• Member Since 6th Nov, 2013
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Vinyl_Wubs


There are a lot of things this show has taught me. When I started watching, I never expected it to affect me as much as it has. But now that I'm here, I don't know what I'd do without you all!

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Was not expecting a sequel to this, love.
Props.
~ TOOWC

great as aways :yay:

more Nature :flutterrage:

Best line.

“Okay. I’m never leaving you alone again.” Dash said, staring silently at the near horde of vines staring back at her.

yeas eve moe Nature:flutterrage:

I don't think I quite understand what the "crunch crunches" were supposed to mean but good story :ajsmug:

this is a beautiful story.

4783137 your avatar pic looks like a dimwitdog. (artist.) is there a source?

4783746 Nnnot thatI know of, at least I don't have one.
But, it is by DDD, and it has to do with Twilight Sparkle(obviously) and her butt.

4783727 Grass crunching.

Didn't we basically beg for a sequel?
Is good. :pinkiehappy:

0/10 not enough stomach bulging

4784482
More Sequel!!!

Ash and Flutters!!!

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:fluttercry:

This is so beautiful, many tears were shed

4785061 You really don't like me do you?

4785218
No, it's just that every one of you're fetish filled fics gets into the featured list...... and one of them was Trixie screwing a fucking slime... and they all disturbed me greatly..... so yeah.

4785226 There is a clear disclaimer. If you don't like it, stop reading.

4785231
That's what happens when I'm bored, I. post. comments. EVERYWHERE!

4784213 ahhh, that makes sense now. Thanks for the clarification :pinkiehappy:

4783884 pm me a link plox?

4785746 I don't have a link to it anywhere...sorry.

4785748 bugger. thanks tho. btw, who is DDD?

4785753 Dim- Ok so DWD, DimWitDog. I messed up.

4785788 oh. lol. i'll just go on DB later and find the one.

I don't always comment on stories, but when I do, I comment on the best stories.

This story--despite being a clopfic--had a plot (no pun intended) that shined through as a great one-shot romance story. You have certainly outdone yourself, and I applaud you for your marvelous work.

Also, this story made me think of this song:

This book is as sweet and sour as lemonade on a cool summer's day. Keep writing! :yay:

Ok some things got me confused in this story, it has been a while since I have read the first one so I could be forgetting something. Where did ash come from, what did ash change about fluttershy, did dash actually find the plants in what seemed to be a dream and warned her friends to find her, if she didn't how did her friends know she was missing,why does spike think he is at fault, what was the seed put in fluttershy and how could ash lose it, and FINALLY how did fluttershy survive for three months without moving and barely eating? (That was quite a bit more then I thought)

4788072 You have the attention span of a cat lol

4788084 I have been told that yes, but I reviewed the story and most questions seem valid? What am I missing oh great wubs.

4788084 just noticed that where ash came from is vague, I ment why did the collection of seeds cause him.

4788109 One of life's great mysteries. (Insert RvB joke here)

You... you magnificent bastard.
I love you and your stories.



On a completely unrelated topic

He stared up at me, holding my still as he held only the tip inside

Holding me still

I thought I knew what I was getting into. I thought I came into this prepared. Never have I been so wrong. With these last parting words I must utter.
What the hell did I just read?

4802230 I don't know. I read the first part and was expecting much of the same experience from part two, but I was completely and utterly taken off guard.

and decides to spread it's love to her friends

Should be its

Also, why title the chapter as Chapter 1 when there aren't going to be any more chapters?

I must say that this story was stunning, to say at least. One would expect this to be a clopfic, like the first one. But nope. You gave it a 180° degrees turn and made it a love story. All I'm trying to say is:
Excellent job. :eeyup:

Tis so many stories that remind me of how alone I am. G-Nite for my commenting, not reading.

My mind is blown.................


FANTASTIC JOB!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::heart::moustache:

Nice. Good read and awesome ending 10/10:moustache::twilightsmile:

This is one amazing story
i realy want to to read more so can you make second part

Jeez this story was an acid trip and a half. But enjoyable.:moustache:

JESUS CHRIST, TOO MUCH FEELS

I have one nitpick, well not really just a few questions. The thing inside of Fluttershy... Is she pregnant? The Thumping sound makes it a maybe but I don't know.

Another I may have answered already, she looks different right, butterfly wings, spirals, new hair do, I think that's a yes but just asking.

Now for the story itself: WoW... That was something. The beginning with Dash was... iffy at most but that ending! xD the feels, so much feels!

10/10 would recommend... If it wasn't much as a clopfic. :twilightblush: but still fantastic work :)

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