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TheDudeAbides


A guy that really loves futa. The dickgirl really ties the whole room together.

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I love that it has two of my favorite fetishes in it... but I hate that it has five of the ones I can't stand and three that I prefer not reading... but that being said, it was fairly good

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I'm glad you were able to enjoy atleast some of it. :twilightsmile:


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:rainbowlaugh: Do it again.

Well, that was... interesting.

I cant never...unread what I read....

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I know you liked it~

Comment posted by Jake The Army Guy deleted Dec 28th, 2018

Wow. That... that was... wow.

How could you not add the cumflation to the warning list? That was the best part!

Can I put in a request?:fluttershysad:

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It's a part of the

Cuuuuuuuuuummmmmmm

warning

I can't deal. It's just too awesome.

Twilight's flower bloomed wide as the invader pushed foreward, spreading her fleshy petals even further as her nectar flowed out of her slit.

I actually really enjoy this sentence. It's just written so beautifully and poetically, and it captures the mood so well. It almost makes me feel like I'm not reading a story about incest between two characters from a television show about technicolor ponies marketed to six-year-old girls.

Almost.

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usually when there's just a cum warning, I think bukkake or something of the sort. cumflation is much more specific.

Sounding? Not great. Every other damn thing: Exactly why i'm glad folks keep suggesting I read your stuff.

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The sounding portion is fairly light. It's almost not even there.

I just realized that Fimfiction didn't import all the text formatting. I've went back and readded it now and I'm SUPER SORRY for any confusion this caused.

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Where are the actual Genre tags?:rainbowhuh:
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I'm surprised this got past moderation without the tags.

Yes! :pinkiehappy: It's finally out! Now to masturbate to this until Tummy Wubs.

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Wow I didn't save them. Awesome. There should be one up now.

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Slice of Life? Lol. This is anything BUT a normal fic. No Romance included?:rainbowlaugh:

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I honestly don't know what to put it under. So I just panicked. It's not a super night for me right now. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

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Well frankly, tagging your stories should be quite easy if you understand what each genre means. Since sex is the act of love making, this story would go under the Romance category. I'm not sure how clop can fit into a Slice of Life setting, so there's not need to have that blue tag there.

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Okay. I also added random because it was suggested.

While the clop was pretty good, I did not like the fact that this had TwiArmor in it. I have a deep hatred for that pairing. Good clop, but ruined by TwiArmor.

Oh cool you did a new story- Twiarmor, dood?

Good bye, dood. I'm going to run and drink some bleach.

3800788 I know I know, I should have seen the Incest tag when I went in, I was half expecting Cadance getting spit-roasted and not Twilight, and I should have stopped when I saw Macro and Hyper Cocks, but I was still hopping that was Twilight's tools, dood.

I basically just skimmed it to see what the futa tag was about then cried, dood.

Ah, Shining. 80% of the time, clops that you are in have you partnered with your sister or mom.

It's why I make it a mission to read every single one when possible. 's some of the funniest shit I've ever seen. By chance can we get one with Shining and mommy dearest?

All the fetishes! Yessss~

only reading the triggers made me aroused

tis gon be gud

So many correct uses of "you're" :twilightsmile: I'm so happy.:heart:

This was a toughy to write because I wouldn't stop getting aroused.

Isn't that a good thing:raritywink:?

Anyway, I'm quite interested:twilightsmile:!

This...was...

Different. :rainbowwild:

The trigger warning contains almost my complete list of fetishes. Did you write this for me without knowing it or something?

You know, the way you wrote this, I thought Cadance had actually dropped Twilight onto Shining Armor into coitus.

Not that I'd complain if that actually happened.

That said, I still don't understand what Autofellatio and Sounding is, and I'm not entirely sure about Hyper Cocks neither.

That made me laugh and got aroused at the same time great job my review 10/10 ps love your work :rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::twilightblush::ajsmug:

What is "sounding"? The rest I have heard of, that I do not know. :rainbowhuh:

>Triggers
Well, I need to change pants.
>The story
Well, it's gonna take awhile to clean the bathroom.

And every other room in the house.

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Autofellatio is sucking ones own dick, as in the beginning when Shining was licking and sucking on the head of his dong. Hyper cocks is simply referring to their train-sized dicks (aka, fucking massive). Sounding is getting pleasure from urethral play, usually referring to sticking something in a guys dick. As far as I could tell, the only "sounding" in this was Twi playing with Shining's urethra with her tongue. A little disappointed in that, honestly; got my hopes up that there would be more. :twilightblush:

And I thought Cadance speared Twi with Shiny's dick at first too. Then I remembered Twi was busy sucking on the head, and realized it was physically impossible.

EDIT: 3801767 Read above for sounding.

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Thank you for clarifying for everypone! :twilightsheepish:

But yeah, the sounding didn't get as intense as it has in my previous fics. Oh well, hopefully it was still enjoyable :twilightsmile:

First of all, let me say that I loved this clopfic!:heart:

Maybe it was just me, but I had a hard time visualizing how big all the characters were at any given time. You were very creative when describing the sex acts, but the descriptions of size were a little bland.

When the fetish is macro, half of the fun is seeing the enormity of the characters described in detail. Otherwise, they may as well be regular size. The description of Shining Armor destroying the castle with his growth was good. I just wish there was more humor, since a situation this absurd calls for comedy.

Take a page from the Phineas and Ferb parody of the Shawshank Redemption.

"Shining Armor's cock was now fifteen feet long. Fifteen feet. That's the length of thirty unicorn horns lined up end to end."

"Shining Armor's massive member had reached twenty-seven feet in length. That's as long as the wingspan of nine pegasi spread tip-to-tip."

"Shining Armor's balls were now fifty times larger than the size of an average pony. His gargantuan gonads were roughly as large as Ursa Minor cubs."

I loved this fic and hope to see more work from you in the future!

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the sounding didn't get as intense as it has in my previous fics

Welp, off to read your other clopfics! :pinkiehappy:

And no problem! I didn't mind clarifying at all. :twilightsmile:

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I'm glad that you enjoyed the fic, makes me feel :rainbowdetermined2:

As for the descriptions, this was my first time writing macro. I've seen other authors do it before, but I had yet to find someone who did it such that I could imagine it. It's very difficult doing sizes because everything is relative.

That said, macro is one of my favorite fetishes and I'd like to write about it again, but I won't be doing so any time soon.

Closest thing is Tummy Wubs which will have the growth/expansion fetish.

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I think it's done in Taking a Load Off more than others. I'm pretty sure I wrote another fic with sounding in it.

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Checked, and realized I had already read the ones pertaining to it. Damn. Time to re-read, I guess!

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