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Vinyl_Wubs


There are a lot of things this show has taught me. When I started watching, I never expected it to affect me as much as it has. But now that I'm here, I don't know what I'd do without you all!

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Looks interesting. I'll read it in the morning. :derpytongue2:

This looks interesting. :twilightsmile:

Seems interesting, but I won't give it a rating just yet.

You have a good looking premise here, though. Kudos for that.

I can't wait for the next chapter. I loved the last scene.

favorited just because I want to see where this is going, actual judgement will come later

Talking bout high speed relationship development :rainbowderp:

moving a little fast for my taste but I look forward to more

4180096 4179226 My explanation is that they feel closer because of common events in their pasts.

The story from the boy was good but the problem is that they kow each other for a day and then they love each other so fix that and start with only friendship

Awesome man keep it up. Also from what other people are saying about scoots and Alex's relationship going fast, I agree with that and I'd take its a little slower but hey that's up to you I'm just giving you my opinion

4180607 Nngh... It's funny you say that.

Alright, so I'm placing this fic somewhere in the middle of Pride and Prejudice for its location in your story series's timeline. Am I right?

4181062 Well I think the main reason that it felt so fast is because it is said with such.. well dedication "I really love you" big words, I personally think that it would have fitted way better if they would have just said "I like you":unsuresweetie: ... regardless I am not complaining, bring it author ^^

Well teenage relationships sort of go like this one. And School usually does encompass a lot of time... but it'll slow down after the next chapter. The love at first sight is a running theme in this universe so... if everyone wants me to rewrite it so it's slow and steady then so be it I will.

4181639 In between the orgy and suicide attempt.

The awkwardness between scoots and alex makes me horny and go "d'aaaaaw" at the same time. :rainbowlaugh:

Its like a never-ending run on sentence! :/

Great beginning cant wait to see the rest unfold

you have some really funny stuff here, but its a tad chaotic and hard to follow, i will read the rest of it,but a bit more framing of the scenes would help the story seem more solid. still the beating around the bush joke made me laugh so you got my support haha

Having a hot, seductive lady fall on you with your face between her tits.
Seems like a Friday night to me.:scootangel:

................oh god :rainbowlaugh: . Nice chapter, I guess it was worth the wait :rainbowwild:

This story is weird.. I like it.. but its weird

It seems with all your couples, it's love in three chapters or less. Anyway, where did Scootaloo sleep before? She didn't always sleep in Cecil's house, and I don't believe she slept in Rainbow's.

4442612 She is an orphan... so either the Orphanage, the clubhouse, or over at either Applebloom's or Sweetie's.

That awkward moment when they walked in

Wait a minute.:rainbowderp:

“Oops… did I do that?” The unicorn filly who shoved him asked innocently.

“Yeah… some girl shoved me down onto her.” Alex said.

“Yeah… Diamond Tiara is really nasty to everyone.” Scootaloo said with a nod.

I thought Diamond Tiara was an Earth pony.:rainbowhuh:

4444459 Fixed. Thanks for the correction!

4183326 Are you really surprised?:applejackunsure:

OH MY GOD!:pinkiegasp: For a minute there, I thought Alex was going to be hooked up with all three Crusaders. Now, they're talking about a wedding and starting a family? At seventeen? Someone needs to slap some reality into these fillies. As for Diamond Tiara, I'm glad to know she has some type of line she tries not to cross. There may still be hope for her yet.

4446684 Mmmhmm, the fillies need a reality check, or Mmmhmm, there is still hope for Diamond Tiara?

“I just told Fluttershy and Cecil that we were going camping tonight.” Axel smirked.

When did that happen?

Anyway, Axel and Van are wereponies, Alex's brother shows up and holy water hurts Cecil in his skeletal form. Okay. Something tells me that Torrent is either a hunter or a priest of some sort (cross and holy water). I can't wait to meet Torrent's wife. Speaking of which:

...I’ll have to talk to here about staying here but that shouldn’t be too much of a problem.” Torrent mumbled.

I think you meant 'her'.

“Oh and I’m married.” Torrent said, quickly raising his hand to show the ring on his finger.

“Damn…” Sweetie and Applebloom mumbled.

I thought that was hilarious.:rainbowlaugh:

This story and 'Tongue Tied' definitely has to be read at the same time. If I wasn't already vested in this series, I would have stopped reading by now. That's something I tend not to like. Reading one story to get what is happening in the other.:duck:

4457432 Phones, everyone seems to have one. That explains just telling them.

And Torrent is deeply religious... and he's more of a hunter-priest after... certain events in his and Alex's past...

4458231 Phones? I must have somehow missed that. When was it mentioned that they have phones?

4458488 Well I never said they DIDN'T have phones... :pinkiesmile:

4459969 True. However, since I never see them use phones and ponies always seem to have to go somewhere to let others know things, I am going to think phones don't exist in this universe.

4460236 Phones, and CELL phones are two different things.

These are the bluntest set of ponies I have ever read about, but it is in a good way continue with the good work :pinkiehappy: this story just :rainbowlaugh:

4465827 You made the chapter about a woman goving birth with any Fr-jokes, and it's actually pretty good.:twilightsmile:

4465886 I'm a little disappointed that no one has wondered about Cecil's transformation.

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