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Why does everyone feel the need to change Trixie's personality around to make her a sympathetic character?

She's intended to be haughty, to be a braggart and a show-off. :trixieshiftleft: That's her character, pure & simple because that's how she was designed. She's there to act as a foil for the protagonist, not to be some depressed yet kindly mare that's just looking for a friend anywhere she can find one. :trixieshiftright:The Trixie in this story bears no more than a superficial likeness to the character from the show, and this story would have been better served to simply use an OC rather than to twist a known character into something else just to fit her into the story.

would be interesting to see this continue... hope you think about it

Well, now I want a story for this. I actually want to see reactions.

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While you do have valid points in your argument there are a few things you are forgetting. Trixie did show a not total braggart side to her at the end of the Alicorn Amulet episode. Also people love to de-vilify antagonist that could have misunderstood past. On top of the fact that entertainers have dual personalities for public and private lives, almost have to. Add the fact there are in show always redeemable backstory elements to all the villains (minus Sombra, he was just a terrible thrown-together turd): *Nightmare Moon= neglected, shunned, & possibly possessed *Queen Chrysalis= starving nation that requires a strong emotion to survive Discord= a being of Chaos in a world that values "Harmony" to the extreme. So this story is perfectly acceptable depiction of Trixie though maybe a tad too far, but that is just personal preferance.

Most... Random... Paring... Ever... O.o...

I congratulate you sir, you have earned a mustache *mustache*

~Discord

I don't get why shit like this is so popular. Child pornography like this is the reason why many outside this fandom think that we're all pedophiles:facehoof:

This needs more chapters.

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Child pornography

I don't understand.

Child pornography is the visual representation of minors under the age of 18 engaged in sexual activity or the visual representation of minors engaging in lewd or erotic behavior designed to arouse the viewer's sexual interest.

I see no visual representations of minors under the age of 18 engaged in lewd, erotic, or sexual activity here. In fact, I see no visual representations of minors under the age of 18 here at all.

Also, people think bronies are sick pedophiles because they're fans of a TV show made for little girls. That's why. It has very little to do with stories like this.

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Thanks! That's what I was going for ^.^ Random pairing to see if I could make it work /o/

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There might be more. In the future. Possibly. I do have notes for more >.>

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Do you have Skype? I'd be happy to help you turn those into more chapters :rainbowkiss:

3027829 Jolly good show, Jolly good show

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Draco In Leather Pants

Even if Trixie's not all bad, that doesn't mean she's a teddy bear looking for hugs. Her ego and flair, I think, are a huge part of her personality, and I don't like when that's taken away, or relegated to an 'alter ego'.

Random pairing, but I love it <3 I hope you continue it

I read this and forgot to comment and fave...

Oops.

~Skeeter The Lurker

HOLY SHIT! MOAR! This could develop into some complex serious story, probably wouldn't end well

Fine, fine, fine! By popular demand I will continue this story. It may take some time though as I have other stories that are closer to my heart that I need to update first.

Well... This is definitely original. I like it!

I never would have expected a pairing like this, but you made it work, and made it work quite well. Trixie is a little OOC, but every fanfiction detailing ponies fucking is like that. You've my attention and interest. I expect great things from you.

This is really good. Keep up the good work!

~BlitzFire

Lots of feels. Great job! Please, continue your works.

Dieing right now for her would be the most worthwhile thing I've ever done.

Should be spelled "Dying"

Did not notice any other grammatical errors.\
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All in all, I love it, and look forward to more chapters. Upvoting, Favoriting and following

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You want me to read all that? Are you high?

3129996 Still,Your comment is longer than some STORIES...Props for being thorough though doc(Ill call anyone with a doc. who pic 'doc' so dont mind that)I must say that you preform your task rather nicely.As for the story,I honestly dont have much to say,I like the premise enough that it clouds my judgement a bit too much for me to say anything with a unbiased opinion So ill just say good job with it and be on my merry way :derpytongue2:

MORE. MORE. MORE.

Pedofoal.... I see what you did there my good author.

RC

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I conur
:trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright::raritystarry::twilightsheepish:

3059661 I don't think she was talking about pants or shirts....
so why would she dye?

3698203 Oops... maybe I was mistaken...
Forgive me. I failed Freshman English my Freshman, Sophomore, and Junior years of high school :twilightoops:

3698226 it's fine, many make the mistake.

So do you plan on continuing this story? It was very good and I definitely would like to read more if you do! Its such an odd pairing but you pulled it off so well! I really want to see where this goes :rainbowkiss:

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I do plan to continue :)

4740713 Awesome! It will be interesting to see where those two go from here.

4740713 Will it be soon?

More!! Need continuation

Broke my mind

ez like and fav

Comment posted by Comrade Abigor deleted Jun 10th, 2022
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