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Belgerum
I write fics just like I play the tuba. I wing it, and hope the fart that comes out sounds at least somewhat right.
Belgerum
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Thank you, and I'm glad you liked it.
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Nicely constructed opinion... you don't see that around here often. Also,
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3749946 I bet it is, and yes your statement is true. I have read plenty of clopfics that actually held good stories within them.
3750720
Well, There is also some decently written clop out there without stories backing them. If it's written well enough, clop by itself can still be decent.
Ooh kinky I'll enjoy this.
Ummmm. Sorry, I had to stop reading when Fluttershy got a Penis somehow <_< Jokes about 'Hanging' out with bats aside, aren't bats mammals?.. lizard tongues?
Damn this was Sweet,
However.....now that you've left it open ended...SEQUEL....PLEASE!!!!
You know...when you feel up to it...no rush
3751988
Bats are indeed mammals. I don't believe I said her tongue was like that of a lizard, but I'll look it over, and see if I can clear that up through edits.
3752167
Well, I don't know. A sequel might be possible, but if it does happen, it will probably take a good while, and would take some consideration. If it was just Flutterbat or Applebat raping another pony, the revelations would have already been made, and probably be less effective. More likely, it would involve Applebat and Flutterbat doing shipping stuff, and trying to find a place to live together in ponyville. No matter what, though, it'd take planning, and a decent amount of writing time.
Though I won't be reading it, I have to congratulate you on that title pun
dunno y, but I kind of hoped for a Joffrey Baratheon ending
would totally have fit with Flutterbat's personality
Wow. That was hot.
Also keep in mind that Twi won't likely let them get away without hitting them with the reversal, so if you go slice-of-life style for a sequel, don't forget to keep that in mind. Could be various ways to interpret that, as it wasn't entirely effective on Flutterbat. Now that she's turned a fledgeling, it might have even less effect... but it might satisfy Twi that it's turned her moral compass back around and cut the urges down to something that won't have her depopulating the orchard, at least. Would you go with the old vampire tales, and have Applebat entirely subject to Flutterbat's will, or something similar?
And then there's the other path, where Flutterbat and Applebat rape and turn the rest of their friends. They were in on Applejack's mob mentality too. That'd be the pure clopfic path, of course. Hm, probably go after Rainbow together, then let her take Pinkie while they get Rarity. Want all five to deal with Ms. Magic. And she'd need to learn a Blood Replenishment spell of some sort so they don't almost-kill a pony every time they wanna fuck. Likely the Princesses would get involved at that point though.
Would really love to see either of these sequels
... Woah.I...I genuinely have nothing to say.
I freaked when I realized she had a phallus...but then I remembered the warning...
Very well made, a few typos I guess...but still, awesome job dude
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Well, I haven't exactly thought either of the options out at this point, but considering it seems the more logical option, and the one that seems the closest to the plotline of this fic, the second option is probably more likely.
Can't say if it'll happen at the moment, but it might. I'll talk to my co-author about it.
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it's an army thing, just the longer serving guys tend to care less about who they tell
I don't much like the ending at all. I don't find the complete 180 in emotion to be anywhere near realistic.
There was too much hurt and too much betrayal for it to turn into anything resembling love.
you relly screw my mind with this it has all my fetishes in one
Normally I wouldn't be interested in some story created by a human, based off a childish TV show.
But this caught my attention and I'm amused by it's darkness, minus the last part were the one known as "Flutterbat" showed kindness to the one called "Applejack"
. Still I liked it so, I DEMAND A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!
If you don't comply then prepare to feel the wrath of Megatron!!!!!!!!
I felt violated just reading because I was getting a very unwelcome erection. If you guys liked this check out Hypnotic Adventures of Blank Sheet. Good writing, I'll read you around!
I'm not entirely into the hole futa thing... But this one was good... It was intersting and kinda hot lol...
The ending was not at all what I had expected. While it still remained a pretty dark ending it felt kind of warm and fuzzy which was weird when paired with all the craziness that led up to it. Overall the whole thing was terrible but in the good way. I feel kind of ashamed to admit it but it was crazy hot good. Nice job you freak you
I found many errors. I'll tell you what they are when I remember to
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3810812 Okay, here's one thing:
>Applejack pulled her head back from it’s relaxed position on her friend’s side
You used "it's" instead of "its" several times
3813417
Ok, should be fixed now, thanks.
3813538 I found one more occurrence of that error:
>as the blood loss began to take it’s toll
3813551
Curses, foiled again!
3813663 Now that you've fixed that, I have some more:
>who was now hers to deal with a she pleased
>growing closer and closer to climax, She knew it wouldn’t be long
>What in equestria could she mean by
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3813764 Don't worry, it's just my way of saying I love you
I fucking loved it...
3822356
Because magic.
I loved it all it was awesome
Fun fact. Ponies don't naturally have Canines, so they would have to grow completely new teeth instead of making existing ones bigger.
3845603
You underestimate the power of Friendship.
err... I mean magic.
All hail.
Well
That was interesting
wwoooo update i wonder who will be next
Still no transformation sequence. D:
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damn, i wasn't expecting a continuation so quickly...very impressive,
Highly enjoyable... Its a good read.... Very well done... When's the next chapter?
>Tenderrape
Awesome, one of my new favorites
It was a good character it be funny after Rainbow dash is fully transforms she now hates Flutterbat for what she did for all eternity I know I would if I was her.:
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Actually they do their called wolf teeth.
experience? yeah ive had one of the stallions on my grandmas farm pick me up and throw me like a rag doll. they hurt
http://evds.net.au/article_wolf_teeth.php