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>chapter 1
>over 8000 words
Mother of god.....
Kinda busy, so gonna track for later.
Holy jesus....that was um...descriptive...excuse me for like twenty minutes while I go to the bathroom
You should have just added this as a second chapter so more people who read the first one can see this one. Though a lot of the audience probably came from the directory
328159 You sir, are 100% correct. I debated doing that before I uploaded the story, but opted not to, and then almost immediately regretted it.
Do you think it would help if I wrote a "bridge" to add on to the original fic to point people to this one? I don't want anyone who wanted to read it missing out.
328679 Seems like a good idea. Its a good thing you posted this on fimfiction that has the tracking ability. Also you could just delete and repost this as the second chapter, go upload it to the directory yourself or update the current post in the directory. I guess its up to you though to find the most convenient and/or agreeable solution. Deleting this would lose the current view count and audience and maybe lose some of the new ones you caught... I think it would be better to write that bridge and upload this to the directory. win more viewers, lose none. Then again it could get messy uploading a series whole series in separate posts...
Gah mini rant.
TL;DR
Write the bridge and upload this chapter to the directory yourself.
Trixie? And Princest? Aand Drama?
Adding a small bridge to the other might help, but I think many of those who tracked the other also followed you?
328849 Only about half also followed from a glance. I'm already plotting the bridge. It'll be very short. Hope to have it up within 24 hours--maybe sooner.
Okay, the bridging chapter--appropriately titled "Bridge"--is now in place. It's short, with no clop, but does reveal a bit of plot that I wasn't going to reveal just yet originally. I like the tease it created, though.
"Trixie is going to take you now."
WELL SHIT HOWDY
Trixie is pro seductress. And, you have a tracker.
You gotta wonder how Celestia's going to get Twilight for a pet. I mean, sure, it'll be easy as all hell, when it comes to Celestia, Twilight will sit up and BARK if told, but seeing the process should prove amusing.
So wonder what Celestia has planned other then just switching places between Trixie and Twilight.
With the bridge it looks like it will be some deception aimed at Luna
I skimmed the sex part so just hope i didnt miss any hints/plot points
Okay, this chapter has:
8.000 plus words
A+ grade clop
Drama
Plot
Needless to say, tracked and liked.
Uhm... I don't want to call it realistic, but I think it's as close to a real scene as it can get when you think about magical cartoon unicorns
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It was really descriptive and detailed to a level I rarely see, and I also liked the idea with the pattern wheel, though at first I was a bit confused where she suddenly got a wartenberg pinwheel from before I knew what it really was
The real storyline looks really good as well, and I'm eager to read the next chapter as soon as you're done. Personally I was hoping for a soon confrontation between Trixie and Twilight.
It's as if Trollestia and Molestia were combined into one body, oh my. I hope Twilight can handle it.
Good stuff, Imma keep an eye on this.
HA knew it was her
and Twilight is bound for lots of fun (for the princesses at least)
I've got a feeling...
...that next chapter's gonna be a good chapter.
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ITS ON NOW, BITCH!!!!!!
Ohh, I can see this easily ending in tears for all involved.
Shit's about to get real, aw yeah!
...And now, things start to get what we professionals call, interesting. (munches popcorn)
Maybe it has something to do with the fact that I didn't sleep for almost fourty hours, but already since the moment the princess told Twilight about her new position I've felt bad for her. Like she'd been wronged by the princess. I feel uneasy about this and wonder if everyone will have their fun, causing Twilight to end as the only one hurt. Call it foresight or insomnia, one of those two is the reason.
361558 I will say that I am a big believer in a happy ending. They may not always be realistic, but then, this is a story about a bunch of magical ponies living in a kingdom and having sex with each other.
And, btw, thanks to everyone for their kind comments and encouragement. I really appreciate it.
363254
Yes, I'm a big sucker for happy endings, too. I could write the most terrible things, and in the end there'd be something positive.
Well, ho-lee-sheeit
Shit just got real...Real SEXY
...Holy Shit. You sir are a clop fic genuis.
