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Incest, a game the whole family can play.
5499738 You're damn right it is.
Well... If anything, its well written. Can't argue with that.
5499738 lol
5499743 One cannot half-ass their sisterly love. 'Twould be a travesty.
I'm sure Jaime and Cersei Lannister would agree with you there :P
5499748 Would being the key word, I believe. Have you seen/read everything up to current on that? If not, kindly ignore that statement.
I dare not go near the books... I'm too lazy
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I'd say I feel ya there, and I kinda do since I'm fine just watching the show as it comes about, but I usually prefer reading. It's my bag. Anywho, this has gotten way off-topic.
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Indeed... But hell... I couldn't help but think about the show when reading this...
5499764 'Tis understandable. While not quite as cute and such as Raribelle, it does match up a bit in terms of... content.
There's a shortage of good(or any really) Raribelle clop on this site. Now there's a bit more. Good story.
5499879 There certainly is, and so I saw fit to rectify that in my own little way. Glad you enjoyed it.
I will be honest. I don't really like foalcon. but. I will push on and read this. because pirates never back down
AFTER READING
ok my friend. ya got me. I enjoyed this
Awesome fic, love me some Raribelle :D
Alright, I'm gonna read this. Huge foalcon fan, so this better be good.
5499910 Gooooooood. Tis only a matter of time until you are truly mine and one with the fillies.
5500519 No need to worry there. Quality is one thing I don't skimp on.
5500052 Glad you enjoyed.
As sweet as the title makes it sound. It's wonderful to read Rarity's perspective. You could fix a number of errors if you read the whole thing aloud to yourself once probably. Thank you for this excellent story!
5502573 good luck with that
5502759 A number of errors are probably what I had in mind. I read through it a few times but I did write it so it's a little harder to catch the errors when my eyes say they're right from having seen it before. I'll check again when I get home though.
5503048 Luck shall not be needed.
5503052 I will not succumb to your wincest. I will FIGHT BACK
5503055 You cannot resist. Wincest is many. Wincest is all. You will join Legion.
5503061 do you have to battle. if so. I am ready...*draws sword and Flintlock pistol*. my pirate ship is also aiming its cannons st you...ready to fight...if you win. ill join the wincest willingly. if I win. I don't have too. sound good?
5503078 But don't you see? It's in your words. I have already won.
5503088 (sees that I have lost after fighting ). it is the truth. you have won... I present you as a token of honor my sword. *hands you the sword*. you fought well. I enjoyed this one. and you got me. I do like the wincest every once in a while
5503091 Hehe, tis a good subject when done properly.
5503099 yes. it is
5503099 you got the great honor of this story going to my fav box
5503103 Why thank ye. Glad you enjoyed it.
5503120 your welcome. it was a welcome surprise. I honestly thought this was going to be another pointless incest story. but this one had some actual story to it. and that is what I enjoyed. you are a great writer
5503123 I aim to please. Ain't to say I don't write pointless clop , but I do like some story.
5503145 me too
5503052 I always feel bad saying "there were errors" since I've been told the same thing multiple times and thought something that I suspect might be similar to what you thought. I should get in the habit of always marking the errors I see for fics I'm reading, but you know that's not as fun as just diving into the story, and I enjoyed doing just that.
5503289 I know the feeling. There are probably a few things I've missed for the reason said before, but there are also things in there that I'm sure are part of my stylistic choice in writing. I'll be sure to go back through it one more time though just in case.
Very sweet read, I loved every word of it. I also admire the fact that you saw we needed more quality wincest clop and you delivered. Props, man
5507363 Glad it lived up to expectations.
this was written super skillfully, its perfect and creates the mood well and the narrative is engrossing and most importantly its very romantic and sweet, not to mention hella sexy! i loved it, great job!!!!!!!!!!!
5512101 Thanks!
This is clearly one of those stories that suffered most of its dislikes simply because people didn't agree with the subject matter. I think it was very well done and I enjoyed it thoroughly. I wish it were longer.
5524138 Yeah. Most of my downvotes compiled within the first few hours/day, but I know better than to care. I don't write to garner views, but to entertain myself and others.
The longer bit may come to pass, though. I am thinking of doing more little one-offs following this once I my toes into a few other projects, so keep your eyes open.
5526160 I will keep my eyes open. There's one minor thing I wanted to ask about. Never the end you type:
You use the word "nethers" but the subsequent lines seem to imply that you were talking about Sweetie's anus. Can "nethers" be used that way? I always thought it was reserved for the genitals so this last part threw me off a bit because I had to read back and make sure.
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Yes, yes it can. It's all based on the scene and what's going on. The context, if you will.
5535715 Yeah I know the definition, but usually in terms of anatomy I've only ever seen it used for the lady parts, never the male shaft or an anus. Threw me for a loop is all. I'll just have to look out for that in your future writings.
5535743 It's not often that it is used, certainly, but using the same words over and over gets stale. Especially considering I very much dislike the use of cunt, pussy, etc in writing. Don't get me wrong there, cunt is by far one of my favorite words, but outside of spoken (written or irl) vulgarity or companionship ("You cheeky cunt"), it doesn't belong.
Thus, I get stuck having to be creative and actually use my brain to find proper words and phrases that don't make the story seem like it was written by a twelve year old, like using nethers for your bootyhole.
And, technically (and just for future reference), nethers should really only be used for that region (the area of the posterior) and not specific parts of anatomy. But, in context, it can work.
I enjoyed the story very much, it was cute and romantic, the more heated scenes were beautiful and passionate rather than just hardcore sex and it actually made me feel happy. 10/10 would recommend!
5568764 Glad you liked it.
Excellent story
All love and no manipulation, as foalcon should be. I'd love to see this expanded to a multi-chapter story, seeing how their relationship develops from here, and whether the other crusaders catch on to Sweetie's happiness, or the mane 6 with Rarity. Spike, too. But at least if he does find out that he has no chance with her, she can explain to him that her heart was claimed before he met her, and not that she doesn't like him.
Also, will they reserve sex as a bed time activity, or do it all the time, all over the boutique, whenever either of them wants it?
Here's a picture which would fit nicely with the latter, and with this story because of the kiss mark (EDIT: Removed link incase NSFW links are against the rules, but if you want to go find it yourself, it's image 828176 on derpibooru)
One thing that bothered me a bit is this:
If you're going with horse years, then 5 is already adult. But if you're going with human years, then 5 is way too early for her to be having estrus cycles. Also, if you were intending to reference the birthday mentioned in For Whom The Sweetie Belle Tolls, it was her 5th, not 3rd.
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The average life cycle for a horse is generally about 30-40 years if they're taken care of and not put down when they get old, so about half the average lifetime of the average human. I use this as my reference for ages, making 1 year = 1~2 years, 2 years 3~4 years, so on and so forth. As far as growth rates, its obvious that the ponies grow slower than horses, so there's that as well. Plus, horses irl tend to hit their first heat around 2-3 years and can vary depending on the horse like a lady's first period and shiz. Altogether, not an entirely stretched concept.
Ah, fearingfun. Love his work. Also, be careful linking nsfw stuff. Idk if they changed the rules about it or not, but the last I checked it wasn't allowed.
Otherwise, glad you enjoyed it.
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Hmm, I couldn't find anything in the rules about it, but I edited the comment to be safe.
And fair enough on the age numbers. Still conflicts with the canon 5th birthday, but I can get over it