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Belgerum
I write fics just like I play the tuba. I wing it, and hope the fart that comes out sounds at least somewhat right.
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Yes. Yes. This story gets all of my yes. Well done!
I liked this. Have a favourite and and upvote.
(Though I have to admit that I can't find the pictures you are referring to in your description.)
Well, if I were Rainbow the first thing I would have done is smash Featherweight's camera. Yeah I know he's just a kid but he should know better, of course I'd offer to buy him a new one later. I would have told the stallion at the bench press to piss of. And lastly after getting dressed and getting rid of Pinkie, I'd find Applejack and slap her really hard.
Poor Rainbow.
get applejack payback
Applejack really got her good.
5340571 Try looking for Jay's Tumblr, and filtering his posts by "Rainbow Dash"
5340571 Better known as Lil-miss-jaye.
Do NOT ask me how I know that.
To be honest I was waiting for a colt to come up and start screwing her on one of the machines.
But its a good story nonetheless. 
i.imgflip.com/evg70.jpg
Moral of the story: Don't make bets, young ones.
Well this was a fun fic to read! hope Jay continues with more!
5340571 jrvanesbroek look fir this guy
Welp, Jay made another pic.
Marking this story incomplete now.
*looks to his Oc Kul'as* what do you think? Ask for a sequel with Luna?
Kul'as: tell him don't stop I'm getting aroused. *wings pop out and his Cobra Commander slithers out*
Cobra: me too.*hood opens*
So sequel please I guess.
Oh, but I do. Please, continue.
Spotted a few small errors.
on
and
lowercase the word after both these quotes
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Oh Schnap!
This story is about to get crazy!
Good, but why didn't Rainbow get arrested? Nudity is very widely illegal, and nothing in the story countered that in any way.
5342195 Because it's Equestria, and not Earth? Different laws and all that crap.
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Thank you kindly. Fixed.
5342140
Eeyup.
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5342221
What he said, and also because buck logic it's porn. If you wanted a story about Rainbow dash being sent to jail, and the torture that ensued for her, you came to the wrong place.
....Can't believe I just read this.... Friend of mine's going to be pissed at me now hehe.
Ps.
Finishing her reps as quickly as she could, Dash strained her muscles harder than usual, pumping the bar up and down perhaps a little more recklessly than usual. THe numbers she counted off in her head grew higher and higher, until...
Only thing I noticed was the capitalized H in the, other than that it was.... a good read,
Oh, Dashie you are so butts.
Be interesting to see a second chapter/sequel with RD getting payback on AJ in the same sorta manner.
5342299 Fair enough.
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Fixed. Thanks.
Nice and funny i hey what about one with a workouts challenge betwen aj and dash
It was a good story, but I really can't imagine AJ making Rainbow do something like this, especially if it makes her really uncomfortable (Unless RD played it off cool like she'd probably do, but she's not a very good liar).
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I get where you're coming from, but taken into account it was a drinking contest, where both might have been unlikely to have been in their best state of mind...
But enough with the justifying the embarrassingly common trope. I really should have no excuse, and don't claim to have one anyway. Long story short, it was an easy way to set up the entire premise.
Well... that was disappointing.
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What? Something not strike your fancy?
5342887
It wasn't as funny as I had anticipated.
Nicely written~
I can't to read more!
Wow. I'd be embarrassed too if I were in her hooves. I mean, just reading through this story had me blushing, since I felt bad for her, and knew what situation she's in. I guess you can say I was embarrassed for her. Since, she is a mare, and well, they tend to care about what they show...especially in this case.
I did laugh though at Pinkie's comments. LOL! Even that was funny.
LOL DAT AUTHORS NOTE DOH!!!
This is good. It'd be nice to see a continuation where public nudity eventually becomes Rainbow's fetish. Also more butt.
Who in the heck does 100 reps in a single set?
well... this is definitely something I would expect of RD... making a bet with this bad a consequence
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They're half horse. Horses kick butt at stamina.
*makes a pitiful excuse*
my friend and I read this for the comedy, but my friend kept talking about space jam and F***ing bulk biceps, I'm not sure why
"Come on and Jam!, and welcome to the slam!"
I love it, but I really want to bash that one unnamed stallions head in with a dumbbell.
"Incomplete"? Does that mean we'll get an additional chapter involving Cheerilee getting naked and asserting her dominance because Big Mac oggled Dash?
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...
Do... not... ask... why I had that thought.
5343136 me. But I suppose not everyone can... Great, I just called myself a freak.
Aaaaaaah duuuuuude! You work faaaast! I was in the middle of writing such a fic!
Also, there has been a recently colored version of this pic. Check it on derpibooru and reupload it as the new cover duuuuuuuuuuude!
Well that was hilarious.
"I will be the death of me if I step through this door!"D:
lol
Poor...sexy...RD. I wonder how this would've gone if AJ lost the bet and was forced to sell apples on the street to everypony? Maybe you could write a follow-up to this story in which Rainbow wins the next bet and makes her do something similar like that?
5343809 mfw I can't find the colored version
5344003 Go to Derpibooru.org and write artist:lil miss jay. It'll show immediately!
cucumbers...as in plural?
I upvoted for the author note