• Member Since 5th Nov, 2012
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flutterdash1


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It was inevitable

Fucking hot:rainbowkiss: but too damn short.:twilightangry2:

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It was literally a two hour write-up that I did immediately after watching the episode a couple hours ago =p I'm glad you like it though =)

Definitely babs and a bit of tribbing :pinkiehappy:

What's Granny Smith? Chopped liver? :rainbowwild:

Why consider only apples? They're fruit bats, not apple bats.

... So well written and so delicious.

Much apples.

(If this winds up on the featured list while I'm asleep, take a screenshot and PM it to me!)

I thought that you get a notification when a story gets on the featured page? Or not, I've just never had a fic featured... :rainbowwild:

3702233 eww no just......ew

It's all them apples!

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Not to my knowledge. I had a story on the featured box once and a friend told me (no screenshot unfortunately) but I was never notified.

She was breathing heavily as Fluttershy ate her out. Rainbow Dash might not have been happy had she seen this blatant disregard for their relationship, but Applejack was currently unable to do much about it

Dashie might even find this quite the erotic show Applejack thought, imagining her marefriend nearby, watching Fluttershy ravish her marehood. Applejack found the idea arousing, and Fluttershy's tongue was already giving her sexual stimulation matching Rainbow Dash's incredible skill.

Applejack was about to have an orgasm. Not the most incredible orgasm of her life, but a damn good one.

Appledash insert ruined this. :ajbemused:
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3704213 don't be a hater :p

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but it's stupid and adds nothing to the story at all :raritydespair: why the heck was Applejack alone in the barn jacking off (lol) if she has a girlfriend whose skills are in pair with sex beast of nature? :facehoof:
(the above question is rhetorical cause no answer's good enough)

flutterbat >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rainbow dash

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*shrug* I enjoyed writing it, that's why it's there I suppose :p

Apple Bloom would be interesting to read.

That's my muse talking... Dunno why he's re-emerging all of a sudden, but I haven't heard from him in over a year.

It's because ol' Ren here is ashamed to admit that he likes this smut, so I have to do it for him.

Hey! It's good writing! Great, even!
Sorry about this...

babs, definitely babs.
go go on this. was alot of fun to read.

3701934 Did you hit the "submit" button when you finished it or did you clean it up first?

3706922 I cleaned it a smidge. I assume from your comment that I missed some glaring things?

3706922 I cleaned it a smidge. I assume from your comment that I missed some glaring things?

3706987 No, keep it up...

Her wings flapped and she ascended into the air. As she flew her wings began to change. Fluttershy did not notice any change in them, but the feathers became leathery and grew together, becoming less prone to lift but more able to catch air.

Did her wings turn from a helicopter into sails? :)

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As my knowledge of birds and bats is nil, I assumed that batwings were, in fact, more sale-like than bird wings and thus the comparison =)

Babs seed,...
Yes please

SHL

Or Flutterbat could go more times behind Applejack's plot :ajsmug:

3704213 I agree and I love Appledash. :applejackunsure:

This one would like some Flutterbloom :applecry::flutterrage:

Apple Fritter, Fiddlesticks, Apple Bumkin. AH HECK; the entire Apple family. In other words; MORE APPLES! Finally Apple.mov is relevant lol.

I call upon the entire Apple Family! Let's make a smoothie!

I vote for applebloom

I vote Applebloom and Babs Seed. :yay:

Leave Big Mac and Braeburn out, please and thank you. :pinkiesick:

RC

3786593 same.
3791422 i oncure. It would be the best.

Well... That wa disturbing..:rainbowkiss::derpyderp1::rainbowkiss::derpyderp1:

I would love to see all the possibilities play out:rainbowwild:, but either way this is both interesting and very sensual:rainbowwild:, great work:pinkiehappy:.

Slow clap that was good

I loved it can't wait to see what happens next.

I vote babs

6681095 OMG Thank you! I'm honored =D

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