Cant wait for more
361558
I felt the same way. Almost like Twilight is bieng betrayed by the Princess. Which is really sad considering Twi has always admired Celestia.
Not sure if I want.
Personally, I hope Twilight escapes unscathed. Don't get me wrong I like Twi sex as much as the next guy, I Just don't want to see her get hurt.
twilunestia anyone?29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lz05vb80iO1qkpphbo1_500.png now lets see what happens next chapter.
Of all the things that could have made a reader nervously amused about Pinkie's behavior, there were eight words that drove it home more than anything: "She turned to look directly at the reader." For writing some brilliant Pinkie (lack of) consistency alone, I would give this 5/5, to say nothing of the last conversation of this chapter. Can't wait to read more of where this goes!
Uhul, Princesses X Twilight is inbound !
GAAAHHHHH, high quality writing, and i have to wait another month for it to continue. ARGH
Oh well, epic awesome pawesome story! keep up the good work!
I was sad when this chapter ended. Now I have the wait for the next one so I can be happy.
MY GUSTA PIERCES THE HEAVENS AND GIVES THE GODS MULTIPLES!
Seriously, I'm not really into "clopfiction" but this is pretty intense. Do continue, you have my rapt attention. On all fronts.
400763 Actually, I hope to have the next chapter up sometime next week. The holiday this weekend will mess up my writing schedule a bit, and the fact that I had a catastrophic computer failure (damn you computer!!) last week slowed me down for this chapter. So, after I get caught up on work--I'm a freelancer--I can get back to this story.
Glad you are enjoying it. I'm having fun writing it.
hmmm so Trixie is suppose to befriend all Twi friends (in normal or sexual way) and same goes for Luna x Twi. If they fail then Celestia wins this "bet"?
Rainbow Dash should be a challenge, would be fun if shes the only straight one.
This story is so obscure. I have no idea in which direction it will go, except for clop :P. I love it, and I hope it'll end without broken trust for Twilight. Still have a bad feeling about what the princesses are planning.
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Oh boy that sure is a good chapter and-
“She’s gonna rape Fluttershy!”
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FUCK DA WHAT ?
I-I-I ???
WHAT ????
Dude, I am sure that is not whst is really happening. It is all just a misunderstand.
Right?
Fucking cliffhangers...
I bet they just said it to get Twilight to go back, but it will end up being true in the end
This whole chapter.
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I knew Trixie was going to do something bad (She was talking about hurting someone close to her, and then said Rarity was the subject of the discussion), but holy shit.
EDIT: And Celestia and Luna seem to be playing a rather dangerous game with Twilight. Someone is going to be hurt.
I don't know what I'm feeling right now... Except the urge to see Trixie destroyed. Seriously, I draw the line at rape :s. ... Tenuous though that line may be.
I don't Trixie is going to, don't judge before the deed is done.
But man is this great! Drama! Erotica! Romance! Fantastic! Much love
Best. Chapter. Yet.
Holy shit.
I don't even think I could say anything that would be justified. Just. Yes.
Twilight's actions strike me as rather ooc in some ways.
You could try injecting some angst. I don't usually suggest angst, but even though Twilight's confused, there's a definite lack of freakout.
Twilight freakouts are always fun, especially when she discovers that Tia and Luna are basically just using her and her friends as playthings in their little wager, w/e it is.
I don't understand what's going on...
that's just messed up... Trixie is far too nice in this story to rape her 
The only thing I can imagine is that Luna wanted Twilight to watch. But, I still don't understand why Trixie is seemingly trying to fuck all of Twilight's friends... I mean... rape Fluttershy... seems to be a bit rash. I hope that it's just a misunderstanding, or that Trixie is just going to coax her into having sex without forcing her. Rape Fluttershy
Hang on. Two chapters ago Trixie didn't want Pinkie calling her Mistress. Now she's enforcing it? What'd I miss?
Also, this was excellent. Start to finish, fantastic as a story, as a clopfic and in some places, as a character study.
Shame Fluttershy didn't get in on the action though.