"What could possibly go wrong?"
Deep in the heart of the Everfree lives Ponyville's resident Zebra, Zecora. In all the time she has lived around here not once has she gotten a gift from anypony. This year she expects no different but this year she'll receive the greatest gift of all.
Just a little story I wrote for the holidays.
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Good story. Could you add it to m group holidays.
Huh, That was quick...
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I will do just that...
3703092 I never waist time.
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... Um...
Don't mean to be that guy but...
Waste*
3703100 I now how to spell waste. I'm just tired. its 2am here.
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It's not from a lack of trying it's because you don't feel tired and even if you tried it would take ages to actually fall asleep.
Am I close?
Lovely story mate!
Awww
Needs to be more Zecora fics. Also this was really good and adorable, but I will nit pick the name of Christmas Spirit because the lack of pony Jesus.
3703136 yes you are.
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I know exactly what that's like...
Adorable story!
I think it could have been a bit longer (though I notice that it's incomplete) and it needs a run-through for grammar. Watch your commas and dialogue punctuation. Zecora needs more stories and more shipping, though, so you have my upvote and fav. 
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Thanks, Baddy!
... I never get commas right... sometimes... but not always.
However, I am getting better at dialogue and such.
I totally agree, Zercora needs more shipping!
Aww, this was so cute! Zecora never gets enough love ;_; Only noticed a few grammatical errors, but for the most part, you're pretty solid. Keep on writin' it up!