anger, Sadness, and just a general sense of uselessness.
I like this very much. I find it pretty hard to get Twilight's personality just right, but I think you nailed it, Sir. Also...Fluttershy with a Boyfriend? I dunno, maybe it's just the Boy (instead of Marefriend, Stallionfriend, Rabbitfriend) part of it, but I think it's an awkward thought.
610681 You might recognise Fluttershy's boyfriend; he's the main character from Even Kindness needs Kindness. I also thought it was gonna be something like "marefriend" or "fillyfriend" or something, but it seems canon disagrees. In the Hearts and Hooves day episode, Scootaloo says "His girlfriend sure thinks so!", so I guess it's "girlfriend" and, by expansion, "boyfriend" that they use in Equestria.
*what probably happened* *in sync* "Hi I'm-" "Hi I'm-" "You go first, dude." "You go first, dude." "Are you-?" "Are you-?" "Stop copying me!" "Stop copying me!" "Twilight, tell him to stop!" "Fluttershy, tell him to stop!" "Hey, cut it out!" "Hey, cut it out!" *silence* "Are you another me?" "Are you another me?" "Oh, that explains it..." "Oh, that explains it..."
Woohoo! First again! *Trollface*
(Btw, this is REALLY good! My ONLY complaint so far? How the heck did the water get so cold so fast? The ice couldn't have been there more than 10 minutes! (Although, we CAN just chalk that up to magic, so... XD Keep calm and Borny on! /] )
I didnt think i was goint to like this story, but damn its awesome. I really like how you cover a lot of the details. for example explaining why she just didnt teleport out of the lake. One minor error though "...She’s like this because made her..." im going to assume you meant "...She’s like this because you made her...".
I spy an error:
“Are you Spike’s assistant?” asks the stallion.
You mean, "mare", correct?
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Oh hi! Are you the same marioandsonic from Ponibooru?
No, I mean "stallion"; the one that's with Fluttershy in that scene. Who exactlly is that stallion, you ask? Read Even Kindness Needs Kindness and find out his backstory through his own eyes!
383197 if that's the case then both stallions in the story look the same.
Pretty cool reference. I love that story.
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To be perfectly honest, none of them actually have descriptions; just like every other "you" character, it's there so you can picture the main character however you like. The most restrictions you get when visualising characters is race, which is described in each story, sometimes as a plot point, and personality. Appearance, however, is totally up for grabs for each "you" character.
383473 I think that's REALLY cool! I have yet to read the story you just mentioned, but I think that's really neat.
It's sorta like seeing the silent, faceless protagonist you played as in one game, through the eyes of a different silent, faceless protagonist you play as in the next game.
...Only they're not silent...
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While Fluttershy's boyfriend is both male and a stallion, having both there is redundant, especially when you probably meant to describe his race.
382113 ............................................................................. you really asking that or just trolling to answer your question read the first part again you'll find your answer really quickly
I really had thought that this story might suck. but I just can't stop reading it now because of how good it is, keep up the good work.
Aww, Fluttershy has a boyfriend!
Posey sounds like another Fluttershy. But that's just me.
Pardon me, I meant Fluttershy
Gah... I was about ready to ask "Who the fuck are Posey and Sparkler?" but then it dawned on me that Fimfiction must be April-fools word-filtering us. Must be early-gen pony names. Damnit.
Great story so far.
388432 A Crowley story? Sucking?
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Knowing Fluttershy, getting to know her is not going to be an easy feat.
But I just have to point out that I love that second picture of Twilight. I was able to count at least 4 of the mixed emotions she was feeling... Frustration, Anger, Sadness, and just a general sense of uselessness.
P.S. Yay for references to previous stories!
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Cheers! Fun fact; I edited the watering eyes myself.
Where do you get the pictures from?
Very good story by the way.
394543 a.deviantart.net/avatars/b/a/badassplz.gif?1
503472 ...Guy.
I like this very much. I find it pretty hard to get Twilight's personality just right, but I think you nailed it, Sir.
Also...Fluttershy with a Boyfriend? I dunno, maybe it's just the Boy (instead of Marefriend, Stallionfriend, Rabbitfriend) part of it, but I think it's an awkward thought.
610681
You might recognise Fluttershy's boyfriend; he's the main character from Even Kindness needs Kindness.
I also thought it was gonna be something like "marefriend" or "fillyfriend" or something, but it seems canon disagrees. In the Hearts and Hooves day episode, Scootaloo says "His girlfriend sure thinks so!", so I guess it's "girlfriend" and, by expansion, "boyfriend" that they use in Equestria.
Yes, I seem to overthink stuff like this...
Wow... Fluttershy's boyfriend sure is handsome... But he looks awfully familiar... Oh, I got it! He looks exactly like me! :D
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"[Fluttershy] is down stairs with her boyfriend." Arrrgh That should be me! . . . Wait a minute it is me. Argh this is emotionally confusing!
Yes, Celestia is that much of a joker!!!
1877103 you'd think he would of heard of Trollestia?
Hi! You look familiar. Oh yeah.....
1258152 Weirdo
Was the guy's name ever mentioned in the story, because if it was I didn't catch it. I am so confused, I don't know his name.
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His name is intentionally omitted for the reader's sake. Basically, it's whatever name you want it to be!
The male isn't necessary, unless you're gonna repalce Stallion with his race, Unicorn, earth pony, etc.
Nice chapter!
*what probably happened*
*in sync*
"Hi I'm-"
"Hi I'm-"
"You go first, dude."
"You go first, dude."
"Are you-?"
"Are you-?"
"Stop copying me!"
"Stop copying me!"
"Twilight, tell him to stop!"
"Fluttershy, tell him to stop!"
"Hey, cut it out!"
"Hey, cut it out!"
*silence*
"Are you another me?"
"Are you another me?"
"Oh, that explains it..."
"Oh, that explains it..."
The sex scene disappointed me on so many levels.