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Looks interesting. I'll read it in the morning.
This looks interesting.
Seems interesting, but I won't give it a rating just yet.
You have a good looking premise here, though. Kudos for that.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I loved the last scene.
favorited just because I want to see where this is going, actual judgement will come later
Talking bout high speed relationship development
moving a little fast for my taste but I look forward to more
4180096 4179226 My explanation is that they feel closer because of common events in their pasts.
The story from the boy was good but the problem is that they kow each other for a day and then they love each other so fix that and start with only friendship
Awesome man keep it up. Also from what other people are saying about scoots and Alex's relationship going fast, I agree with that and I'd take its a little slower but hey that's up to you I'm just giving you my opinion
4180607 Nngh... It's funny you say that.
Alright, so I'm placing this fic somewhere in the middle of Pride and Prejudice for its location in your story series's timeline. Am I right?
4181062 Well I think the main reason that it felt so fast is because it is said with such.. well dedication "I really love you" big words, I personally think that it would have fitted way better if they would have just said "I like you" ... regardless I am not complaining, bring it author ^^
Well teenage relationships sort of go like this one. And School usually does encompass a lot of time... but it'll slow down after the next chapter. The love at first sight is a running theme in this universe so... if everyone wants me to rewrite it so it's slow and steady then so be it I will.
4181639 In between the orgy and suicide attempt.
It seems with all your couples, it's love in three chapters or less. Anyway, where did Scootaloo sleep before? She didn't always sleep in Cecil's house, and I don't believe she slept in Rainbow's.
Wait a minute.
I thought Diamond Tiara was an Earth pony.
4444459 ya i was just thinking the same thing
Blind love
" I really do love you too."
Well that escaleted quickly what is this chapter Three?