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Taraji
I'm not a novelist. I often have these marvelous ideas, but don't know how to structure them in a way that makes sense. So expect typos and awkward sentences. xD /)
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Need to be more consistent with what your spelling on Equestria or whatever you're going with. It happens throughout the fic.
Emencely is spelled immensely
Spicies is species.
Anyhow, the story is fine, but the inconsistencies are a tad annoying. Might want to comb through next time and re-read what you write out loud to help you catch common mistakes like these.
The story seems nice. Aside from what's mentioned with some all too common misspellings, I thought it was a nice intro. Won't really be able to say much on this beyond a nice start to what can be a great story. I'll check back once this gets a bit higher on the word count. Best of luck.
Should be experience. Also, you misspelled Equestria at one point. Other than that, I'm excited to see where this is going.
cant wait for more
First off, I like this intro, and look forward to reading the next chapter. However, there were a few spelling errors, which I've corrected below:
What they said.
I've been really getting into female dragon x Spike fics recently. I'm excited for this one.
4901129 Wanna recommend some good ones to me I'm startin to get into it as well
4903452 Well, I've only seen a couple. But one that sticks out is It Takes A Village by determamfidd. It takes awhile to get to everything, but it is amazing!
4903456 lol even after a full year I keep getting pointed back to that story. Got anythin else?
4903476 Not that I can think of off the top of my head.
Someone should make a group for stories like this, just so they're easier to find. There's not very many, so they're hard to come across.
4903533
A sad truth indeed
Thanks for all the comments, everypony!
this is so nicee c:
FINALY!! I've found another spike writer who turns him into a pony
You Sr. Get a follow.
Hmm, seems interesting so far. Carry on!
So far, so good. I look forward to see where this is going.
4899391 Perhaps you could offer your assistance as an editor? Too many great stories are marred be poor grammar (like my own
).
4910032 I already had to abandon A New Dawn for another person due to not having the time to commit. There are many groups dedicated for proofreading and such, places like Looking for Editiors for example is a place one can join, and ask for help on their forums.
I don't have that kind of time to commit to being someone's editor. I got enough stories I go through in my group's skype chat as is. I'm sure he'll be fine and people can note him lists of errors in the meantime if they find anything.
Here's hoping the author can find a good person who can work with them.
4910332 Sadly, most of the editors I know are in the same boat. Between editing my stories, the stories of others, and writing their own, none have time. I suppose I could ask some of my followers if they can help.
4903476 Noticed you were asking for Spike fics, well have some ships and others from my below:
"Spike-centric story recommendation list!"
I Need You To Be Brave Seriously, if you want feels this story has them by the barrels. It's been a while, but I did really enjoy this one.
Lies and Lyres This one is like one of my favorites. It really feels like the most natural thing.
Apple Bloom Gets Pregnant You know what? I actually never got into this ship. It never really felt right to me. But this here? THIS story makes you simply LOVE these two and really gets you invested in the unknowns and challenges they'll be facing. It's got incredibly nice pacing. If you like SpikeBloom, I imagine you'll really enjoy this one.
The Most Absurd Sweetie Belle x Spike Shipfic You Will Ever read Truly one of those stories you wish the guy would turn into a long running series. The story really builds up once Spike gets involved, and it really becomes a story you sort of just "Yeah, totally lives up to its title" and roll with it.
All That Glitters A story that takes you into a world of WTF and makes you wish the author actually put more attention into finishing this amazing story. You'll never read a Spike ship quite like this one... which is a crying shame ;-;
Lawless Love This was just a joyous trip. You have to check this one out. Simply adorable.
The Centerpiece of My Collection+Sequel and if by some miracle you've been reading stories with Spike in it and HAVEN'T read this, well be sure to do yourself the favor and correct that mistake asap. No joke. Best read when you KNOW you won't be getting disturbed by anyone or tend to responsibilities.
Not all are ships but these are the best of the best Spike stories I've bothered to favorite that you you may have missed.
Ah Ain't Got no Ackcent and here's just an incredible of incredible story. Not SPIKE-CENTRIC, however it really is a story I share with everyone I can. Hope you enjoy them at least half as much as I have.
4910434 Great........ now I have several more things on my to read list. CONGRATU-PONY-LATIONS! you made me break 200
falls out laughing several moments later. No seriously thanks these all sound like good reads.
Work on the spacing! Keep going!
This is a very unusual preset, and I really like dragons!
Therefore two bonus points, and an instant like and favorite!
4906088 Mmmm, not quite ;) And thanks!
Couple of issues have cropped up for me. The character should probably have been described earlier plus the mothers aren't described at all, makes it hard to picture what's being read. Few spelling errors here and there such as the words Equestria, immensely and species. There needs to be a lot more spacing otherwise it looks like a text wall. Also,
I think the last line is supposed to be the mother's, yet this makes it seem like Garble is picking her up when you address in the next line that the one being picked up is Dysis.
You need an editor if you don't have one, if you do have one then you need another. If you like, I can try being your editor?
I hope there will be an update soon
4910749 At 575 'Read Later's and over 1k unread chapters in my favorites, I cant see what you're complaining about.
Also, added for Read Later.
When will you update.
Make more
I think this fic was great, please continue!
Mostly the only problems I had with it is the misspellings.
When is the next chapter coming out?!?!?!
When is the next update?