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Vinyl_Wubs
There are a lot of things this show has taught me. When I started watching, I never expected it to affect me as much as it has. But now that I'm here, I don't know what I'd do without you all!
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Ponies don't have boobs up there that is all
3990931 We'll it's a good thing it's Anthro
3990947
unf
Great job!
This is a pretty good story. All you need to do is make it more show-y and less tell-y. It'd be damn near perfect then.
Another one of your stories to add to my favorites.
I feel so honored.
No, but seriously, thanks bro!
Great story, I know what I'm doing later....
~ TOOWC
That... was HOT!
Didn't read this. However I would like to note I knew the story by the cover art and the description.
I wonder what their babies are going to be like?
3991091 What do you mean?
3991805
Lesse if I can explain this properly...
Take this paragraph for example. What's here is good enough to tell us what's going on, but that's about it. How does Celestia feel when she notices it? How does Luna feel now that she knows? Don't just outright say "Celestia was shocked, Luna was emberrassed." Show us what each of them are doing to signify as such. Celestia's eyes would widen in surprise as she looked it at, while Luna would look away shyly.
Show Vs Tell isn't exactly an easy thing to learn (I'm still learning myself) but it is necessary to make any story the best it can be.
3991952 Fair enough.
That cover image.
Well... That was... Um... Weird but it was good I do agree it wasn't showy enough but still great
good job.
Ot-hot-hot hot-hot-hot-hot!
How'd you get away with the cover image?
3993654 Okay then....
3993648 What? I was quoting Tobuscus.
3993642 You can get family pregnant... Lol
3994336 A...Are you real?
Nice incest
3995786 Wincest!
Kind of silly, but not mean-spirited, and cute and heart-warming in a strange sort of way. Have a thumbs-up.
Please continue with chapters of pregnant incest.
Huh...
Well...shit...
So what's the baby gonna be called?
3997468 One-shots are staying one-shots. Sorry sir.
3998153 Ok...
Thanks for this much so far though.
While it is a good story with decent pacing, I feel like the grammar and sentence structure could be greatly improved on
So, why do people assume pregnancy? It's just inflation.
4000447 Because of the line Luna said at the end of the sex scene.
Oh i would love it if you made another one of futa lunestia
OH DAMN!!! I GOT hard!!!
SEQUEL!!!
4002446
i think there is a word missing here. maybe a "said"?
Please make a sequel to this!
4141940 Someday...
This story.
iambrony.dget.cc/mlp/gif/10690__safe_princess-celestia_animated_molestia_dance_grin_headbob_headbang.gif
>Look at cover art
>Think for a long time
>"Where are nipples?" I ask aloud to no one
>Mother looks at me from her work
>"What?" she asks, confused
>"Oh, nothing mom," I reply, "I just noticed that this fan art doesn't have any nipples"
>Mother stands up, fuming.
>"WHAT!?" She screams, "NO NIPPLES?!"
>"I know right," I say, rolling my eyes.
> She stares deeply into me
>"Son..." she begins, "I'm gonna have to spank you now."
> I sigh and reveal my plump five year old ass to my mother, who begins whacking it.
> I cry and run to my room
> Decide to poste stupid comments on fimfiction stories.
> Now I'm here.
4391412 Was I your mother?
4000447 I wouldn't assume a child.
I would assume roughly eight.
3994336 In most circumstances it wouldn't since the seed would not be able to fertilize the females egg, however this is magic from a dark and corrupted god so screw logic!
4435873 Hahahah!
4435907 Exactly. And also implying this isn't an anthromorphized version of a children's show about ponies.
4457515
Good story, but it felt too short; needs more details.
4391412
hawt
Miss wubs can I get the link to your pic please
4470728 No it's mine.