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That was awesome!!
I also love the fact you worked it into the offical canon with the ending. I look forward to seeing what appears in the series next
Please don't end it here we need to read about post tirek victory sex and more possum bro action!
Interesting... Will follow for more
That was REALLY sexy
...
SO HOW 'BOUT A SEQUEL, EH?
alas, babylon
Part 2?
Sexy times! Leave it to Tirek to ruin it.
I'm sorry to skim your story, but a member of ours from the anthropomorphic group thought your story had an anthro Luna, but what you wrote is actually a humanized Luna not an anthro one. So I have to remove from the group and in the event if the guy who submitted your story to the group is your friend, will you apologize to him for me for removing your story from the group.
Edit: I forgot I can't do that, that's what I get from writing things at after 4 AM.
You spelt does as dose alot >.> other than that, nice fic
Here's a helpful image. derpicdn.net/img/2014/6/15/653708/medium.jpeg (link in case image won't display: here). The middle two can be considered variants of anthro. Leftmost is humanized, rightmost is pony ("feral") form.
HMM..
Ya know, i get the feeling that Tirek wouldn't bother...
From what i gather, the Player (Yes, calling him that) has almost no magic to speak of. And Tiberius, despite being a super-powered little possum, is with only the tiniest amount of magic.
Despite being the single most powerful villain in the series so far, he seems very..single-minded in his pursuit for power.
He focuses more on charging right at the goal, rather than taking underhanded ways of getting it...
If he was more strategic, he would have opened with the death-threat to her friends at the very beginning.
Besides that, Twilight would have little care for the Player and Tiberius. Even from a strategical standpoint, unless he was playing the long game, the Player poses little value. 1. Twilight clearly doesn't care much for him, so it would have little impact. 2. Tiberius, despite being best possum, is a possum. Twilight would barely care.
Is this humanized or Anthro? Nice cover BTW, but it's humanized...but anthro. Uh. Help?
The Last Unicorn?
Really?
I'm permitted to know that reference, because I grew up with an older sister who loved that movie.
What's your excuse?
Heres a funny picture... fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/270/9/2/rage_comic__3_by_dralbertwily-d6o5pnp.png
4875616 An adult cat has thirty teeth.
What? I used to intern for a veterinarian.
4875616 time to be a huge prick :)
Most of the teeth in a cat are very small and you can only see them if you look very close.
Permanent dentition:
2(I 3/3 C 1/1 P 3/2 M 1/1) = 2(8/7) = 2(15) = 30 teeth
Third upper premolar and first lower molar are the sectoral teeth.
Deciduous dentition:
2(Di 3/3 Dc 1/1 Dp 3/2) = 2(7/6) = 2(13) = 26 teeth
Cats have 30 teeth (12 incisors, 10 premolars, 4 canines, and 4 molars).
Kittens have baby teeth, which usually appear at 2 to 3 weeks of age and are replaced by permanent teeth around the age of 7 months.
Awsome job.
4875342 i found it and felt like watching it, IM ALIVE... IM ALIVE.. im alive
All sorts of typos in the story, as well as several other things to nitpick about. Overall, not a bad story.
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What are you implying?
That the author was typing with one hand?
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4877779 Ya but he doesnt know that, if only u told him before the troll dad...
I thought the last part was a reference to the Last Unicorn. A unicorn was facing a bull and there was a crumbling castle the unicorn fought it at till she drove it into the sea releasing the other unicorns from the sea which helped bring down the castle.
Continue with a part two please?
4879066
How many of us were reading with both hands free? Let's be honest here
I dont understand how this badly written piece of smut has reached the feature box. You have a million typos in that damn thing.
I would never light myself on fire in the name of love, now that's just some stupid ass shit boi! Good story tho!
Man, I've heard of a burning passion, but that's ridiculous!
Hey I love your stories and was wondering if u are going to make a 3 rd story relative to dashing hearts but if not I would like to make and want approval
I rather enjoyed this story, I just have one issue. Tis not antro. Errors I van understand, but mixing up antro and human is just silly. You're a silly author who killed our dreams. So I'll put my vote towards proper antro please.
4882848 Beeeeeeeeee myyyyyyyyy guest be my guest you are now put to the test.
I will work on it but it might take awhile due to school
Once. It happened once. She used the dreaded "i". Oh noes!
Luna needn't worry about Tirek, I will personally beat the living shit out of him.
The whole anthro mix up is a big my bad, sorry, and yes that was a last unicorn reference in the end. I became aware of it after I met the creator Mr. Beagle at san Diego comic con.
A great man, who paved the way for us. My own cannon is that after Amalthea became the first unicorn to feel love and regret, she became more powerful. Love being the most powerful force of all. Her power grew till she was able to create a new world. And before she ascended and became a goddess, she had two daughters, one she named after the sun and the other after the moon.
To watch over her new world for eternity.
Together.
I LIKED IT
100% bishop approved
IT NEEDS A SEQUAL!
I like that last unicorn reference
so damn hot. your luna is soooooo bangable, anon's so damn lucky.
it was well put together but the unresolved ending was a bit of a downer... sequel????
4895635 plz make a part 2 plzplzplz
I've gone through all four stories in this series (hopefully with more in the works?) and I have quite enjoyed them. But I can't help but offer - do you want an editor? Grammar is mostly sound but there are a lot of easily fixable errors in mechanical conventions that could be pointed out from another pair of eyes.
Again great series, but marred with typos. Let me know.
5023678 Take a crack at it and send it back to me in a message.
5030719 Sounds great and will do, thanks!
Plot twist when she gets her magic back Anon is emaciated and T is nothing but a bloody spot on the floor (anon had to eat the furry little cock blocker to survive in the stone room).
4875342 Confessions of a straight male time. I watched the shit out of that movie when I was a kid. I even found it online recently and watched it again. No excuse is needed when listening to the superior voice acting talents of Jeff Bridges!
5101332 Walking.
Walking.
Walking.
Walkin.
Cuuuut.
...
JEFF BRIDGES!
I need to stop watching Tobucus.
When can we expect our next Luna, the ____ princess?
5337326 around the time of season 5. I'm taking a hiatus on my Luna saga.